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Chapter 4
Bette inhaled deeply, just taking in the feel and smell of waking up entangled with Tina. She didn’t want to move this feeling was something she had wished and hoped for so long. No matter how much Bette had tried to distance herself, shield her heart from memories of moments just like this her heart held onto the memory of this feeling. But this morning is was all real. This whole week was a growing memory that was at this moment weaving its way into the catalog of past and present to rapidly become Bette’s best.
The ride home from dinner Sunday night had been an emotional tightrope walking act for Bette. Wanting to say or do only encouraging, supportive acts for Tina almost was her undoing. Tina was totally in control of the speed of events to happen but at times Bette could tell that Tina was uncertain if she was setting the proper pace. At least that’s the belief Bette held onto. Tina’s concern was only an issue of timing and nothing else.
Bette hadn’t felt this nervous the first time around when she was courting Tina. But back then she commanded more control. While she had waited for Tina she still felt she was in the driver’s seat setting the tone and direction the courtship would take. This time she felt more reactive, almost defensive in nature waiting to read Tina’s reactions or her body language before committing to a move or direction.
Glancing repeatedly over in Tina’s direction, Bette couldn’t say from glance to glance where she would end up tonight. Just when she believed she had the green light and could begin to react to that emotion a gale storm warnings would spring up like surging white caps making her rethink her position. By the time they returned to the rental house Bette was totally at a loss in attempting to predict Tina’s inclination for the rest of the evening. Bette was beginning to think that licking her index finger and putting it up in the air to test the prevailing wind might tell her more.
Arriving home Bette felt it best to make no assumptions. Walking behind Tina while she headed towards the front door she resolved in her mind not to be disappointed if she ended up in bed alone. There was always tomorrow. Taking this attitude brought a certain calm to Bette that translated into confident body language.
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Jwet, thankyou so much for a post. You are a wonderful talented writer , and I so enjoy reading
I guess one bedroom was enough. I think we’ve all let a fear of a hurt being repeated prevent us from living in the present tense. I’m glad Tina was able to let go of the past and move forward. And when she moves forward, she doesn’t mess around.
I just caught up. Happy dance! Boy, when Tina makes up her mind, she really goes for what she wants. Good girl. And Bette’s plan definitely turned out to be genius. Fabulous.
Are we in the final stretches of “Home at Last”? Oh, I sure do hope so!! These two don’t truly exist w/o the other, do they?
Ahhhh….deep sigh. I love reading a story written by you. Thanks!!
Will Bette accept it happily? It’s not very convincing to me that Tina’s ready.
Hmm I think Bette should wait but then again you are the author not me.More Please.
Ah, football season is here and my heart beats with more enthusiasm. A little wager, eh? Well, have to tell you that many years ago, someone told me never to bet with my heart. So the Horns are off the table as far as betting goes. I hear that the tickets to the game in Austin are already going for $1000 and those weren’t great seats.
‘Loving Bette was never the problem. It is a natural outlet for the strings that tie them together but for some reason waking up together in the morning in the same bed means commitment. It means seeing your lover when they are not at their best. Bed head and trash breath all rolled into intimate encounters that lend to the hash realities of early morning light.’ That’s one of those passages I come across now and then that just makes all the lights suddenly come on.
NOW that is a nice way to start a holiday weekend! Add to that, Football! What more can I ask for?! Well, yeah, most stories…..Thanks. I like this Alpha Tina; strong, confident and “go for it” Tina! Nice. Thanks. Have a wonderful holiday weekend. Go Warriors!
Let us bow down to you…this was amazing…It is so late now. I can go to bed with a smile. ; )
What a way to start a holiday weekend. This makes it a happy weekend indeed. I haven’t started on WeHoWest yet, but you’ll be the first to hear when I do, promise.
Jwet….your stories, your writing….perfect.
I do hope they can make this work because they do not work very well w/o each other. If they will just leave the past and concentrate on their future everything will indeed be fine for their family. It is what they both want and Angelica also and this is something they should both think about. If they don’t the past will continue to haunt their future and derail the happiness they seek in each other. They really need to do this together. One step at a time. Thanks for a wonderful story as only you can do.
Hey lady thanks for just a wonderful story This is your story, so write with you heart and not ours heads, thanks
Captain-we have lift off. About time Tina made a decision. And thankfully the right one. post soon.
Hey! It’s so great to see you writing again. I love an intelligently written story starring B & T. I’m really identifying with the emotions of the 2 moms leaving their “baby” at camp for a month. My wife and I did it this summer with our baby. When we went out for a romantic dinner all we did was talk about our girl at camp! Pathetic, but a reality for those of us trying to give our children “wings”! Please keep writing….
As I was reading this I kept wondering what that noise was, and then I realized that it was the sound of the earth clicking back onto its axis. All is well now.Thank you.
Yeahhhhh this is awesome and hot and beautiful, and yes Bette will move in with you Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
this is soooo lovely . i like anything you do J but if Bette says NO a lot of people are going to be very sad and i know you have a soft heart so ???
Jwet, This was A GREAT POST. I hope Bette and Tina to move into together. But not to soon. Thank you PPS
I’m so glad I have the privilege of starting this ff from the start! Your name is legend around here, and I now understand why! Your dialogue and descriptions are so “spot on”, and it’s obvious that you love Bette and Tina as much as they love each other, despite all the obstacles! A beautiful and hot story, indeed!
That was just great…Im glad Tina let go of the past,appreciating Bettes efforts and letting her back into her life completly…So,am really looking forward to the next chapter,…Thanks!
Thankyou yet again for a wonderful chapter, will Bette be able to move back in with Tina, after the way Tina hurt her also. I look forward to your next post.
Only another 147 chapters to go, we really have another epic on our hands!
Thank you for posting another chapter JWET and starting the holiday weekend off right. I just love the way you put words together to describe B&T. And WOW, when Tine makes up her mind….{deep sigh}. “Waking up entangled”….NOW THATS THE WAY TO START THE DAY!! Have a GREAT holiday and please take some time off from you busy schedule to enjoy the long weekend!! Take care.
If I was Bette I would be jumping on the bed doing back flips because I would be the happiest lady in the world. I know drama is on the way but can they move into together, please. Indeed, Fabulous!
Jwet, awesome as always….thank you. I was wondering if they were going to try all of the bedrooms out!
as always informative and beautifully written. thanks for sharing your thoughts of what has been going on in their heads. hope all is well. thanks as always.
Wow…so glad they reconnected. It would be nice if Bette said yes…but is it too soon? Sure it was a wonderful week but it was a week out of the norm. Have they really discussed everything? Please post soon…your writing talents leave me in awe.
Thank you for this loving and well written chapter. Once Tina made up her mind it was full steam ahead. I hope it didn’t happen too soon yet they seem more mature and better equipped to handle whatever comes up.
YEEESSS!!!! THank you JWET. Such a great story from a talented writer. I love when the fanfic writers fix B & T they always give us wonderful dialogue and hot SEX! LOL! Thank god our fanfic writers listen to what we want and you delivered. (smile, wink)
Wow that was fast – i was expecting long drawn out chapters of angst & stuff – But YAY we get to the good stuff quicker – I’m Not Complaining – i was just surprised!Now thats a good twist!
Oh Yes! Lovely writing Jwet. Thanks!
Well yes, I can string a couple of sentences together but thats as far as it goes. I’ve discovered, as you know, that having 2 children is exponential the work of one and fear I will never have time to write again. However, I do enjoy reading stories by one of my favorite authors. I loved that last sentence, it caught me by surprise. Ghee I wish I could move in with B&T too. I’d love to be a fly on their bedroom wall!
Man i love this fic. I think the power to give us all hope is in this writing. Well another excellent chap. JWET. Such a wonderful intimate scene shared by 2 people who love oneanother so much. The decision is ultimately up to Bette,whether she wants to move in with T or Not. I won’t be mad either way. I just adore this relationship the way it is, hope it stays that way. Post soon.
loved it- hope there’s more soon!