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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 10)
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New York
“You promise you’ll call if you need anything?” Julie asked as she drove Dana to the airport a few days later
“Yes. Now you remember everything to take care of Danish right?” Dana said
Julie rolled her eyes. “Yes Fairbanks. You only told me a hundred times, emailed me, left me a note, and I believe you left a voice mail too.”
“Ok.” Dana said, not catching the sarcasm in Julie’s voice as she rummaged around in her purse. “Dammit.”
“What the hell are you doing?” Julie asked as she stared at Dana
“I can’t find my ticket!”
Julie reached over and plucked the ticket out of a pocket of Dana’s carry-on bag. “Stop stressing. Are you sure that going back is a good idea? Are you going to be ok?”
“I promise.” Dana chuckled. “I’ll be fine.”
“Ok.” Julie smiled. “Maybe this will be a good two weeks away from everything.”
“Jules, I’m going to be spending two weeks in the fucking middle of everything.” Dana sighed
“No, I meant for us. Maybe the gossip about us being lesbian lovers will stop.”
“Hopefully you’re right.”
“Ok, are you sure you are going to be ok going home and seeing everyone?”
“For the thousandth time, yes. I hope so at least.” Dana added thoughtfully
The women parked and got out of the car. Julie grabbed Dana’s bags from the trunk and turned to face the other athlete. “I would hug you, but I’m scared that will be tomorrow’s headline.” Julie joked
Dana rolled her eyes and pulled Julie into a hug. “Have a good holiday Conner.”
“You too Fairbanks.”
Los Angeles
Dana stepped off the plane and braced herself as she walked towards baggage claim. When she arrived, Sharon, Irwin, and Howie were waiting for her with huge smiles and a balloon that read “Welcome Home!” Dana laughed as she ran to her family.
“Hi Mom!” Dana said and pulled Sharon into a hug
“Hi sweetie.” Sharon said, tears in her eyes
Dana pulled away and gave Howie and Irwin hugs also. “It’s good to be back.” She whispered
The next morning at The Planet, everyone was silently drinking their coffee, the only sound coming from the women was Bette humming under her breath.
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Dana’s back and eveythings kicking off! Loved this chapter, liked the shane and alice fight! Can’t wait to see how the danish relationship develops back into friendship again!
jeez! that was amazing. all hail shane and her mighty slaps of unwavering friendship. so glad that dana had the balls to show up at the planet to face everyone. i half expected her to wallow away in orange county hiding at her parents place. thanks for yet another intense chapter of lesbian drama at it’s finest!
that was a super dooper chapter poopy. althouhg, i have to be a little bit angry for your saying guess whos back in the summery, because now i have that retarted eminem song in my head…i guess thats payback for the “if i only had a brain song” huh? damn…post more soon!
Great update. Very intense. So I got 2 right. There was arguing and tears. Now I want confessions, and forgiveness and lots and lots of kissing. Hehe. Sorry. I’ll stop now. I’m sure you know exactly what you’re doing. I’m sad to hear that this fic will be coming to an end. I really love reading it. I can’t wait for more. I’m still holding out for a happy Danish ending. What?….It could happen. :)
I’m really beginning to believe that such a nice girl like you can really be this aggressive and I’m wondering if you wrote the wrestling scene before or after we talked about how horribly violent you are. Great chapter loved all of the bitch slapping that occured. My eyes are barely open after last night you guys really know how to do a three way…or a four way rather. Good times, good times, I hope you didn’t miss your meeting and I can’t wait for the Danish reunion. PS I loved the “I’ll play scrabble with you” diss I was howling over here I think I actually said “oh snap” how old is that saying? See I did good I didn’t even bitch out B, I think that’s an accomplishment. We’re going to just start a topic for it, the best 1/3 of Suzieshitinthecloset signing off.
Poopala — you’ve really got to get in touch with your angry side. otherwise all your updates will be as drama and angst free as this one! Seriously, really great job…what make Luke storm off? (Other than we all wanted him to, despite the fact that we like him?) Looking forward to your next post!
Dude…I fucking love you. This was fantastic. I loved all of the Shalce moments. I loved how everyone reacted to Dana’s return…and I of course loved the use of “bite me” which will be making an appearance in my fic as well. LOL. Lets just work it into every chap from here on out. LMAO. So I am going to take a nap because I am so fucking tired. Hope your meeting wasn’t too rough. I am going out tonight to the gay bar so wish me luck. haha. Anyways, I am gonna be so sad to see this fic go. It’s a classic babe. Loved the update…I like how you wrote Alice in this one. She was dead on. Way to go. Alright. Jesus. Enough gushing already. So, have a great weekend. Hopefully I’ll talk to you at some point, because I am not talking to CD. Later dude. the Alice 1/3 of shitinthecloset33, sigining out. Love you :D
Under extreme social duress I am forced to issue this retraction for my earlier assumed change of the Shitinthecloset33 epithet, please disregard everything that did not involve praise on the above story.
Yoda! as always I loved this chapter. It was gold mate lol! I really took a liking to drunk aggressive Alice it was great. Sorry I haven’t commented for awhile my computer was rooted for a bit but now its fine, I had to print off your chapters at school and read them there it was quite funny actually except I was paranoid that the teachers were going to take it off me and read it out loud… eeek! I got my first job, I am a waitress very exciting which means I have work parties to attend now! and guess what I went to one last night and added 1 more person to my list! I have a headache but it was so worth it. Thanks for the update I am going to be super sad when you finally wrap this thing up its been a fan-fucking-tastic story! Have a good one and say hi to your mum for me ;) hahaha!
*exploades* and it ends! Why? Why must you end the chapter there? Oh well, I’ll just wait impatiently for te next one then. I can’t beleive I missed the last one! I left a comment anyways, because i’m obsessive like that. School got you fucked up too? It’s only been a week for me and I want it to end.Hell, I’d be happy with a christmas break! But anyways, I love the “bite me!” “I already did!” Fucking halarious stuff. Aw, I can’t believe you’re goign to end this story soon! It doesn’t seem like it’s been all that long. But you’ll start another one, riiiight? *insert hopeful look here* Well I hope collage doesn’t keep you too busy because your fans will be waiting for that update!
dammit! come on now! dana is home, she’s gotta make things right. i say you land them both under the mistletoe..and bam! if only things were that simple. i wish so bad for them to work things out, i feel bad for luke being caught in the middle of alice’s wrath. it’s crazy the emotions that dana brings out of her. you can’t let this story come to an end! what would i do !!! this is by far my most favorite story, which i have told you about a thousand times, but it’s still true and my heart leaps everytime i see that you’ve updated! i hope no matter what you keep up with writing, i think you should write a helena/alice/dana triangle..it’s never really been explored and i still like the idea of that. anyways, great update, i can’t wait to see what happens next. update soon love!!!
yay for the pets! lol im going to pretend that i didnt read.. “this is coming to an end” thing because i dont wanna know!!! :Cries: lol i cant really think about this story ending because its that great! Shane’s a slapper its true lol Alice stillllll makes me wanna cry :( but i guess if this story is getting closer and closer to the end THEN that also means Alice and Dana will be together soon as well! Dana has got a lot of explaining to do i hope Alice will listen even tho Dana partly doesnt deserve it. Well i deff cant wait for the next chap, edge of my seat for sure! keep it up poopster! x0x0
That was a mighty fine chapter Poop, I love Shane slapping our girls in gear..haha. And with this story coming to an end (hopefully not too soon!!)I am looking forward to them getting back together eventhough they have a lot of shit to work through. I put my faith in you for making it right. Oh I think I finally found something I don’t like about Luke, leaving Alice alone if he can’t deal with her, shame on him. Shane knew what to do to make it better. Looking forward to the next chap.
Good chapter! Sorry i havent commented before,believe me ive been reading! Keep up the good work!
I love everything about this story and can’t wait for more. Keep up the good work!
yay Poopy, glad to see Dana’s back… but she’s having a tough time readjusting to her mistakes. Hope Danish can sort out their problems a.s.a.p so then the girls can be one big happy family again! look forward to the next chapter – can’t believe the story is coming to an end – *sob!* i’ll miss it!
What can I say about this chapter? It had everything in it. But the most important thing, I have my hopes up for Danish getting back together. (That was questionable for a long time in this story.) So, Shane is beating the hell out of her friends just to get their minds straight. I was thinking the same as CD, did you write the wrestling scene before or after the conversation? I loved it that Dana was ‘on fire’ at the end. She needs to have that fire burning within her for a long time, otherwise she would never win Alice back. Didn’t you once mention that if you would ever finish this story (which will be a big loss for us readers), you would write a Shalice-story. :D