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A Different Time, The Same Place – Ch. 9
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"What the fuck are you two doing!?!" Shane screamed.
Both women jumped apart and began fighting over the same towel.
"Lara and a fucking camera crew are on their way up here right now! Jesus Christ." Shane stormed back out as the two women ran around frantically, trying to find clothes.
"Fuck…how do I explain myself…all I have is my fucking swimming suit and your T-shirt!" Alice looked to Dana for some help, but Dana was just as flustered.
"Oh Christ." Shane huffed as she started stripping down to her underwear. Dana and Alice just looked at her like she had grown a third head.
"Ummm…Shane, I don’t think that you getting naked as well is going to help make us look any better…"
"Dana shut the fuck up. Al, come on. I came up here to get you so we could go swimming…like we talked about…okay???" Shane waited for Alice and Dana to catch on.
"Swimming…but Shane…oh fuck! Right. Swimming. Because that’s what we had planned on last night…right…so off we go then…to swim. Dana…"Alice turned to look at the brunette for the first time since Shane broke up their sexcapade. Both women tried to choke down the heat they felt return from just that simple look. "I guess I’ll see you around?" There was a slight crack in her voice.
"Ummm…yeah. Definitely. Have fun swimming…" Dana watched as Alice nodded her head, never taking her eyes off of her, and then finally turned to leave with Shane.
Dana didn’t move until the door to her room was finally closed and then began to get ready for her interview. As she took her shower, memories of the morning came flooding back. She leaned her head against the wall and tried to let the heat clear the Alice induced fog she seemed to be surrounded by. ‘What the fuck and I going to do?’ She wondered. She finally finished her shower and had just got dressed when Lara came staggering through the door.
"Oh baby…I am so sorry about last night…man I feel like shit…I think I need a nap." Lara flopped face first onto Dana’s bed and groaned.
"Lara, you can’t be here like this! I have an interview and they are going to be airing it on T.V.! I can’t have you laying there with a fucking hangover." Dana hadn’t meant to sound so cold, but she was frustrated with her situation and didn’t have time to talk to someone about it. And on top of that, her "girl friend" looked and smelled like hell.
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Great chapter Suzie, leave it up to Shane to be the best friend in the world, stripping down for you, covering for you! I can see the shitinthecloset33 influence already. Keep it up and keep those chapters coming please!
You under estimate yourself my friend, this chap was just as good as the rest! I’m glad you and the wife are setlling in, I’ve felt the need to christen every room in the house, just for good luck ya know :P hehe Keep Writing, can’t wait til you post again xx
man poor alice, that’s really gotta hurt. i wish dana would juts fix this and be with alice but it’s never that easy is it? great update, i can’t wait to see what happens next, please post soon love! :)
Great job. I loved the chapter. I can’t wait to see what you have in store.
Great Love IT…I have successfully got through another day at work!!!Can’t wait to see what happens next!
yay! :hugs: filler shimmmmerler! yes im still down that theres no happy danish ACTION even tho the shower part was almost ok… still SHANE CAME IN which i loved by the way lol I think its great that no matter how tired u are or how fast u wrote this or etc regardless it still comes out fantastic! u smart woman u lol I really canttt wait till Lara says peace out to Dana cuz she cant handle Dana’s longing to be with Alice once again AND i really want, wish Alice would find some strengh a bit cuz it breaks my lil ole heart to see her just suffering 24/7 but i know in the end it’ll be great cuz helloooo look whos writting it? lol tnx for the update!!! post soon plz
poor alice. glad the interviewer put dana on the spot!
So, Lara wasn’t at the door after all. I didn’t see that one coming, but hey ,I guess twists and turns are just part of the fun, right? I feel so bad for Alice right now, and the way this chap ended made me sad which is way you need to post soon:) Still, awsome update!
Marina can always make a sudden appareance…that is what she will be doing in S4 (wait, we did get to see her in S1..ah well, I’m nota big fan of hers and I’m glad she doesn’t exist in your fic :D). Lol @Shane stripping down for saving their asses. I need some friends like that… I hate Dana for being all over Lara in this chapter at the end. But hey, that’s what alcohol does to a person… (I have this theory, the more you drink, the less attractive a person looks like in borad daylight the next morning…but thisonly counts for the one night standers ofcourse). I loved the update..just bring these two girls back together, will you! :P
I’m glad Lara wasn’t at the door. I’m not quite ready for everything to hit the fan. Shane stripping down was priceless. Nice update!
Fantastic. Loved it all even if there wasn’t too many lovey-dovey moments (I can only hope you’ll make up for that twofold down the track :P) Hope you comment soon,I really love this fic.
And, which part, exactly, was the filler? (Wait, maybe that’s any part when Alice and Dana aren’t together as a couple already.) Anyway, this is funny, angsty, satisfying (in an unsatisfying way that’s oh, so good) update. So get over yourself and post again soon!
Very good baby girl!!!! Keep up the good work,and this time dont take forever posting again (teasing) Good job!!!!!!!!! :)
wow I’m so glad it wasn’t Lara at the door… classic Shane – so funny! Poor Alice :( I hope Al and Dane make it up soon and get it on already! lol, great work suzieb :)
If this is what you can produce when it it only a ‘filler’ and you’re ‘tired’ – I really look forward to one when you are wide awake and really concentrating as it will be worthy of major prize – keep writing whether you are tired or pissed as it’s brilliant either way.
i love the tension between alice and dana. i just love them as a couple. p.s. you need to ditch lara quick lol.
Ok right so I’m so sure you are so full of so much shit, what was wrong with this chapter? Nothing and you’re full of it B so full of it your organs are drowning in poop…not like Poopy-Sh*t poop though, I meant you’re full of the bullshit you’re full of not full of the person with the same name as shit….huh? Ok anyway I loved it and I wish you would have continued that shower scene (you lied to me btw, you told me Lara was at the door you deceitful woman you) Loved that Shane stripped down classic AlShaDane it’s a shame we’ll be missing out this coming season but I guess there’s always shitinthecloset33 to look forward to. Post soon!
Great chapter, all though I’m frustrated as hell that these two just can’t seem to work it out! Damn that soup chef!! You better get them together soon, or I might have to give up on you Suzie! :-P JK. Seriously though, loved this chapter! Loved the AlShaDane in it! And I love you!! Ha ha. Update soon please babe!
Filler my backside!! You Lie! It was a great chapter, well except for the Lara shaped bump in the road. Keep it coming xx