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A shrill ringing in the night was an unwelcome sound in the house, rousing it’s occupants from their slumber.
“Babe, your phone is ringing.” Tina Kennard lightly shoved her girlfriend’s shoulder
The other occupant of the bed groaned and brushed her hair out of her face as she reached blindly onto her nightstand. “Porter?” She barked into the phone
“We need you down at the station.” A gruff voice commanded
Bette glanced at the clock next to her. “It’s 2:30 in the morning Franklin.”
“Get your ass out of bed and get down here. Now!” Franklin hung up the phone
Bette sighed and threw the covers off of her. Flinging her feet onto the floor, Bette put her elbows on her knees as she wiped the sleep from her eyes.
Tina sat up and rubbed her girlfriend’s back. “Everything ok?”
Bette turned around to smile apologetically at Tina. “It was Franklin. They need me down at the station.” She leaned over to kiss Tina. “I’m sorry.”
“It’s your job baby. I understand.” Tina smiled. “Crime doesn’t sleep.”
“Hopefully I’ll be back before you’re awake.”
“Ok.” Tina nodded and kissed Bette. “Now go see what all the fuss is about.”
Bette nodded as she got out of bed and went to the bathroom to take a quick shower before heading to the police station.
Bette walked into the station 30 minutes later, coffee in hand. Before she had even set her purse down on her desk, Franklin came up behind her.
“How nice of you to finally join us Detective.” Franklin sneered
Bette choked back a retort and instead sent Franklin a sweet smile. “Would you like to inform me why I am here at 3:00 in the morning?”
“There’s been a homicide.”
Bette felt a rush of excitement in her veins. “Tell me about it.” She said as she sat behind her desk
“I’ll do better than that; I’ll show you.” Franklin said before walking away
Bette jumped up to follow Franklin out of the station.
Bette and Franklin pulled up to an abandoned building about 15 minutes away, and Bette peered out of the windshield to inspect the graffiti and boarded up windows.
“Nice place.” Bette said, sarcasm dripping off of her words
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very intriguing….i like..definitely keep it coming
I like it very much! looking forward to the next chappy :)
oh damn.. haha.. it’s weird but as much as i love watching horror movies i’m a complete wuss and will have nightmares about the stupidest movies (after seeing The Boogeyman, which was pretty bad, i made my roommate check our closets and under my bed for weeks). ironically, i mentioned SAW when u were asking about everyone’s fav scary movie a while back. i’m already hooked on this story and can’t wait to see what happens to all the girls with Gabby’s murderer on the loose. perhaps one of the girls is the murderer? unless it’s Tonya, the evil bitch. can’t wait for the unfolding story, and blood, start! and let my nightmares begin.. *sigh*
Hey dude…so I think I already told you that I loved this, but leaving comments is lots of fun, so here I go…Awesome chapter…this story is gonna be kick ass…I love the scary/bloody shit. You write like a professional….hehe. Keep it up babe. OH! Shit. Ok…well…nevermind. I will tell you later. This is the place of poopy praising…
Game On! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Interesting…will Alice be a suspect if someone saw her and Gabby exchanging words a few days before she died? Is one of the gang a murderer? Whose next to be killed?
ok you’ve still got me. just remember no killing off dana, alice or shane. follow by those rules and we’ll be ok. ; )
yay bring on the blood! ack just joking lol great job poop! and so fast! hooray! i did a lil danish dance at their part lol this is really coming together and your doing a great job! so like everyone said keep it coming! :)
Lalala lala laaaa…oh the comment box is back! Yay! It’s getting pretty freakin’ good! I feel sorry for Alice though, even though I love seeing Gabby out of the picture. Ha, I could totally see Bette as a detective, too. And of course Franklin is back *insert dramatic music here* Well, I’ll be keeping crossed fingers for an update! Keep us the fabulous writing!
love it poopster! keep it coming!
This is fuckin’ awesome!!! You blow my mind, Baby-girl!! Hey, if Cherie is in this . . . could ya . . . maybe . . . I don’t know . . . off her too ~smiles innocently~ I told ya’, I’m an evil lil’devil! MUHA!!! Anyways, keep it comin’, and like always from me, LYLAS ;-p . . . holla
Wow, I love both Saw and Saw II…and your first chapter was so similiar with the first movie!! I’m just loving this, so different from everything else here!! Just keep it on please!! =)
Great job love the dynamic here, it’s kind of dark and when I imagine it I see onscreen :) great job Poop I look forward to the next chapter. Welcome to the double story club let’s see how well you can juggle. :)
Wow … keep it coming Poopy!!!!
Very good!! A nice dark twist for the ladies ^_-
WELL that sertainly caught my attention PPS
Let the games begin. ;)
Speaking of the crack ass of dawn it’s 7 am here. ugh. Hey poopster. This story is going to be so amazing i can sense it, you and your lil sick mind. haha. May I add that i love the danish you have here. um, keeping this short, cause i have school ALL DAY, but amesome job poopster, this story is great, seriously, can’t wait to see the crazy places you take us. I don’t think anyone besides you could ever attempt or think to write a story with this twist. I love it. Post soon hun, and have a good dayyyyy, brownie out.
Very good!!! Wow,this story is going to freaking rock!!!!! Post very soon poopy!!!!!!!
Great job. I really like it. Is one of our gang gonna be the murderer, or is it going to be someone else. I know, I know…I’ve got to wait to find out, right? Well, I’ll be right here waiting. Bette is a detective. Very nice. Does everyone else have the same jobs as in the show? I see that Alice and Dana do. See, I knew there would be Danish. Glad to see they’re in a good place with each other. OT, but yesterday I was at my brother’s hockey game. I went to the snack stand and was reading the big sign of what they had. The very last thing on the sign was “Danish”. I had a big smile on my face the rest of the day. Everyone was wondering why, seeing as my brother’s team lost. See, I try to not be obsessed, but outside forces are working against me. Anyway, great job. I really do like it alot. I can’t wait to read more.
Ah a story with great potential. Good to see everyboby in a happy place (for now) and of course some really good AlShaDane and Danish…what could I ask for! Keep it up…
OK patricia Cornwell hasn’t written anything new for a while…..Thank you Poopy
wow..this is all really interesting! I LOVE IT! you rock my world poopy! i can’t wait to read more!!