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    Pretty Women, episode 6

    Story written on August 31, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    White satin and caramel skin… A classical take on a TiBette beginning mixed with Pretty woman

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    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot Tina leading the brunette to the bed, and then we see Bette throw the hazeleyed beauty on her back on the soft matrass, and soon the brunettes gorgeous body is on top of hers… We see the surprise and confusement in Tina’s eyes, as emotions swirl around inside of her and the space between them is minimized tantalizing slowly

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina on the bed, they are only inches from eachother and seem mesmerized by eachother#

    The song ‘Don’t talk, just kiss’ by Right Said Fred starts playing.

     

     

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    Episode 6, Pretty Women

     

    Thousands of unfinished thoughts swirled around in Tina’s mind as she felt Bette’s breath carress her lips… Her body felt weak as the brunette seemed to freeze in the air…

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    3. Hey, great as ever but why do you always insist on leaving us hanging huh? sorry i have been absent for a while but i have caught up and would just like to mention that i have loved all the chapters you have posted even though i have not commented i am still trying to keep up. i wait eagerly for whichever of the stories you post next.

    5. wow! wow! wow! i told you that definitly change my mood 100%! incredible my friend! and the most amazing thing is that you writed while your took a break for studiying! wow! again! I can see that Tina want so much the kiss but she is afraid because of the feelings that she has but let her chill out and let her carry by Bette! now! to study! well done my friend!

    6. Yehaaa another amazing post – Thanks M, I know you’re busy. I like that Tina is not giving in about that kiss….YET!!!! LOL. So great, you’ve us on the edge the whole time. Post when you can and now….STUDY :o))

    10. Hey JLBT I’m sooo glad you took that study break! I loved this chapter too. You sure do know how to write! I hope you need to take another break soon! I think your keyboard is calling you! Can’t wait for more!

    13. Captain Mom… I’m sorry but I have to say it again (probably not the last time)… You’re my hero!!! I don’t mind you stopping there, coz you need some serious energy refill for what’s coming next ;) And knowing you, I’m expecting my laptop to combust… right after I have!… J, the slow-motion removal of the wig with the blond curls falling around T’face?… Perfect, simply perfect! Thanks so much! Now… *heading for a cold shower*

    17. Damn this is so fucking good and just wanted more,damn B&T is so hot and sexy. You know JLBT, you killing me softly like (killing me softly with his song) but with your story here and you leave us with all the slowburn here just not nice and hope you will post soon and a little longer please, thanks.

    19. My comment: “Love works in miracles every day: such as weakening the strong, and stretching the weak; making fools of the wise, and wise men of fools; favoring the passions, destroying reason, and in a word, turning everything topsy-turvy”~ Marguerite De Valois

    21. Please post soon I wait everyday for another chapter to this story and was sooo excited to read it just don’t make me wait so long for another.

    22. Bette is not the only one to want Tina or Tina to want Bette. You left me hanging and blowing in the wind. Now I have to spend time in the shower and try to keep my mind busy so that I will not daydream about this story.

    23. Wow…what a place to have to put your bookmark. This was hot…sombody gonna kiss somebody soon….I may have just kissed my computer screen…lol. Please post soon.

    27. You know, you’re amazing ! Well, for many reasons of course – and you know which ones I always loved – but here a new one just appears for me : the way two of your wonderful stories are making me feeling in a pretty opposite way, on a very special point. Yes, if I already expressed to you how I consider all your stories together like a marvellous tribute to Love, a heart-shaped necklace of jewels, two of them give me two very different thrills on a pure physical level : in my beloved ‘the beginning of a friendship’, our so endearing lovebirds had only shared kisses for now and yet each one of them are as powerful as any NC-17 chapter. But here, in this so charming tribute to such a famous romantic movie, that’s exactly the contrary : the most passionate lovemaking couldn’t make me forget this kiss that never happened ! — Well, isn’t it symptomatic that ‘love’ and ‘kiss’ share the same amount of letters ? Feelings can be as deeply as possible be expressed through a simple kiss. Even if any true love story needs to be consummated through a melting feeling of physical fusion, none could exist without the so sweet one that seals love between two persons : a kiss. In ‘beginning of a friendship’, we’re waiting for consummation – and in ‘pretty women’, we’re waiting for consecration. Good job, my so talented author ! — One of my lifetime favorite authors, Edmond Rostand, expressed that so beautifully in his unforgettable Cyrano : ‘Un baiser, mais à tout prendre, qu’est-ce? Un serment fait d’un peu plus près, une promesse Plus précise, un aveu qui veut se confirmer, Un point rose qu’on met sur l’i du verbe aimer; C’est un secret qui prend la bouche pour oreille, Un instant d’infini qui fait un bruit d’abeille, Une communion ayant un goût de fleur, Une façon d’un peu se respirer le coeur, Et d’un peu se goûter, au bord des lèvres, l’âme! ‘— Here’s the better translation I could find : ‘A kiss, what is it, after all?Promise more perfect, vows that closer fall.A troth deep plighted seeking form to prove;–A rosy o writ in the verb to love;It is a secrecy which takes the mouth for ear,One moment of infinite which makes a noise of bee,A communion having a taste of flower,A way of breathing the heart a little, And rising to the lips, the soul can drink.’ — Dear sensitive author, once more I thank you for the intense joy to read you. If one can always easily feel your heart in what you write, I can assure you my heart is always in my reader’s eyes… – A – N.B.: I simply adore your words, here : ‘It seemed as if her abdomen was a lake, and someone had thrown a rock in it… The warm feeling of passion, desire and something immensly deeper, increased, but the center stayed in that one spot, that now felt as the hidingplace of her soul… ‘, ‘Darkbrown eyes and hazel ones filled with passion met and seemed to embrace… It was as it their eyes were making love’ – … god, how lucky must be your own soulmate ! ^_^

    29. For the first time I’m not dissapointed you stopped there otherwise I’d fall off my chair! and besides, I’m at work and the air conditioner doesn’t feel enough, lol. JLBT, please finish on the next chapter what you started on this one, you teaser girl.

    30. WHEW…pant,pant,pant…okay, I’m just going to pick my tongue up off the floor and then I’ll be ready to comment. Okay, READY. This was very erotic. The words you write are detailed and helped me to visualize the story. ( I’m sure it helps that Pretty Woman is one of my favortie movies) I was hesistant to read these chaps because I didn’t want to keep comparing the details to those of the movie and then be dissappointed. But you are doing a great job. Not being able to kiss Tina would be killing me if I were Bette and I don’t know how Tina is able to resist Bette’s pouty lips? It’s a miracle, that I know I wouldn’t be able to do. (LOL) post again soon.

    32. Wow – that was hot……can’t belive you stopped were you did, that is soooo unfair :o)….that was sooo hot. God can’t wait for more to come and pretty damn soon I hope. Post soon

    33. W-O-W~~~ *melting* that was soooo hot. :) I just came back from holidays… and :S I’ve never found my writing great at all, if there’s any critic… Please feel free to give them all to me, I’m more than willing to take it ;)

    34. What a sweet torture you’re bringing us, I could hardly contain myself from running to the shower, in fact I mean crowling to the shower, I truly understand Lamentamini in this. Great chapter. Btw. could you please convince Therese_Belivet to start a story of her own, I really think she would do great at as writer. Bedankt voor dit mooie hoofstuk ik ga snel naar het volgende, heb al gezien dat het een NC-17 is….*whispering fuck*

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