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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 12)
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The next morning, Shane burst through the door to the studio.
“Dana! Wake up!” Shane yelled. “I cant find Alice.”
“Fucking hell.” Dana muttered and sat up, a hand on her head. “What do you mean you can’t find Alice? She probably just went home.”
“Wrong. Al left the MINI at the club, and I just talked to Luke. She’s not there.”
“Why the hell are you two yelling?” Alice asked, popping up next to Dana
Shane’s mouth fell open as she turned to stare at Alice wide-eyed. Dana yelped and rolled off the bed. Alice just stared at Dana and Shane, her hair all over her head.
“What the hell happened last night?” Shane exclaimed. She looked at Dana on the floor by the bed. “And why the hell are you topless?”
Dana looked down and gasped when she realized she was, indeed, only in her underwear. Yanking the covers from Alice, Dana wrapped herself up in the blanket.
Shane turned her incredulous stare to Alice. “Umm…Al?”
“What?” Alice asked. Shane pointed, and Alice looked down. “Fuck.” She muttered
Dana looked at Alice. “You’re topless too!”
“Thanks Captain Obvious, I gathered that.” Alice said and covered her boobs with her hands. “Why am I even out here? Didn’t I sleep on the couch?”
“Apparently not!” Shane said
The three women stared at each other.
“What the fuck went on last night!” Alice finally exclaimed
After Dana had thrown on some clothes and had brought Alice her clothes, Alice, Dana, Shane, Jenny, and Carmen all sat at the table for breakfast.
“How are you all feeling today?” Carmen smirked at the trio
“Like shit.” Shane muttered
“Hey Carmen, do you remember what happened last night?” Dana asked hesitantly
“Oh yeah. You three are quite a disaster when you’re together.” Carmen said
“I don’t even remember leaving the club.” Alice said, taking a small sip of coffee and wincing at the bitter taste
“Maybe that’s best from what I hear.” Jenny sighed
Alice looked sharply at Jenny. “What did you hear?”
“Do you not remember making out with that random chick at the bar?” Carmen chuckled
“What?” Alice yelped
“I heard about that. Well, more like saw that in the form of a reenactment.” Jenny said
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totally liking it… Sorry I haven’t commented before, I tend to read, then go off an write my own chapters… very nice… Janet Marie/JadedRogue
Excellent update…now if they both weren’t such stubborn young Jedi! Perhaps more making out, with less talking and thinking might helpt them to see the sparks. BTW, there’s something in the latest chapter of Lucky that, if anyone’s gonna spot it, I think it might be you…I put it in there because it cracked me up. Anyway, sorry school’s back in session because I miss your comments and the laughs! PPS
Excellent peace offering. More please :-)
Hahaha Yoda! loved the Jedi and Yoda bit in there! When I read it my jaw actually dropped and then i giggled lol.. I am not nice well I am but I am being honest! your story is awesome.. whenever I see a new chapter posted I am like “Yes!” and then I have to read it straight away no matter where I am or what I am doing. I am now waiting for the drama and the non drunk danish make outs.. I wont be waiting long.. right? I indeed work at a restaurant its like a sports club hockey centre its really fun though and the people I work with are sooo fun and great so I am happy for now.. lol I already am corrupt trust me ;) haha! I think I should slow down on adding people but I dont know it just happens and there is a big party on friday night and my whole grade is going and I am getting people from work invited so I think that my list is going to have a couple of new additions.. but my lips got sunburnt yesterday when I was playing softball soo I hope they wont be sore or anything lol.. I am random.. Trust me when you dont want to add people they appear from no where.. its kinda scary haha. loved this update.. Luke is getting paraniod I like it! Cant wait for the next one :D
god i just love your updates! keep em coming babe!
AHHHH DANA WTFFF…tell aliceee!!!…lord o lordy. Hey poopster, one and only b-eyes here. Great chappy. I’m loving this story entirely too much. I tell ya, this should be a real separate show. Anywhooo, “Whoa. Where’s the fire?” Dana joked, LMAOOO haha, nice touch and i’m loving how alice is falling in love with dana again, even though she is trying to supress it, i mean, c’mon! luke is a great guy, but he’s not dana, for obviously reasons, lol. I really hope dana tells alice and i can’t wait to see where you take us. Oh and don’t worry about school, i’m not. Fuck school, i should be doing work but nah. Alright poopster, i’m outtie, i g2g read your new one. which i can’t wait to read. I’ll post there too..mmkay post soon playboy, i’m outtt.
Great update and thanks for the warm welcome. Drunken nights can make things great but can also confuse the situation even more than it already is. Dana needs to come clean to Alice and Alice needs to confront her feelings for Dana regardless of Luke. It’s true, as others have said, he knew what he was getting himself into when he met Alice, especially if he listened to her show and the story. Till next time!
greatness!!! the first six lines had me choking w/ laughter. it was such a great scene and really paved the way for an amazing update. it’s so amazingly frustrating how dana and alice are so completely dense when it comes to their love for each other. or rather, how the other truly feels. i’m sure the drama is just beginning and can’t wait to see how you let it unfold. i’m still working on getting off my ass and updating. classes at my school don’t start for another couple weeks so i’m enjoying every minute of my laziness. haha. keep up the great work!
lol. It’s always embarassing to wake up after a night of too much to drink and when everything what happend the night before, comes back slowly. But they did recall what happened! :D Yay! And the sparks were flying around, they were all over each other. I can’t wait for you to actually bring them back together. Bring on the drama and hopefully we can get to the good part soon! :P
I love this and I can’t wait to see what dana will do next and as for alice she is hiding her felling again and that won’t last long because she is so in love with dana great update please post soon I love it
Well fuuuuuck meeee running! I went out tonight, with every intention to ge tshit faced….which I fucking am…and then my better half C fucking D telld me that this chick we used to know…fuck what was her name…hmmmmmmmmm. OH! Poopy or something…anyways, she tells me this chick poopy has this half way decent story up to read…so I thought I would check it out…yeah…it doesn’t suck…I said she seemed a little copycatish…but then again…I am totally fucking shit faced…(thank you MS word…) but anywho…this I suppose didn’t suck a huge amount of ass…actually, it made ass much more appealing…if that’s even possible…and also boobs too…but that;s because I kow how… “gifted” you are in tha tarea…so yeah. Inthecloset33 has got some real potentials in line to take your spot…you will be missed…chaps like these make me happy and sad…because we could have gone so far together…wow. I should go. I am sober btw…or AM I???? damn you…y must u write so well??? it would be som much easier to dismiss you. ohwell. CD and I will carry on w/out you. She met LH and the three of us are doing a show together. give us a call and maybe will get you back stage…but probably not. Did I already say that this chao kicked ass??? ok good. Fucking love you baby! Hmmmm….gona go e-mail this one chick…got an idea…
OK so I admit you’re kind of really talented and I also admit that B and I are taking applications for your replacement….No you may not apply, you don’t call you don’t write, you don’t return the heartfelt slightly stalkerish emails what…the…fuck. I mean do you know who I am? I don’t think you do or I think you did and somewhere along the way you forgot…I am mutherfuckin CD Bitch….yeah that’s me, and if you don’t get online and have a conversation with inthecloset33 (hey that’s pretty appropriate for us too) then I am going to kick so much ass it’s not even funny. Great chapter though loved the romantic buzz you’re giving me here, loved Alice waking up. We all know what needs to happen Poop make it so! MAKE IT SO! I can’t wait for the next chapter….I will be posting….well eventually I’m going to be home tomorrow, and maybe if you’d give us a fucking call then you could hear about my kick ass trip to LA and how I met Leisha Hailey and how she totally said you’re a whore….I was like DUDE are you serious! I know that whore too! Then she said that she loves your story and she totally going to get you a job on TLW and I told her forget it Poop doesn’t want a job on TLW and then she asked me to give you her number and I said that stuck up bitch isn’t going to call you Leisha Hailey forget it Poop is getting hoes in different area codes and then she was like well here CD your story is ok I guess you can call me and I was like cool beans Leisha Hailey and then we totally pulled our electric guitars out and rocked out all night. Yeah….true story….hand over my fucking heart it happened lol. OH YEAH the tight ass, shit kickin, celebrity meeting, fuckin struttin, amazing as hell 1/3 Shitinthecloset33 OUT! (I might be a little drunk and I might not be, you’ll have to guess.)
Finally Luke is getting it. Now if we can get Dana and Alice on board all will be right in the world again. I need some happy Danish and I think you may be the one to give it to me!! So I’m counting on you to do the right thing…I loved the back and forth between our girls and I think it was a great way to start..now I’m going to read your other story and will get back to you on that one. Keep it up!
Yay great chapter, this story gets more addictive every chapter you write! i loved “”Goodnight young stubborn Jedi.”” the shane/dana/alice scenes you do are great =] Update soon!
Great chapter!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!
loved it loved it loved… did i say loved it already? :P bye bye luke! hahah update sooon! in fact if u did now i wouldnt mind at all :) keep it rockin poopster
poor luke, he knows the game is up! i can’t wait to see how the rest of this all plays out, it’s soo good! i think i missed something between helena and lex, when did they fall in love? lol anyways, great job as always and i hope you update soon and oh yeah, bring them together already!
great job – i wonder when things are going to come to a head. luke is so nice – i feel bad for him. but dana and alice are destined for one another.
all i really wanna know is… why did luke hook up with alice in the first place when he knew she was still into dana? he did this to himself! great update!!!!
I love this fic! Have I mentioned that lately? You write so well. Okay…hmmm…where to start…I know! Alice is lying to Luke! I love it. When she said “Me too.” to Luke instead of “I love you too.” I was like “YES!” It’s just the begining, muhaha. I love that Luke (as well as everyone else) can sense that there is something more going on between Dana and Alice. Bette had quite a few wonderful (and insightful, as usual)lines in this chapter. The first one I liked was when everyone was talking about Alice’s feelings for Dana. “This could end bad.” Carmen said”Or it could have been the best thing to happen to them.” Bette said slowly.Heck yeah! You betcha Bette! The other one is when everyone is talking about the possiblity of Dana and Alice in a relationship again. “I’m just trying to derail the train wreck waiting to happen.” Carmen sighed”I don’t even think God could derail that train wreck.” Bette said I yelled “Amen!” Not cool when it’s late and there are people sleeping. I loved that Alice was sad that Dana wasn’t coming over to Helena’s, and that she had to call and beg Dana to come. Then they act like no one else is there. That’s priceless. They both have it bad. I really, really can’t wait to read more. I enjoy this fic so much, every time I read it. Great job. Wonderful writing.
woohoo, i can see some danish loving in the near future. There better be some anyway! Sorry I haven’t posted RtJ yet, i got a new job which means working 14 hrs a day, 7 days a week… not giving me much time to post. I’ll do it soon though, just for you! Post soon.