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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 11)
A couple days later, Bette, Tina, Helena, and Alice were all seated around Bette and Tina’s living room watching TV.
When they heard the back door open to the loud sound of someone singing, they shared skeptical looks and turned around to find Dana holding her side in laughter as Shane belted out “Grandma Got Run Over by a Reindeer”.
Shane continued to sing as she walked into the living room, ruffled Alice’s hair, and sank into an empty armchair.
Bette looked warily at Dana. “Did someone slip something in her coffee this morning?”
Dana chuckled and sat on Shane’s lap. “I have no idea.”
“No one slipped me anything Bette.” Shane smiled and wrapped her arms around Dana’s waist
“Then what the fuck is the matter with you?” Alice asked
“Just happy, I promise.” Shane said
“You hate Christmas.” Tina pointed out
Shane shrugged. “This Christmas is going to be a good one.” She squeezed Dana
“Are we still doing the yearly tradition of dinner on Christmas Eve and Christmas night?” Dana asked
“I would be happy to have everyone over at my house. Lord knows that it’s big enough.” Helena said
“Ok. That sounds great.” Bette smiled at Helena. “Thank you.”
“My pleasure.” Helena smiled back
“Then The Planet for New Year’s?” Shane asked
“Yep. Kit’s having a huge party and roping off a section for us. ‘VIP’ she said.” Alice chuckled
“Sounds like fun.” Dana said and sent Alice a smile
Alice smiled back weakly. “What’s the plan for today ladies?”
“Bette and I are just going to chill out around the house with Angel. She’s been getting fussy lately, and we want her to be rested up for being out a lot this next week.” Tina said
“I have a dinner date with Alexis.” Helena smiled
“How is she liking the apartment?” Alice asked
“She loves it, although it is odd for me to be there.” Helena laughed
“What?” Dana asked Helena. “I thought you and Alexis were pretty serious.”
“Lex moved into Alice’s old place.” Shane explained
Dana looked at Alice. “You don’t live there anymore?”
“Luke and I moved in together.” Alice said softly
“Oh. Duh.” Dana slapped her forehead, earning a chuckle from Alice
“I told Carmen I would go watch her spin tonight.” Shane said. “Anyone who wants to meet up is more than welcome to.”
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(37 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Woo-hoo! Yes! Danish interaction of the good kind. I loved it! Excellent job. Drunk AlShaDane are really funny. I loved the text message scene. I can totally see Alice smiling when Dana sent her a message and then her smile growing. That, right there (to me), says that Alice totally has giddy feelings towards Dana…well, there also was that whole “making out” thing too. Oh yeah! I can’t wait for more.
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved everything about this chapter, the flirting, the teasing, the need for an AA meeting, but, hands down, my favorite line was: “Some shit about a carnival or something. Who cares.” I’m still laughing!
a drunk alshanedane is so freaking cute
tomorow moring will be fun!!! lol great update, lovig it as always! post mroe please!
swell update. loved the drunken tomfoolery. and nothin’ says lovin like text message flirting. can’t wait until your next post.
Wow…just caught up with this story–yup, all of it! It’s great—I love the way you write Danish and the whole gang for that matter. Can’t wait to see what happens in chapters to come.
what will they both do in the monring when they wake up can’t wait to find out please post soon great update i love it
cuuuute! I loved it. I miss these adorable danish moments and you capture them so well. Post soon!
awww Danish makes my heart beat faster! they’re so cute… loved the update, can’t wait for more :) Poopy you rock! x
What are the odds that there will be another update when I come home from work? I knew I shouldn’t have read that in the morning. Update soon & often!
AWWWWW Great chapter,Please update soon!!!!
oh my. the morning after should be an interesting one!
I must say Poop you don’t disappoint, I find it funny that you and B posted around the same time since last night I was riding her to post (I was riding her, lol). You’ve captured the essence of AlShaDane, that’s what TLW is about. Love the flirtation loved the drinking(but if this was shitinthecloset33 I doubt I’d be able to keep up with you two). Everything was perfect, after my vacation I’ll be sure to post something and try to catch up with you but it will be hard you must have posted like 4 or 5 times since I left. Sorry about school, if I go back next semester I’ll be contending with the same crap, and I know how it goes. Log on sometime Poop we miss you and B is getting waaaaaay to frisky for me (I think she’s got a thing for black women with brown hair and brown eyes.) Also there are stories (hilarious ones) that we need to discuss. Don’t let B tell you she’ll just lie, Anyway great chapter can’t wait for the next one. I’m trying hard not to suggest you do anything I’m trying to enjoy the ride. CD the cool, sexy, popular, funny charming, intelligent, socially talented and basically everthing everyone wishes they were 1/3 of Shitinthecloset33….OUT BITCHES
This was truly an amazing chapter. Drunk AlShaDane..shirts clinging in places..how drunk are they: 11! LMFAOAh but what will happen the next morning, a part from the headache!? Please just let them remember that’s all I ask. Can’t wait for more, goodluck with school!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW…hey poopster..awesome chappy. Sorry i haven’t left comments in awhile, i too, am busy with school. ugh. I love this story you know it, and i can’t wait to read some more. I’m keeping this short so post soon. I know that now that dana is back all the love alice has for her comes rushing back into alice’s heart. Geez they have to end up together. screw luke. hehe. k peace!
awww… ;)
Great chapter! I loved trashed shane/dana/alice was really funny, loved when shane said “”Some shit about a carnival or something. Who cares.”” that was awesome! And yay abit of danish loving at the end! Great writing! Update soon!
Ok. So I would have commented last night, but I was so fucking tired and I am not a machine like you…which wow…I can’t believe you were still up! You have school dude! Go to bed! And if you were up…why the hell weren’t you talking to us!?! No I’m kidding…well, no I’m not actually. LMAO. We really do have some fucking hilarious stories for you. My weekend was very eventful. So anyways, I finally posted after much screaming and yelling from CD…bitch. And I get all that shit taken care of and realize that you posted! So I had to read it in my semi-unconscious state…and of course fucking loved it. You know I have a special place in my heart for AlShaDane, especially when well-written…which of course this was. Great job my long lost, far far away, friend. So I was reading and was thinking…wow…this seems familiar somehow…and I am talking to CD today, and she’s like… “You and poopy write so much alike, did you read her chapter?” So I just wanted to say…you are brilliant (as am I) and…QUIT COPYING ME! hahahaha. No, I’m kidding of course. GMTA. Alright. This is long e-fucking-nough. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. The last scene had me screaming for more…and then screaming at you! Oh! And I am NOT frisky…ok maybe a little. But CD exaggerates. Suze, the sassy, super hot hot hottie, everyone can’t help but love me, I can do pull ups, 1/3 of Shitinthecloset33…And I’m spent.
Yoda! This was well I am at a loss of words.. I seriously think I have run out of words to describe how amazing your story is everytime you post. I wish Dana and Alice could be drunk all the time! it was soo funny and cute Shane was pretty damn funny to.. I love them together. Cant wait till the next chapter I am sensing a bit of drama? I love drama.. But I like it when they make up and stuff more. Hope you have had a good week.. no parties for me as I have exams eeek! next weekend however is a different story!
Yay some Danish love making…although it didn’t last too long. ;) I have this feeling Dana has to go back to NY the next morning they wake up. She will make it to the airport, but will she be on that plane? (Mmh, will they end up like Rachel and Ross at the end..”Let her off the plane!” (…) “I got of the plane.”).