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    Fight, fight, fight…! Chapter 2

    Story written on August 11, 2006 by rorymel.
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    Dana talks to Alice

     

    “Oh shit! What I’m going to tell her now?” Dana thinks in front of Alice’s door. “What the hell, this is for the best, this is for us!” she knocks the door.

     

    Alice opens the door quickly and starts talking almost immediately. “I’m so sorry Dana, i’m sorry, I didn’t mean to…”

     

    “Alice, we need to talk”. Dana enters the apartment forcing Alice to step back.

     

    “What’s wrong baby? You still mad?”

     

    “No, no Alice, it’s not that. We need to talk seriously about… us”.

     

    “About us?” Alice crosses her arms as she gives a concerned/intriguing look to Dana.

     

    “Hon” -playing with her hands trying to explain- “the times we’ve spent together have been the most incredible of my life. Since the beginning it’s been like an amazing adventure, like a rollercoaster …”

     

    “Uh huh?”  Alice arms still crossed.

     

    “But… lately this great feeling have become in something different, in something that i just …can’t take anymore…this has become in a big endless fight. Maybe we didn’t give enough space to each other to breath, to be independent or… I don’t know …

    That’s why I think… -taking a deep breath- …we need a break in this relationship”.

     

    “WHAT?!!” Alice shouts.

     

    “You know, to think, to meditate to… relax?” Dana winces.

     

    Alice is in shock, looking on the floor, one hand on her side the other in her forehead.

     

    “You’ll see we’re going to…”

     

    “Did you talk to Lara about us?” raising her head a little.

     

    “What? I… I…” surprised of Alice’s immediate guess.

     

    “I knew it! I knew it!” Alice says clenching her teeth. “That bitch! I knew she was…and I knew that you…”

     

    “It’s not what you think, she just…”

     

     “Fuck you Dana!” Alice looks at Dana; her eyes full of anger.

     

    “Alice baby, I don’t …”

     

    Get out!

     

    These two words astound Dana, who now is staring at Alice.

     

    “Are you fucking deaf? GET OUT!” Alice goes straight to Dana, takes her arm, pushes her ‘till the entrance, opens the door and kicks her out of her apartment. Finally, she slams the door in Dana’s face.

     

    “Alice, come on! let me explain; Alice!” Dana hits the door. “ALICE!”

     

    “I DON’T WANNA HEAR YOU! GO AWAY!” Alice screams behind the door. Then, runs towards her room, jumps on the bed and starts sobbing.

     

    “ALICE, PLEASE!”  

     

    No answer.

     

    “AL…”- stops calling as she hears the crying- “Fuck!” -she leans her forehead against the door. With nothing else to do and with a terrible guilt in her heart, she leaves.

     

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    1. What a better take on the “breakup” i’m glad Alice wasnt all ooooomyyygooddd i cant liveeeee without you! So hooray for kicking Dana out! but… i hope they work it out lol of course and i agree with Laugh and Tan Lara needs to run off to Paris :) Great job Ror keep it coming!

    2. Whoa, Alice does have some strength after all! I mean, she did on the show to until IC turned her into a druggie to erase the emotional pain, if that makes sense. Anyways, you doing a great job so I hope that you continue this soon! Awsome update, btw:)

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