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The Long and Winding Road – chp 45
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The Long and Winding Road – chp 45
Tina took the bags from the car and smiled again at the items she and Helena had found. Tonight was the night when they left Danny with his three adoring Aunt’s and went on a date together.
Bette had insisted on selecting the restaurant and they were going to treat it like a proper date. Bette was going to get changed at Shane’s and arrive at 7:30 for Tina.
Tina was excited – she really felt that in the last few days they had reached a new level of understanding. Since Bette had read her journal they had really started to open out to one another and they were getting closer.
Tonight also was going to be significant because Tina had told Bette that if she was horny when they got home she wanted Bette to hold her while she masturbated.
“Hey there “
Tina walked in and grinned – Alice was sitting on the floor holding Danny – Bette was watching her from the sofa and grinning.
“Since when does a 7:30 babysitting appointment mean that you skip work and turn up at 4pm ? “
“Since when Bette invited me over to spend time with my Godson “
Alice was beaming as she held Daniel
Tina went into the bedroom with the bags and returned and kissed Bette on the brow
“Missed you “
“How was Helena ? “
“Fine – she sends her love and promises that she will take care of Danny and the other two big kids in her care – she’s bringing some movies over “
“We could always watch some Porn “ Alice suggested
“Alice — you are not getting stoned or drunk when looking after our son and you are not watching porn “ Bette warned .
“No Bette – she can do any of those things “
“SHE CAN ? “ Alice and Bette exclaimed together.
“Yes – as long as she realises that if we catch her it will be the first and last time she cares for her Godson “
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Video camera – $900, Diaper- $1.00 the price of Danny peeing in Alice’s face ? PRICELESS! (LOL) I agree with Jackiee1’s comment, how do you write 3 stories so brilliantly ? You are DEFINATELY an exceptional talent and we are all very fortunate that you write these stories for us. IC isn’t giving us what we need in a story line, so I read these stories to continue my love for these characters. Thanks Ally. You are PRICELESS!!!
Beautiful! You are such a romantic writer. Aww, bless! The gesture from Daniel to his baby sisters and his blonde mommy was priceless.
incredible, B&T need this time together! and the Dani’s presents was so sweet!
the gifts from danny was such a cute touch…love B&T closeness and love for each other
AllyE that was wonderful and so loving. Love is so beautiful, isn’t it. And on our girls love is absolutely radiant. Now please keep them together with no more high drama. thanks.
This is awesome and beautiful, love it. Alice is so funny. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Ally, you know I love all of your stories. But, can a sista get a hit of the President and her former Press Secretary???? I’m feening!
Love it. I’m so Happy Tina came back and Told Bette how she really feels about Bette. I’m glad they’re communicating about their feelings. Dan is sooo cute. Giving presents already. I need to read more B&T romance. Fics like these make me happy. And Dan peeing on Al was priceless.
..about time! thye desperately need this and just enjoy themselves..by the way…the bangle is a classic..hope u feel it too
Amazing
I really don’t know how you do 3 stories so brilliantly. You have exceptional talent, thanks for the entertainment
mmmmmmmm that was very very nice….well done Ally…
Great chapter, thanks Ally! I’m sensing some NC-17, pleeeaaase don’t disappoint… *cute little pout* The Dan-peeing-on-Alice’s-face was priceless, thanks for that little extra!
Do I have to beg to get a post with the hot President and the former Press Sec.???? That story is addictive, so it’s your own fault!!!! LOL.
Thanks for the birthday message my dear friend. Your friendship is very special to me. This was a great chapter. I laughed like crazy when little Danny peed on Alice because that can and does happen. Ally, you are still my favorite author on this site. Yes, I admit it mate—-I am biased, but I don’t care.
Great chapter…funny and warm hearted. The scene with Alice experiencing infantile golden showers was classic. Bette saying that baby Daniel doesn’t have motives for his actions b/c he is only two weeks old was so on point. You can feel the love between B & T. Their framily is so caring. I loved it.
Wow…this was a wonderful chapter. Isn’t Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory the best movie ever! Well at least top 5. They needed that date…the night isn’t over yet right? Please post soon.
ALLY, You are an Amazing writer. This Chapter was so Heart Felt. Thank you
Please do not let season 3 ruin your love for B&T. You write them so well and I look forward to your loving stories. I fear that some of that season will rub off and mess up their loving relationship that you put your heart and soul into. Thank you for giving us the time and effort, and the love that you put into these stories.
Glad to see that they opened some channels of communication. I hope they can be more pro-active in this and that Helena’s belief that they know how to love and respect each other is justified. It was the respect that I found lacking in Tina’s earlier treatment of Bette. Love without respect is no love at all. Wish they hadn’t circumcized the kid, though.
very sweet. happy to see that your B&T managed to cross the henry problem. agree with hansen. the L Wing is such an addictive story. am looking forward to reading the next chapter.
As soon as Alice started asking about the circumcision I knew what was going to happen next. LOL! I’m glad the girls watched the original Willy Wonka. I saw the new one last weekend and couldn’t believe I had wasted my time watching it.
Just wanted to join the crowd… L WING, please… You ‘know’ how much I love it! *wink*
Oh wow. So lovely! Thanks Ally! Alice was hilarious :))
The whole chapter was so beautiful. Love like that is hard to find and when you do you try to keep it anyway you can. Thanks god for friends like the girls. Thanks so much for Danny, he gave Alice a good facial. thanks
OOOO POST SOON…….
ally you are the maestro of fan fiction and still my numero uno fav author .absolutly gifted at tacklin three stories at same timepls post soon