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Bette sat in the hotel parking lot. The car’s engine was still running as she silently mulled over her many thoughts. She knew that in just a few steps she would be inside. One foot in front of the other. Or, in just a few minutes she could be in her own home. Put the car in drive and push the gas. The choice was hers.
“Come on Porter, make up your mind.”
Bette looked at her watch. It was noon. She turned off the car and unbuckled her seat belt. Her palms were sweaty and she sniffed her armpits. In the rear view mirror she fixed her hair, and she dug in her purse for a mint. After one more slight hesitation, she pushed the door open and walked to the entrance.
“Hi, I’m Bette Porter. I reserved a room.” Bette told the person at the desk.
“Hello Ms. Porter. Here is your key. Would you like to pay now or settle the bill later?” The gentleman’s name tag read Peter. He flashed her a gigantic smile as if to say he knew what she was doing.
“Um… now if you don’t mind.” Bette glanced around the lobby nervously.
“Not a problem at all. Let’s see… here’s the bill. Please note, though that if any other charges are accrued during your stay, we will be billing the credit card that you pay with.” He handed her a paper.
Bette signed it without even looking it over. “Thank you.”
“No, thank you. If you take the elevators to your left, your room is on the third floor.”
Bette smiled and walked away. She turned around again. “I’m actually meeting someone here today any time. Could you let me know if they have arrived?”
He grinned again and nodded towards a woman sitting at the bar through the lobby. Bette smiled in return. Her steps were like lead and her breath escaped her. She stood behind the woman, regaining her confidence. Bette placed her mouth to the woman’s ear.
“Fancy seeing you here. Is this seat taken?”
The woman blushed nervously. “I thought you might stand me up.”
“The thought crossed my mind.”
“Do you always try to play hard to get?”
“Only with you.” Bette smiled. “Drinking so early?”
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yes oh yes you are back always love your writing
I just finished reading your Soul Harvest and behold another gem!! It’s fun to see B & T a bit more playful than all drama’d out!!:)
omg we are too lucky…first your back, then your writing about B/T lov’n…add to that some other valued lost soles are back writing as well….will our luck ever end??? Hopefully not…thankyou welcome back and look forward to more!!!
THIS IS FAR OUT THAT YOUR BACK!PLEASE CONTINUE ON FAREAST…… thank you!!!!
Good for them…keep the magic alive. At what time in their lives is this? Did the affair happen? Was Angelica born? Keep posting…no single post….
I think you should continue so you can answer a question or two I have about this! Are they really together and just role-playing as casual acquaintances, or are they really just casual acquaintances?
I was afraid the woman was an old annoying acquaintance seen in season 1, but I should have known better, it could not be in a story you’re writting. I must have been temporary distracted by some other FF story. I like this playful encounter between Bette and Tina though. It could be the beginning of many more playful readings for us.
Oh, a little afternoon delight, eh? How delicious especially when it is B & T. Thanks, fareast.
Who needs a sex therapist when you have secret get aways in hotel rooms?!!! Thanks!
Fareast, this was far out! I think you should continue. I want to see how long both of them can keep this a secret.
Wasn’t expecting it to be Tina—loved it tho. Hmm…wonder who they could be keeping it a secret from–besides the gang?!—Definitely should continue.
Glad you’re back! I’m enjoying the pace of the believable dialogue between these two characters. Many layers yet to be explored. Hope you go for it. I like your style of writing. Thanks for posting!
Welcome back. so many good writer are post,Feel like we are in heaven. Look the lunch date we need many more of these who are they keeping it a secret from? thanks
I’ve heard that if you travel far enough East, you’ll arrive in the West. …Welcome back!
Very, very nice. I love the playful meeting and Bette wanting a little foreplay. Look forward to reading more from you.
Damn thats hot!
I hope you continue….great start to the story and very interesting.
Yahoooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!welcome back with a big splash
I’m sure they just became the favorite guests of the hotel’s security staff. Just cause you can’t see the camera in the elevator doesn’t mean it’s not there.
That was great and fun start, love it!