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Road to Joy
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"She is such a goddamn, hypocritical, self-centered, cold, son of a bitch!" Alice yelled out in frustration as she entered an empty bedroom in Tom’s house, followed soon after by a rather weary looking Shane. The blonde clenched her fists and closed her eyes, groaning loudly as she recalled Dana’s very recent mood change. "For fuck’s sake, why do I have to like her so much?!"
"Because you like a challenge?" Shane offered, stepping back when all she received in reply was a cold glare. "My bad. Maybe you should talk to her?"
"Talk to Dana?" Alice repeated sarcastically, looking at Shane as if she were insane. "I’m sorry but did you not see Dana’s little stubborn turn out there? She doesn’t talk, she simply gets all antsy and defensive. No, we need something a little more… effective."
"Why do I not like the sound of this?" Shane asked skeptically, the uneasiness in her stomach becoming more apparent as Alice took out a hundred from her pocket and waved it at Shane, a giant smirk plastered on her face. "Alice no. I’m not sleeping with you."
"Eww Shane!" The smirk on Alice’s face was quickly replaced by a frown of utter disgust as the blonde shook her head to try and loose the images that had come running to her mind at Shane’s words. "Visual. Yuck. Trust me Shane, I don’t think I will ever like anyone enough to sleep with you, let alone pay you for it."
"I’ll have you know many people would pay for my… services," Shane replied defensively, causing Alice to exhale in exasperation. "Let’s change the subject. What’s the hundred dollars for?"
"I want to find out if I’m cruising down a highway or running head first into a dead end here," Alice explained matter-of-factly. "I want her to think we’re having a relationship, and I want to know if she gets jealous over it. So the hundred dollars is sort of an incentive for you to stay around…"
"As your girlfriend…" Shane assumed. She looked at Alice expectantly and the blonde shrugged before nodding reluctantly. "You do realise that this pretend girlfriend business will do absolutely nothing to help your situation, right? Dana will think you’re interested in me and not her, and she’ll keep her jealousy a secret, that is if she does like you romantically, and then you’ll just get more frustrated and have to pay me more money to stay around. It’s not worth it Al."
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i can’t believe you seriously left it like that and we wont get an installment for awhile. i have gotten so sucked into this story so please dont be too long.
Loved it!!!! I can never get enough of the tension between the two of them. I was squealing in delight when the bottle landed on Alice. You put the biggest smile on my face! And yes, Dana loves Alice. Alice and Dana sitting in a tree, K-I-S… Ok, I stop now, before I make a fool out of myself (if I haven’t done that already). I’m all content…I can wait for a couple of weeks for the next update (my new mantra, “I have patience…I can wait..I have patience…”). :D
That was so much fun. I loved Alice and Shane at the party. The things we do for our best friends… lol I also loved the kiss between Alice and Dana, and Dana’s reaction to Lara at the end. So much freaking fun…
Good golly woman!! This update… damn. It was… seriously I can’t even find a word. It was good! I cannot wait for the update =D *prays that you update soon*
spin the bottle – what a classic! I loved the update and there’s no need to feel uncertain about it – it was fab (as usual!) I like the Shane/Lara pairing, how should I put that… Shara? Lane? hmmm… but it’s an original choice and of course I love the Danish, it’s great to see that the hate is turning to the realisation of attraction – and it’s hot! I know how frustrating it is when life gets in the way of updates and writing and stuff but still I can’t wait till the next update!
It was the toast? how funny! I loved the spin the bottle scenario….great stuff! and, I have to admit….Lara and Shane? not a bad idea. I think you really got the voice of the characters down pat…which is cool, since they are in such different positions than on the show…well, except for Alice, technically, who is still a writer….but still…LOVED it! And looking forward to more!
*sigh* I dont think I have smiled like this in a long time. You werent sure about this chapter? Are you SERIOUS!? I got a Shalice make out, and a pretty hot Danish make out! It was so totally perfect!! I really like the idea of Shane and Lara too, by the way. Nice little twist, and I could actually picture it pretty well! :-) I’m sad that you are making us wait for a few weeks for a new chapter, but I understand that real life sometimes happens. That doesnt mean that I’m not completely devestated by it though. But, at the same time, you did treat us to 3 updates in one week, so I can’t complain too much! Dana’s last line was a perfect note to end it on until you can update again! Don’t forget about us, because I would be very sad if you left us for too long! Great job babe! Good luck with real life, and come back to us ASAP!! :-P
aw, i loved it! that was a great chapter! ok, i can end the night w/ a smile. :)
I totally agree with Poopy-Sh*t – you’re crazy to be uncertain about this chapter! I thought it was great – I especially liked how you portrayed the Shalice make-out session (as hot, but 100% platonic). I totally understand about real life intervening with writing – though obviously I’m crushed that I won’t be getting my RtJ fix for a few weeks! But, I’m glad this chapter ended on such a high note for Danish – though I imagine there will be many more misunderstandings to come between them in your next update. Thanks for another great chapter – hopefully it won’t be too long before we see you again!
so cute…i love it!!! hope you write more chapters of this story after you’re done with your busyness…
Oh man…that was so awesome! I am grinning like a fucking idiot right now! Thanks for this. You are crazy though. This was an excellent update. I am gonna miss this story so don’t be gone too long! Oh hell. I am just gonna go re-read it now! This was just awesome.
spin the bottle was an excellent choice
Lol awwwwwwww finally!!! A kiss! You think i could take a break from this story for 4 or 5 chapters?! no way…i’ll just have to deal with it. but i love the way it’s going now, can’t wait to see what happens next. its kind of weird to imagine lara and shane in my head..but possible. hmmm
lol what a great chapter, loved the spin the bottle scene. Thanks for the update!
very nice! it’s always a good time when drunk dykes start playing spin the bottle. ahh the memories! : ) it’s so great how stubborn al and dane are. it makes me laugh. looking forward to the next post.
Oh man, that was too funny. Nothing like a good game off spin the bottle to get your point across! You’re leaving us for two weeks which leaves me with reading you’re story over and over again untill you get back! This was great though and I’ll be looking forward to seeing your name again soon! See ya!
Man, Shane just had to choose that moment to get sick didn’t she. Well Danish made out regardless, so I’m happy. But a whole week before another post? Talk about torture,lol. Still, loved this chapter and I’m anxiously awaiting the next!
Why are you being so critical of yourself – it was a great chapter which had me laughing my head off – hope you get bored with whatever you are leaving us to do and update again soon. How will I cope without my ‘fix’ of Road to Joy??