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Broken Dreams
Bette Porter was exhausted. She just couldn’t wait to go home to her wife Tina and just relax for the night and forget all about the california arts centre. Sighing she turned on the cd player so she could listen to some music to make the drive home more enjoyable.
Finally reaching her street bette quickly pulled into her driveway. Grabbing her briefcase and purse she got out of the car and walked up to her front door.
“T, Sweetheart I’m home” Bette called as she walked in her front door.
Closing the door she turned and saw her wife sitting down on the couch with packed bags sitting near her.
“T what’s going on? where are you going” Bette asked
“Bette please sit down I need to talk to you” Tina replied
Confused Bette did as she asked sitting down in an armchair.
Taking a deep breath Tina just decided to blurt it out.
“Bette I want a separation”
“What!…. why Bette stammered feeling the start of tears in her eyes
“I haven’t been feeling happy in our relationship for awhile I especially haven’t been happy since my miscarriage. I’ve also been having strong feelings for men as well. Tina explained
“So what you’ve just decided you want a separation without talking about all of this with me? Bette asked feeling like the walls were crashing in around her
"I couldn’t talk to you about it. I needed to sort it out in my own head first, and then when it came down to it, I didn’t want to hurt you. There’s nothing to discuss, it’s how I feel. It’s what I want."
“That’s it, seven years just gone?” Bette asked
"It’s not gone. That’s the point. I don’t want the last 7 years to be ruined because we’re still here clinging on to something that’s dead. I want the memories of us to be good." Tina pleaded with her eyes, because the memories would be all they could have left.
“I guess that no matter what I say I can’t make you change your mind Bette said
“I’m sorry was all Tina offered
Bette couldn’t answer her she was too busy crying.
Tina watched her, Bette’s pain was tearing at her, but she had to leave, there was no other choice.
"I have a new place, I’m not going to fight you for this one. I think…I should go. I’m so sorry."
Bette bent over more hugging herself as she continued crying feeling her heart breaking into thousands of tiny pieces.
She heard Tina stand up and approach the table and placing her house key there before moving back over and picking up her bags and walking out.
Quickly getting to her feet Bette ran over to the front door yanking it open and looking for Tina. She saw her getting into the drivers seat
“Tina don’t go” Bette screamed
Bette I’m sorry but it’s over Tina told her and with that tina got in the car and drove away.
Not being able to stand up anymore Bette collapsed on the porch.
TBC.
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(41 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
Oh Jebus what a first chappy eh?Ima tag along, see how it all pans out
Well, I doubt that you wrote this w/o any other chapters done, so just put it our there. Nice another person who just walked out on Bette, one that she gave her all to and truly loved, nice.
oh no the walls are closing in…cant breathe…..its season2 all over again
You’ve intrigued me, please continue. I’d like to see where this is going.
I say keep writing the story. This is definitely a different beginning. I’m intrigued. I don’t understand people who read just to criticize. Utter ignorance.
well, this was certainly different and unexpected
wow that was was friggin’ cold of Tina…
Gosh!!! That was BRUTAL! That can not be the end of it, is it. Is it going to end like that??? Tina was a hugh, cold, and heartless “B”!
Damn what the hell, that is sad and heartbreaking, poor Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Man…did Tina give Bette time to breathe before she knocked the wind out of her with that ish? Tina said feelings for a man…I think maybe she is depressed because she just lost the baby…so maybe this can be fixed. You ARE gonna fix it right? We like Bette happy…(but please no Helena…make up a new character or something f you’re gonna pair Bette up (temporarily). As in science alot of positives cancel out a negative so keep that in mind when reading
my bad…hit a wrong key…I wanted to say when reading the comments.
Okay I am back because this haunted me all damn day…okay Tina said she wanted a seperation then on the way out the door she said it was over. You have to fix this. This can’t be the end. She already has a place? Does she already have a man lined up? Will Candace play a part in this story? Please post soon.
I’m a big Tibetter at heart, so can you reveal if this is going to be a happy B&T story in the end??…..or do you have other plans with them???
Another D.S.S. – make no sensestop writing this kind of D.S.S
Hmmm… not sure where it’s going, but I am along for the ride. Heart-wrenching start, but captivating none-the-less. Please continue soon.
You have captured the audience and drawn them in. I agree with Emae29, you got my attention, so you now have another reader along for the ride. ;-) Continue on!
Wow!! That was painful to read. Thanks for this new painful start. I only hope Bette can be happy. This poor woman has had to endure so much in our little fan fic world. Thanks!! I look forward to the next chapter!
kg why do you read at all? This is a different beginning. lets see where you are going to take us. thanks for posting
Good dramatic start – looking forward to more
So much happened in this one chapter. Could this be the end, with a flashback to how this came about being the story? Thanks!
oh my freak! now that was heartbreaking on a level 10…please come back and update this was gonna be too good.