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Lucky in Love (Chapter 3)
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The papers were bound together with a huge black legal clip and flagged in about twenty places for her signature. They landed in front of Alice with a dull thump. It was a moment she’d been avoiding for the better part of the week.
“You should read them first, baby,” Dana said. “It’s all pretty straight forward stuff, but if you have any questions, let me know. The notary will be here pretty soon.”
Alice flipped through the documents in bewilderment. She hadn’t expected merging their assets to be such a complex thing. In fact, she hadn’t thought much about it at all until Dana brought it up a couple of weeks ago. Alice’s inventory of worldly goods was fairly uncomplicated. She had her car, which she now owned more than she owed. Barely. A checking account with a couple of grand in it at any given moment, a savings account with about five hundred in it, a couple of major credit cards that were actually paid off and, thanks to her Dad, about $15,000 in some stock portfolio she didn’t really understand. Merging her life with Dana’s meant adding Dana to car title and some bank accounts.
On some level, she’d always known that Dana had money, but she’d never really given it much thought either. Now it was right in front of her, presented with painstaking organization. Dana owned the condo outright and was adding Alice to the title, she owned the car outright and was adding Alice to that. She had a personal banker with premier checking and savings accounts, platinum cards, a broker who handled her investment portfolios, a family trust, retirement accounts, insurance policies, she, herself, was a limited liability corporation, whatever the hell that was, and she was making Al joint this and co that on everything. It was a tiny bit overwhelming.
“Dane, are you sure you want to do this?”
“For the last time,” Dana smiled as she nodded, “yes, I want to do this. Yes, I’ve thought about it carefully. And, yes, I know it’s easier to do than undo.” She took Alice’s hand in hers. “Good thing I’ll never have to, huh?” She kissed Alice’s rings. “Relax, baby, my parents even agree that this is the right thing to do.”
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That was hot! I loved the last paragraph … perhaps because I’m ridiculously in love with Alice & Dana.
wow this story is fantastic – really well written (I totally agree with The PIneapple Head – I’m a total sucker for Alice and Dana!) Can’t wait for your next update, there’s great potential for all the characters :)
This is going to be your take on S3? I like it how Shane and Jenny kicked Max out of the house. I’m really interested to see how LaRena will develop. I’m getting into them. :D And Tina still loves Bette? Ofcourse I loved the Danish scene at the ending. That small detail of Alice’s earlobe as a sign of her arousal…so f*cking cute! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
Yay, Max is out of the picture! I don’t know why, but I just always kinda found him, or her a little,,, I don’t know. I’m glad that you got rid of ‘it’ though, lol. And as for the Danish, hot as always, so please post soon!
Wonderful – more please.
Ha! Neh, that’s what that asshole, Max,whom I like to call ‘it’, gets . . . his ugly ass . . . Shane was waaaaay to easy on ‘it’ . . . Let that had been me, boy, his ass would’ve got got that night!! Then he hit my girl, Jenny?! . . . Ah hell nah . . . don’t nobody fuck wit’ my girls, Shane and Jenny . . . or Carmen . . . or Bette . . . or Alice . . . okay, so don’t nobody fuck wit none of my ‘L’ word girls . . . well, you can have Tina. LMFAO!!! (Sorry, I got a little hot-headed there . . .That was directed towards Max(it) . . . at least for now =D) Anyways, you’re doin’ a fantastic job, Baby-girl! Keep it up and post soon which means NOW!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p . . . HOLLA . . .
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh i love this story! Another great part and the Max part was totally believable! Don’t like him much. More soon please :)
yuss !! i loved the fact max bragged about kicking shanes ass then she came in and kicked his ! lol i’d love to see him actually get what he deserves! will carmen come back and save shane?! she has to plz plz plz !! great story tho update asap x x x
:) I could totally picture Alice’s look like you described it in the last sentence. lol. Sexy indeed. Love it!
Thanks for posting…Bette is getting her life back on track…what will Tina do if she moves on? I can’t for the life of me see what she saw in Henry…but then again it could have been Jimmy from around the corner and I would feel the same way….lol…but Henry is an ASS. This is getting good…please post soon.