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    Lucky in Love (Chapter 5)

    Story written on August 23, 2006 by SammysGirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62182
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    Things just keep getting hotter when Alice and Dana “stock up,” Carmen tells Jenny what happened with Shane, Bette decides to trust Tina and Lara asks Helena out on a “real date.” (Oh, and Shane jumps to the wrong conclusion.)

    As Alice worked the room at the Los Angeles Magazine reception for their annual “Best of” issue, Dana couldn’t take her eyes off her. Several people approached before she got more than twenty-five feet past the door and Dana was caught in the kind of chat that is indigenous to these affairs. At that moment, however, she was so mesmerized by Alice and the way she entertained the crowd around her, that Dana was surprised she could string a coherent sentence together.

    Across the room, Alice knew the moment Dana walked in, a vision in her slate gray Donna Karan suit. She felt Dana’s eyes on her, and knew she would lose her mind completely if she met her gaze. Instead, Al tugged at her earlobe unconsciously while consciously fidgeting with her glasses for Dana’s benefit. When she finally did steal a glance, she saw Dana looking past the person she was speaking with, directly to her. They both forced themselves to look away. It was ten very long minutes before they found their way to each other.

    “Hey hot stuff,” Alice said as she kissed Dana.

    “Hi baby. You look amazing.” Al was wearing a vintage Dianne von Furstenberg wrap dress.

    “You like? It’s new,” Alice did a little twirl in response to Dana’s compliment. “Well, not new…”

    “I know sweetheart,” Dana giggled. “I was there when you bought it.”

    “I want you so bad right now,” Alice whispered, expecting Dana to blush.

    “Not as much as I want you,” Dana murmured back. “How soon can we get out of here?”

    Helena strolled into The Planet at the end of the dinner rush to meet Lara, as had become their custom. The easy rapport they’d shared for months had become a trifle stilted in recent days as they both struggled with their evolving feelings, all the while wondering what the other was thinking.

    “You’re early,” Lara said through her warm smile.

    “I don’t mind waiting, darling.” Helena said and gave her a chaste peck. “I’m thinking Bombay Café?”

    “I haven’t been there in forever.” Lara wanted to say more, but thought better of it. “I need a few minutes.”

    “Take your time. I’ll say hello to Bette.” She nodded towards the lonely figure, her supper in front of her, barely touched.

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    2. hey you! :) So we met Bob, lol. I liked him, hee. And Dana obviously too. ;)That was a very sweet & sexy scene there. Yay for Helena and Lara too!Can’t wait for the next part..one of your many fans here..

    3. oh no what is shane going to do now she really need to learn how to talk to people about things can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon great update

    4. Again, another chapter packed full with relational tidbits; just enough to keep the reader on edge. As a writer, I applaud you, as a reader, I ask for more. Oh, before I post this comment, I have to add that, while I am NOT a Jenny fan, you do a wonderful job at making her palatable– thank you for that!

    6. Okay Sammy I’ll be patient…it is nice to see them talking again…is Helena the new Yoda…lol…it was nice of Tina to offe to be there for Bette. Please post soon.

    7. Hey Girl! Ok, so I loves this chapter, and the chapter before it that I never commented on for some reason. Why I read some stories and forget to comment, I have no idea. You’re writing is amazing, and I’m really excited to see what else happens! :-) BTW, loved the Danish sex (then again, who doesnt), and I totally dig the Helena/Lara thing! Great job!

    9. Excellent job! Sorry for not commenting sooner, but I just got back in town. I Finally got caught up with this fic now. Anyway…great job. I’m really enjoying it. My favorite parts are the Danish ones. I’m obssessed. I am very suprised that I am actually very interested in this Lara and Helena thing. I can’t wait for more. I’m hoping that you’ll pick up the Danish part right where you left off. :)

    10. Thanks for this great update! And since I am a big Danish fan that’s my favorite part of the story but you got me interested in the Lara Helena bit as well. Hope you can keep it up and am looking forward to the next chapter.

    11. Thanks for the (super hot) Danish scenes! Wait, thanks for the story in general:) It was good to see Carmen offer insight to the whole Sharmen conflict and hopefully it’ll be resolved. Either way, love this story and can’t wait for the next chap!

    12. I so much adore the chemistry between Al and Dana in this story. Nice beginning of this chapter. And that was one hot little scene with the two of them. Can’t wait to hear more about LaRena’s date. They really have much potential. And Shane’s reaction to being Jenny and Carmen talking…will she end up badly?

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