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As Sure As The Sun
As Sure As The Sun
I remember pieces of things. I remember a lot of erotic things. Very intense things. All with one person. A woman. I suspect that I am gay. Which is fine. Except what if I’m straight? They tell me that I have a son. And I don’t remember being with a man…but I do remember highschool biogolgy and I know what it takes to make a baby. I have a son but I don’t remember giving birth to him. I remember getting shot. That white hot burning feeling…then cold…then nothing.
They tell me that I have visitor and I’m tired and all I want to do is sleep. I don’t know my son’s name. I don’t have a picture to his face. I remember a lot of sexual things…all with this woman. The woman from deep sleep dreams…she is beautiful thin…strong…funny…we make love a lot. This is all very complex. I have a son and I am in love with a woman…I have a bullet hole on my left breast. I wonder what kind of life did I lead?
Jimmie tells me that I need rest. He is not a doctor and he doesn’t feel like a friend. I asked him two days ago when I could see my son…I told him maybe he would trigger something. He tells me soon. He gives me that there, there pat on my shoulder….and I am so tired so I sleep some more….and I do sleep but I dream more…and the dreams are always the same…that woman…my phantom lover…she has green eyes and a motorcycle….
As Sure As The Sun
CH 1
So now that everybody’s gone
You see no change has come
In every song you’ve ever sung
You find the words were wrong….
“Can I see her now?” I asked
“Sure Shane…go on in…” Jimmie says
I walk into her room and it’ more like an atrium. The room is bathed in light. White walls…tall glass ceiling…Sky…… light to see the world. You look straight up and see the scaffolding…you look closer and see it’s just a simulation of the sky…you wonder just what kind of private firm was this? You pause, your woman is here alive….you still can’t believe it.
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(17 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
i really like your style writing… its very detailed and paints a very nice picture. yand your imaginations aint to bad niether
Stll in awe that Carmen is alive. Shane an ‘agent’? Nice twist. Luv this story. Can’t wait to see what hell Shane & Carmen will fall into w/ their new assignment.
You really know how to twist and turn a story completely around. That you have been doing all the time with this story and that’s the glory of it. You never know what’s happening next and when you think you do, it turns out you’re wrong. It’s so amazing, cause I can’t get enough of this story.
Holy crap! I just caught up on the last couple of parts because I have been away for the past few days, and I must say it was a real shocker! I honestly thought she was gone for good, but this is absolutely awesome. I love the way your imagination works. You keep coming up with all this stuff. You’re stories are anything but boring or repetitive, and that’s why I love them! Keep it up.
Great update, you are such an awesome writer, can’t wait for the next post
Yay for living Carmen! Love this update, you’ve definately taken this story through many twists and turns, and I love every one of them. Hope to see more soon.
Yay for living Carmen! Love this update, you’ve definately taken this story through many twists and turns, and I love every one of them. Hope to see more soon.
I dont understand how this story gets even better when I dont think it is possible!! Love it!