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"Alice! For fuck’s sake Alice…how are you always so fucking late?" Shane tapped her foot impatiently on the floor at the entrance of the writer’s apartment.
"Hold your horses, sheesh!" Alice retorted. "It’s not like you are always punctual either. Wouldn’t you rather be fashionably late with a hot blond on your arm?"
Shane rolled her eyes and shook her head. She and Alice had been friends for years. Shane couldn’t think back to a time when the blond wasn’t around, and she frankly didn’t want to. The woman had saved her ass time and time again, and Shane loved her for it. Alice was probably the only person that she could trust totally and completely, with no strings attached. With Alice, what you see is what you get. She had been spending a lot of time with the woman lately, because Alice was fresh off a painful break up with her other partner in crime, Dana.
Shane cared for both woman deeply and hated to see them hurting. She didn’t want to have to choose sides because she loved them both, but Alice was the one who got her heart broken. Shane had made more of an effort to be there for her then the athlete. Thankfully, Dana seemed too busy with tennis and Lara to notice anyway. Alice for her part, was really starting to get back to her old, snarky, sarcastic self, which made Shane breathe a little easier. Alice was the kind of woman that could make you feel better about yourself with a simple smile. She could make you laugh until your sides hurt one second, and in the next moment, be completely exasperating, and leave you wanting to strangle her. When she hurt, everyone that was in a fifty foot radius of her hurt. She just had that effect on people. Her personality was so fucking charming and likable, if you gave her five minutes of your time, you would be sucked in for as long as she’d have you. And then there was the small and totally irrelevant fact that she was fucking, smoking hot. ‘Easy their killer." Shane laughed to herself.
"Oooh! I get to go with a hot blond? When are we picking her up, and then what are you gonna do? You can’t show up to your grandiose, the booze is flowing and we’re getting shit faced, radio function, without a date…cause that would make you look really pathetic Alice. I would feel bad. And I hate that feeling. I am all about the clear conscience."
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Awesome, I’ve always liked the idea of these two getting together. You write them well!
ha they r cute
I didn’t think I could get into shalice, but I was wrong. Danish will always be my first choice, but Alice and Shane are also cute. Shocking the hell out of Dana is an additional treat! lol
awwww…i like this idea of shane and alice, in this particular story. i’d love to see how dana reacted to it all. can’t wait !!!
you should totally keep that going.
now don’t get me wrong, i love danish. but everytime i read or see dana break up with alice, i can’t help but kinda hate dana just a little. and i love shane. and shane and alice together, well that is pretty dang hot. how dare dana and lara go to a KCRW function! that’s just cold. but thank god for stiff drinks and spur of the moment lip locks because that was hot. can’t wait to see what you have planned for these ladies.
that was great I love it so funny can’t wait to see what will happen next
YOU POSTED IT!! I really should be in bed, and I had every intention on going, but I was like “I’m gonna check the site one more time!” Damn, I’m glad I did. Suze, babe, this story is already fucking excellent. Shane and Alice are so hot, and you write so beautifully! Sorry we havent had a chance to talk lately, but hopefully I’ll catch you really soon! Great start to the story babe! You have no idea how much my Shalice loving heart needs it! :-P
Actually, I am like you on this particulair ship… I mean, I love Danish, but Alice and Shane, they’re lookin’ goooood together! And I really like this beginning! PPS!
yay Shalice!! i like this ship but hardly i see an author who writes about it..im glad that you decided to! Please continue :)
Hey, I like this! Dying to see where you go with this. Suck it up Dana!
Wow, at first i was like i dont know….but you did a wonderful job and now im thinking,lets rock the boat!! Cant wait for your next post!!!!
:-O Drop dead?! DROP DEAD?! CD!! What did I do?! :-( Don’t hate me unless you tell me why!!
LMAO Are you commanding me to tell you Poop? I don’t hate you I never said that, I said that I wanted you to drop dead. That is very different, I said I hated B then I called her brilliant. Do you realize how amazing a compliment that is, to despise someone and still recognize their genius?(I don’t despise you B) To realize that this story if continued could be written in the books of time? That each word and syllable should be recorded for future generations so that they may see how we the cave people of the past could be dignified and express ourselves in a completely eloquent manner. This story is forever burned in my mind, it will haunt my dreams. To know that I can will never be able to write something that is anywhere near the supreme artistry that this fic will be. So yeah to recap, I never said I hate you, I love this fic, books of time, supreme artistry…..best 1/3 of Shitinthecloset33 OUT!
Damn you woman, now theres another story I HAVE to read!! Excellent start, I loved it. Even tho like you Im a mega Danish fan, I love Alice so im all good and looking forward to where this is going. You cant leave us hanging now!!!!!
Ok i gotta admit that i am a danish fan, no shame! But this was fucking HOT! i loved everything about it! Alice+Shane=Hotness! It was really well written, and i hope you do keep this fic going!
I love this pairing. Wish more people would do it. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
Since I’m technically not speaking to 2/3 of shitinthecloset33 I’m going to make this a general statement. I liked the story and I hope that it continues, I mean I don’t know how I could want the story to continue and want it’s author to drop dead but yeah that’s just the way that I feel. I realize that this will not be a Danish fic and I kind of like that, I love Alice and for some reason Shalice is really hot. Though I doubt it would work well in the actual TLW universe since IC’s answer to ending a good relationship is killing someone but still good job bitch…don’t think this changes anything, I still hate you but I also think that you’re brilliant. (PS If you read this Poop, you drop dead too)