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oh yes, there will be blood (prologue)
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The room was dark, a single glow of red the only thing permeating the darkness. A musty smell hung in the air, making breathing labored.
A young woman sat strapped to a chair, slowly coming to from her unconscious state.
The woman’s eyes were drawn to a television, and she blinked her eyes a few times to bring them to focus on the static displayed on the screen.
“Hello Gabby.” The television said, a figure suddenly appearing as the static disappeared
Gabby let out a muffled cry at the image; a small puppet. Gabby attempted to remove her arms from their shackles and cried in pain as something sliced into her skin.
“You’re probably wondering why you’re here.” The puppet continued to talk. “You’re here to learn a little life lesson.” The altered voice said with amusement
The overhead lights finally came on, and Gabby’s eyes widened in horror. She was chained to a chair, razorblades surrounding her wrists, blood slowly trickling down them.
“Fuck!” Gabby screamed. “Hello! Is anyone there?”
“All your life you’ve played on people’s emotions. You’ve used your beauty to disguise your true nature. Would people continuously fall into your trap if you didn’t have your beauty?”
“I want to play a game.” The puppet continued. “Before you is an iron plate. I believe the temperature should be at about 200 degrees. This is your only way of escape.”
Tears ran down Gabby’s face as she gently tried to pull her hands through the razors, only cutting herself further.
“As I’m sure you have noticed, there are razorblades surrounding your wrists. The only way to release them is to press on the iron plate in front of you. If you do not, those razors will close on your wrists, cutting into the skin and severing your arteries. It will be a matter of minutes before you bleed out.”
“The question is, how far are you willing to go to save your life? What are you willing to lose to escape?” The puppet chuckled. “I’ll give you a clue; beauty isn’t everything. You must use your head to find a way to free yourself.”
Gabby looked around frantically. “Is anyone there!” She screamed. “Someone fucking help me!”
“You have two minutes.” The puppet said and laughed manically as the TV cut to a clock and started counting down from 2 minutes.
Gabby whimpered as she tried to wriggle her feet free from their shackles. Straining with the effort, Gabby sobbed when they wouldn’t budge from their place. Looking down, she tried to slowly move her wrists from their razored prison.
“Motherfucker.” Gabby cried as the blades pressed into her skin
The glowing red time hit 1:00, and Gabby screamed again. “Fuck!”
Looking at the glowing iron plate in front of her, Gabby realized that the only way to release herself from the razorblades was by pressing her face against the hot iron. Gabby sobbed as she slowly moved her face forward towards the plate, only to jerk her head back as she felt the heat radiating off of it.
:30
Bracing herself, Gabby tried to move her face towards the plate, only to pull back again at the last minute.
“Someone!” Gabby choked out in a pained scream. “Anyone! Please! Help me!”
:20
Deciding the only way to accomplish what she needed to do was to slam her face into the hot iron, Gabby prepared her body for the pain.
:10
Clenching her jaw, Gabby let out a frustrated scream when she couldn’t bring herself to do it.
:5
“No. No!” Gabby cried as the numbers dwindled down
:00
The razors clamped down on Gabby’s wrists, the only sound in the small room a horrified scream.
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Well it’s a relief it’s Gabby that’s gonna get it…to that I say carry on.
well, tks for the warning, and although I’m sure there are people out there that really enjoy these types of movies/stories I’m not one. So pls don’t take to hear that I will not continue with this…good luck and good writing
Well…. being that I once killed all the Char of the l word myself, i say..ROCK ON! janet m/jadedrogue
I’m surprised I read this considering I had a wicked nightmare this morning that left me quite shaken even though the dream was your typical cheesy horror flick (I blame it on the hot fudge brownie delight I ate last night). Anyway, I can’t promise I’m in it for the long haul, but this definitely caught my attention, not to mention your name has always made me giggle. ;)
Reality scares me, so horror is not so much my genre. On the other hand, I say you took it too easy on one Miss Gabby DeVeaux (and thought that her being your first victim was LMAO funny), so I’ll probably give the next chapter a shot.
This is fuckin’ intense!!! I love it!!! Please continue!!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-pps. Glad it’s Gabby ;-p (I’m an evil devil! MUHA!!!)
I thought it was awesome. I love this kind of stuff. You had me grinning the whole time. Uh…does that make me weird? If so..oh well. I’d love to read more of it. Great job. Oh, I almost forgot! Danish right? huh? huh? :)
Oh my golly gosh Yoda! Hahaha I am such a chicken when it comes to scary stuff but I loved this and I really want to read more!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! EFFIN FAN-SLAMING-GRAN-TASTIC! loveeeeee it poopster…awesome spin on everything..can’t wait to read more, i am officially a poop lover! errr, you know what i mean. :)
*dances around* woohoo-…i mean, oh bummer Gabby’s gone. This story’s got a very errie and creepy feel to it. I’ve never seen Saw, so I think the story would be worth reading. I’m deffinitly going to continue with this one! And props for killing Gabby first!
well…since it was gabby dieing, i loved it! great post! carry on! well i dont care who you kill off next *cough* *tonya* *cough* so ill just be happy when you update *cough* *tonya* *cough* sorry i have a sore throught *cough* * TONYA!!!!* ahem. post more soon?
I hate Gabby just as much as the next girl, but I don’t know that I could have dealt with her melting face. I’m curious to see where you go with this.
it is what she had coming to her but who did it great post
You already know I love this but I want everyone else to know it too. Great job Poop keep it up and I expect to see constant updates on both of these stories now and I expect straight A’s too….Live my fucking life for a minute yo! lmao
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK ME! Dude, you already know I love this. So yeah…keep going. oh…and here…(_*_)
The warning was needed…but I loved it and knowing that our girls will be included is what makes it work for me. So looking forward to the next one!
: hides under bed : holy crapooola! Poopster u evil poopy u! this is awesome! poor gabby… not! :P awesome start i think this lil project of yours is fantastic! so you better keep going! on and ps: Danish must survive.. or dun dun dun :P!!
What a way to start!!!! Post soon pls.
night night gabby!!! i’ll keep reading until you kill off shane, alice or dana. : )
fuck that was rough, too rugged for my liking…but your ch1 wasn’t too bad but why the NC17 rating, more like R?? don’t you think??never mind!!!!