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Heaven Can Wait – Episode 4: Money City Maniacs
Sloan – Money City Maniacs
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"Hey you
You’ve been around for a while
If you’ll admit that you were wrong then we’ll admit that we’re right
Hey you
Come on along for the ride
We’ll hit the money city if it takes us all night"
Carmen is in pursuit and hoping to catch up to Lara soon before things get worse. Through the hospital lobby she goes, down an elevator and eventually to the front entrance/exit. It’s there where Carmen sees her, sitting on the steps by herself. Lara’s hands are draped over the back of her head as her forehead rests at her knees. Carmen makes her way to Lara, placing her left hand against Lara’s shoulders and sitting down to Lara’s right.
Carmen: Hey…you okay?
Lara looks up, her chin now resting against her knees.
Lara: …I’m a fool.
Carmen: You didn’t know…nobody told you and…someone should have.
Lara closes her eyes and shakes her head.
Lara: I made a mistake coming back…didn’t I?
Carmen: No, Lara you didn’t.
Lara: Yeah…right.
Carmen maneuvers herself in front of Lara, her hands now at Lara’s collar.
Carmen: Lara…Dana asked about you, all the time. She kept hoping you’d come back…she missed you. And yeah, it’s a little weird right now, but she still misses you.
Lara: …Not enough to wait.
A single tear rolls down Lara’s right cheek. The heartbreak is easily detected by Carmen. She knows the feeling very well at the moment herself.
Carmen: Is there anything you wanna do right now…is there anything you need…tell me.
Lara looks at Carmen for the moment.
Lara: I should leave.
Carmen closes her eyes and nods slightly.
Carmen: Alright. Where you wanna go?
Lara: Somewhere…anywhere…so I can just scream. I just need to go, though. All I can do here is cause problems and be in the way of everyone.
Carmen: Okay.
Carmen stands and takes Lara by her hands.
Carmen: Come on.
Carmen pulls Lara’s hands until Lara finally stands face to face with her.
Carmen: Wherever you’re going, I’m taking you.
Lara: What?
Carmen: Look, Lara…we’re both hurting right now obviously. Maybe we should both get away. But either way, you’re not going through this alone. You’ve done that enough already. So come on! I drove us here…I can drive us out..and anywhere you wanna go, you name it.
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Great update, I love Alice in this story, not going insane but talking to Lara. But like most I prefer Danish over any other couple! Maybe Lara can hook up with Carmen….just a thought! Keep it up…..
My fault, I temporarily forgot about the tech term PDA & used those letters in my previous comments. I’m jumping ahead in my mind about your story & am already pairing people up. I know I need to slow down to see where you go. Really liked Lara confronting Alice & not running away to hide (thats thanks to Carmen anyway). Can’t wait for the next chap.
Good chapter,cant wait to see what happens with lara and al and dane,update soon,keep up the gr8 work!!!
awww this is so good. alice is so right about putting all the bullshit aside until dana gets better. poor lara..she must’ve been really shocked. but i dont really care all that much, my danish heart will always prevail!
I concure, as much as I like this Lara, I want my Danish together, because it’s how it should be. I love this story, please cont’…cheers.
Good Stuff…I also concure in reference to Dana…Let Lara meet a doctor or a nurse…maybe someone from her past…
Sorry I didn’t comment on the past few updates, but I am reading them & looking forward to more. I’d be lying to say that I wasn’t looking for a Danish ending … but I’ll see where you take us.