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    “Happy Birthday babe…” Bette handed the present to Tina, leaning over to gently kiss her girlfriends lips, she was eagerly anticipating the look on Tina’s face, waiting for the reaction to the painting that had taken weeks to arrange in order for it to be ready for Tina’s birthday.

     

    It was a very unique piece of art that Bette had immediately been taken with, she just knew Tina would love it too.

     

    Tina slowly unwrapped the final present, the large flat gift, the gold paper shining against the morning sunlight shining into their room, the crepe golden ribbon strewn across the bed, along with all the other scraps of paper from her other presents that Bette had bought for her. The perfume, the bracelet, the cd’s, and the mug.

     

    Tina brought the paper back, revealing the present, her eyes scanned the painting, her face trying to give the right reaction to what she was seeing, she took in the colours, the technique, the… she couldn’t quite put her finger on it…

     

    Bette looked at Tina, her patience at wanting to know what Tina thought wearing thin, “well… what do you think?”

     

    Tina took a deep breath, she looked at Bette smiling, “I really, really love it, it’s amazing, thank you baby…”

     

    Bette looked into Tina’s face, knowing better, “you hate it don’t you?”

     

    Tina looked down at the painting; it was the most ugliest, uninspiring painting she had ever seen. What did all those splodges of paint mean, were they meant to signify something, because if they were, she really didn’t have the foggiest what it was. She looked back to Bette, “no, really… I love it…”

     

    “Tina… I know you’re lying…”

     

    Tina thought for a moment, not wanting to show her ignorance to the connoisseur of Art, but not really knowing what she was looking at, “What is it…?” Tina said embarrassed.

     

    Bette rolled her eyes, she had really thought Tina would love it, she looked downward, disappointed that the present she had bought had not gone down as well as she’d hoped.

     

    Tina noticed the disappointment, she felt bad now but she really didn’t know what the painting was of, she began her tactic of making it right, she snuggled close to Bette, wrapping her arm around her, whispering into her ear, “baby, thank you for my presents…, but I do… really…, really… love my Jennifer Beals mug…”

     

     

     

     

    Comments

    1. Well Happy Birthday. We got a presrnt also – another chapter. Glad to see you are gonna continue with adoring eyes. That was awesome. Thanks for taking the time.

    2. Now… How come it’s YOUR birthday, and you’re the one giving us a present?… Could you tell me where I can find one of those JB mugs?… Very funny sit’ Jo, I love how you make them appear like anybody else (everyone has at least once in his/her life given the ‘wrong’ gift), but then again with this typical Jo’s touch that makes our couple so very special! Thanks and happy birthday again!

    3. Haven’t read the story yet, but wanted to rush to say: JOYEUX ANNIVERSAIRE JO!!!!!!!! How old? (you dont have to answer that… Please?) Ok, on with the story…

    4. Hey Jo, Happy Birthday and being linked to your favorite lady. Poor Bette trying to not show her disappointment over Tina’s reaction. Poor Tina for not knowing how to handle the painting situation.

    5. Oh man. I am such a bad liar. I could really see myself in Tina’s shoes. lol I’m so glad you’re continuing “Those Adoring Eyes.” Happy birthday and all that fun stuff!

    6. happy birthday to you! i hope you get a great day and wonderful presents! this was so funny, and thanks for the wonderful new that you will continue with “those adoring eyes”. Best wishes to yo!

    7. Happy Birthday to ya! Would it be possible to gain another chapter in which Bette explains the meaning of all those “splodges of paint”? Only after you have properly celebrated, of course. Have a good’n!

    8. Happy birthday Jo….thanks for the present to us with another post. It should be the other way around :o)) Maybe a follow up to this one, so Tina can say a proper thank you to Bette WINK WINK.

    9. WE SHARE THE SAME BIRTHDAY!!! I am still grinning knowing you and I have the same birthday…I adore your writing! Have a fabulous day today!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

    10. Happy Birthday, Jo. Thank you for all the wonderful stories that you have written and continue to write. You bring such emotion to each story that it keeps me wanting more. Your an awesome writer ! I hope you birthday is as wonderful as you.

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