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Like a fairytale, chpt 22
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Once upon a time on ‘Like a Fairytale’:
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All 3 girls stared at the phenomenon, the miracle of butterflies that seemed to be mourning with them over the friend they had lost.
Bette still sitting on her knees, the tears pouring down her face…
Shane was still half in the process of reaching out to the atletic girl, her hand motionless in the air…
Dana still hugging the lifeless body of the blonde she would always love more than her own life…
A golden light seemed to emerge from the thousands of beautifull creatures… The soothing harmonious sound made the girls tremble even more, and three bodies jerked with fright when the butterflies, now again in the teardropshape, suddenly turned and made their way towards the water, that still had the color of the night…
The butterfly at the top of the teardrop (could it be the one they had seen earlier?) touched the black substance first, and the glorious sound reached its peak when the other fragile creatures soon followed their leaders example.
The breeze that had been playing with their hair and clothes changed into a strong wind when the girls saw a golden platform appear where the butterflies touched the water. And tiny strings seemed to be tossed towards both shores, forming a small golden bridge… The content of the river became a caleidoscope of colors untill it finally reached a beautifull shade of blue neither of the girls had ever seen before.
The bridge became broader and turned into a path, and in two strings the butterflies flew up and seemed to linger in the air before they chose their direction…
Straight towards…
Dana…
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Chapter 22.
Dana blinked in surprise as she saw the butterflies head her way, and felt all her muscles tighten as the first one landed on her shoulder. She let go of Alice, wanting to protect her girlfriend from what seemed to be an attack from the fragile creatures, when the awful truth hit her again with velocity…
Alice never would need protection again…
Alice was gone…
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YAYAYAYAYAy I am first. great chapter Capt.B+T aka.Mom, I love this story so much.
Oooooo how are they gonna cross, Mom? Can Shane and Bette use the bridge as long as Dana is on it? And about how much time has gone by since they left home? Oh, by the way, you DO know what the O.o smiley means, right? ;)
***Sigh*** I love fairytales…
You have me speachless here. I have so many questions to ask. I will try and be patient for the next chapter.Just post it soon please *puppy dog eyes*. =)
i think alice is also okay…nobody dies in fairytales, except bad people
I still cannot believe that Alice is dead… please… and I totally agree with BetteAndTinaForever that nobody dies in fairytales ;)
Ditto, please do not like Alice be dead. Please hurry and let Bette get to Tina.
Wow, I can see Dana flying through the air with butterflies carrying her away. Then standing there holding a small golden broken heart. Something has reached Tina and hopefully it is letting her know that Bette is still in love with her and on her way to get to Tina.
Guess we are all big kids at heart. I can see a rainbow of butterflies carring Dana to the middle of the bridge. In my fairy land heart,Alice will meet them on the other side. thanks
waoooooooooooooo! another incredible one! you have me in the edge of the chair reading your chapter, i think that this already you know but you are amazing girl! the way you put the feelings, and the wonderful way that you describes the objects and actions make me read more and more about this story! i only have one question? will Alice make it? or will you let her stay die? please don’t make suffer to long! a big hug friend thanks for the chapter!
JLBT, I don’t know what to say… That was an amazing chapter. I’m glad Therese_Belivet commented before cause she does it beautifully and probably said what every single reader of yours thinks… At least I do! BTW, I’m also in denial regarding Alice’s death, but yeah, you know that already… Hope you’ll manage to fit BOF in your schedule, but I know how life can get in the way. But don’t worry, I’ll wait forever for that story!!! Thanks Captain!
O.o erm… i think we need a WARNING here… “If u have a naughty-dirty mind u cannot read fairytales” lol!!!! well done… but i prefer to have my 3rd class with Ms Porter :P
Hey! Don’t mind the story you post bc I read and enjoy all of them. I hope BATF has a point and Alice is ok somewhere…. I want to know how’s the princess doing while she waits to be rescued…
Alice can’t be dead. You said that everyone had a crucial role in helping Bette back to Tina. If Alice is dead then Tina will die too and we can’t have that now can we?
“The athletic brunette’s heart broke, shattered in thousands of pieces” : much as pieces as in these thousands of butterflies, perhaps… Ah but I cannot help but think we’ll find Alice again in the future ! After all, all is possible in fairytales… And I let you smile in front of such naive and childish state of mind, my talented storyteller ! ^_^ — God, all these magic butterflies just made me remember a particular scene of my favorite movie. Thanks for that sweet feeling, my dear JLBT. No doubt you’re the hidden wizard of this yellow-brick-road-to-Oz kind of fairytale ! — “Love… True love… Those who had sensed it and knew its meaning felt the strong influence of it in the soft wind that played with their hair… ~~~ * ~~~ * ~~~ Miles away from them, a princess, startled, awoke, grabbing the adornment around her neck… Feeling a breeze, carressing her face… Even though all the windows in her room were closed…” Oh, these last lines are simply a piece of poetry, I adore it ! This so deep and total connexion, on both the emotional and the spiritual levels, makes me think about the famous connexion scene between Jane Eyre and her far soulmate, when Jane hear the voice of Rochester calling her – far across the distances, only through true love’s miracle… Well, I already knew how much my dear talented author has sensitivity in her heart, how much everything she writes resonates like an endless and sincere tribute to the priceless four-letter L word. In this lovely tale of yours glistens the poetic part of your soul and that’s beautiful. What a wonderful human being you are. Even having never ‘really’ met you, I can feel it all the time. Bravo ! — Fond regards from your forever faithful reader.
Ok I was wrong that the butterflies didn’t bring Alice back to life Yet!!!? She can’t be dead only the badies die in fairytales.
Good chapter and I agree with pattifloatn and hope Alice will meet them on the other side. Ok post soon please, thanks
Catching up with this story after my holidays, girl you’re a poet, you have such a great way with words it’s almost unbelievable that you’re writing this in a language which isn’t your native. In fact that is the only thing that I can say in addition on all the above, they just said it all. Dankjewel voor dit ontroerende en hartverwarmende hoofdstuk.