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A Thin Line – Chpt 37
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Previously
Peppering my face with tiny kisses, Bette suggested, “Why don’t we take a nap before dinner?”
“To get you rested for your surprise?” I jested.
“You mean the flowers weren’t my surprise?” Bette asked in disbelief.
“Not even close, Darling,” I whispered and grinned.
“Hmm. You certainly have me intrigued,” she responded.
I laughed. “Well, I should hope so.”
“Speaking of intriguing, will you wear something sexy for me tonight at dinner?” Bette requested, whispering. “Something that provides a lot of scenery when I’m not gazing into your beautiful eyes? Something that reveals a lot of skin, and accentuates your nipples?”
“Mischievous!” I laughed. “You are absolutely, incorrigibly mischievous!”
“Guilty, as charged,” Bette said.
Chapter 37
The evening was filled with magic and enchantment.
We stood on the deck, in the moonlight, under the stars that seemed to twinkle, just for us, in the brilliant night sky. Helena and I looked out over the coastline, enjoying the sound of the waves crashing against the shore.
We sipped our cognac and I slipped my arm around Helena’s waist, pulling her closer to me.
“Are you warm enough, Sweetheart?” I inquired.
“Mmm-hmm,” Helena murmured.
Kissing her cheek, I asked, “Did you enjoy dinner this evening?”
“Darling, yes,” Helena answered happily and emphatically, but pulling away. “Of course, I enjoyed dinner this evening. I’ve enjoyed the entire, wonderful day.”
She was elated. And I laughed as I watched Helena spread her arms and perform a series of joyous pirouettes.
“Don’t fall in the pool, Sweetheart!” I beseechingly cautioned her.
"I’ve enjoyed our whole, rapturous, incredible, beautiful, marvelous, stupendous week together!” she sang, as she twirled around and around and around.
“Any more adjectives you’d like to use to express your enthusiasm?” I said teasingly, as I reached to catch her and Helena fell dizzily into my arms.
“A few,” Helena replied, smiling and leaning in to press her lips to mine.
“Mmm,” I murmured, licking my lips. “Your mouth and Courvoisier. My lips are in heaven.”
Helena kissed me again, and I fingered the spaghetti strap of her blouse, then ran my hand softly down her shoulder and over her firm upper arm.
“Thank you for dressing so sexily for me tonight. You looked so beautiful in the candlelight. It was difficult for me to keep my hands off of you,” I whispered, stroking Helena’s breast and caressing her nipple lightly with my fingertips.
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Thanks for this story. I can hardly believe its been six months since you first posted, but I’ve loved reading it.
oh no, say it isn’t so!! i absolutely, positively loved this story and your writing. i do not take for granted how time consuming this is and how much energy writing requires…especially when you’ve done a fantastic job. THANKS for your story, it was GREAT and you deserve time off. but just in case you get anxious, feel free to start a belena sequel with B&H and the kids 2 years later. cheers and MERCI BEAUCOUP!!!
zheese, Thank You for a wonderfully moving story. I hope after you rest…and digest…and contemplate, you return and grace us with another story. I will read anything you write!!
Thanks for the ride zheese. It was fine. I certainly can understand wanting to take a breather, but I hope you come back in time. So Bette bagged the beautious Peabody? A girl could do worse. Shit, Peabody didn’t do too badly either.
Thankyou, for your talent at writing, you have given special life to these two all your own. We are lucky readers who get to tag along for the ride. So much of the story was about just these two, without the distraction of tina in the mix…it allows the reader to enjoy their love without too much drama…Thankyou, I’ll be here waiting for another story should you feel like writing….
Thank you for the wonderful story,but most of all thank you for putting up with our demands of more and long chapter Thank you for putting up with the good and not so good comments . You ended the story in a very good way. thanks again
As beautiful as the two women contained within the framework of your words. Thank you is inadequate, but offered with much sincerity!
Thank you so much, Zheese, for this beautiful story. Your writing is absolutely fantastic. I’ve only been enjoying this wonderful fiction of yours for the last 3 months, but I know I’m gonna miss it very much, so you definitely have to write a sequel ! Thanx again, you’re very gifted.
Thanks for a wonderful 6 month ride. Your story was incredible and we truly appreciate all your effort. Your talent is amazing so I hope you grace us again (soon) with your talent.
zheese, Thank you for your lovimg story and the time you have taken to writ it. I hope we get another one from you. Take care and be well.
Thank you so much Zheese for one of the most beautiful stories on this fanfic board. I hope you will return one day and give us another wonderful B&H love story. Take care!
Hey Zheese, What a perfect finale to a brilliant and wonderful tale. Your words showed us all how Bette and Helena could move beyond their past and fall deeply in love. This journey has been a real joy and pleasure to follow. There has been passion, desire, want and lust between these characters. You have breathed life into each one with your magnificent words and pacing. I implore you to continue writing as your talent demands to be shared. Thank you so very much for all of the time, effort, tears and toils, Your Loyal Fan. PS With crossed fingers, awaiting your return.
Thanks so much for taking the time to write this story. I always enjoy reading the different voices authors can give to the various characters and your beautiful way with words made the story you created such a delight. I look forward to more in the future.
yay! happy endings all around! that was a tryly touching story (the best of many, we hope?)i really hope that you do decide to write again as that was the most enjoyabe story that i’ve read to date! salute! and hope you return soon!…………..PLEASE come back with a sequel!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for sharing this story with us. No matter how much I love B&T together…I am a romantic, so in truth, I just want Bette to be madly in love and cherished. And, you have shown that in this story, Helena can fit that role just as well. Thanks!
Well.. what a lovely chapter and a perfect way to end the story, although i would have loved for it to have continued. But then, you need to do what you think as best. So thank you again. Hope you would return soon to grace us with another story!!
Lovely chapter. I can’t believe it’s you’ve finished with this story! Can’t wait until you write another story after you’ve rested. I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading your work.
wow this fic was the first one i ever commented on im sad to see it go, but understand the need to rest and contemplate i hope you return to us
Wow…that didn’t feel like 6 months. I hope you write again…you are truly talented. You made a Belena story okay for a Tibetter to read. Life does get busy and hectic just think of fan fiction as an oasis…that’s how us fans think of the stories ya’ll write. Take care and hope to hear from you in the near future.
great, great job with this story, i luved it from the beginning to the end, i hope after your break, you come back and entertain us some more, soon!!!!!!!!
Thank you for a fantastic story, I’ve enjoyed every moment. Hopefully once you’ve rested and recooped, you’ll return to us.
I’m sorry the story has to end but that was a great ending to a grand story. i hope you do decide to write more fan fic but if you don’t i’m glad i had the opportunity to read this one. Thanks!
thank u for such a beautiful story! i really do hope u continue to write! i look forward to seeing your name on under another title! =)
I can not believe this is over, What an utterly brilliant story it was, Thank you so much for taking the time to write this, your writing is just amazing, i hope after you’ve taken sometime for yourself you’ll be able to come back and grace us with another fabulous fic. Thank you again!