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Fight, fight, fight…! Chapter 5
Dana can’t believe what her eyes are seeing, Alice, HER Alice, is there, hotter than ever but being touched by hands that are not hers.
The three of them watch as Gaby puts now her arm around Alice’s waist, pulling her closer and whispering something in her ear, causing Alice to giggle.
Dana’s face is red; she can feel the anger slowly building up in her body.
Shane and Carmen look at each other; then Carmen gestures Shane for her to talk. She clears her throat to call Dana’s attention.
“Dane, hey, uhm… It’d be a good idea if you and Alice talk…”
“Yes, that’s what we’re going to do”-not looking at her in any moment, Dana jumps up and heads towards Alice.
“…tomorrow.” Shane says, basically, to herself.
Dana is behind Alice; she takes a deep breath, trying to calm her anger, and pokes Alice’s shoulder.
“Alice, I need to talk to you”
Alice turns, see Dana and rolls her eyes. “I’m busy now, ok?” her tone is cold.
“Alice, please, there’s something important we need to discuss” She clenches her teeth and tries to look only at Alice.
Alice is about to talk again when she’s stopped by Gaby’s words.
“She told you she’s busy darling so… get lost …bye-bye” Gaby says with a smirk and waving her hand mockingly.
Dana tries really hard to ignore Gaby; she closes her eyes and breaths hard and slow.
“Alice, come oooon, pleeease…”
“Hey, are you stupid or what? I told you to leave us alone” Gaby hits Dana’s shoulder.
“Fuck you bitch!” Dana responds as she pushes Gaby with both hands.
Gaby slaps Dana:“Bitch!”
Dana’s mouth is wide open. “Oh no you didn’t!”
Unable to control herself anymore, Dana jumps Gaby with such a force that both women end up hitting a table.
“Let go of me lunatic!” Gaby tries to free herself and with all the strength she got pushes Dana, this time landing up in the counter.
Everybody is looking at the fight, some of them surprised others laughing. Alice is just standing there, her brain not processing yet what her eyes see. Something similar occurs to Carmen and Shane.
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(29 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
awwww good job rory! and i dont know what your talking about your english is perfectly fine :) this was a great story i hope you grace with another danish soon :)
oh no you didn’t! loved that line. Great update rory it was very funny and yeah they actually talk! great fight scene too. pls update soon
Congratulations on this amazing story! It’s too bad that it’s over, but I thought that it was well constructed and don’t worry about the English, you did a great job with the dialogue too:) Well, I hope that you start another one soon,but again this was awsome!
How about an epilogue haha. I would have loved to see this fight on the the screen lol.
I love it you have a great story here please post a new one soon