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Soft Spoken (episode 5)
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Episode 5
I came back into the cabin a while after the horse incident to find Shane sitting at the kitchen table, a cigarette poised between her lips.
“You know kissing a smoker is like licking an ashtray, right?” I said with a grin. She took one last drag on the small bud, then tossed it into the ashtray on the table. I’ve come to realize that Shane uses cigarettes like the people in those Twix commercials. When she needs more time to think of a comeback she just lights one up!
“Well ashes must not taste that bad because I haven’t had any complaints.” Yeah, she thinks she’s smooth.
I shook my head. “I bet the girls were too high to remember the kissing part of the evening anyways!”
She laughed, then said “Well Dana, if you’re really that curious why don’t you find out?” She puckered her lips and I grimaced.
“Ewww! I’d rather kiss Alice!” I joked. She raised her eyebrows and turned her head, trying to hide a smirk.
“Would you now? Hey, speaking of Al, I think we broke her. She hasn’t left the room since we’ve gotten back.”
I glanced toward the door. “I’m almost afraid to go in there.” I said. Alice had fallen asleep in the car on the way back from the stables and Shane and I had had to carry her inside. Who knows what kind of state she was in now. I took a breath and gripped the doorknob.
“Good luck!” Shane snickered. I braced myself and opened the door.
“DanaDanaDanaDanaDanaDana!”
I shut the door.
“Well?” Shane asked from the kitchen as I stood there stunned.
“The hyperactive stage.” I replied. “I’m going in!” I called over my shoulder, and opened the door again.
“DanaDanaDanaDanaDanaDana!”
“Yeah?” I asked hesitantly.
“DanaDanaDanaDanaDanaDana!”
“Oh my God, what woman?!” I flailed my arms as Alice bounced up and down on the bed excitedly.
“I learned how to make a pizza box!” I stared at her blankly, thinking that maybe she had gone clinically insane while I was out.
“Um, Al? Are you on something?”
She rolled her eyes at me. “No, seriously! I was watching this TV show where they tell you how to make things out of different materials. This weeks special: cardboard! Look!” She pointed to a mass of flat cardboard crudely stuck together with duct tape. I looked at it once and winced.
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1st ….brb. Happy dance!!
I’m first….YES,YES, YES!!!! Okay, great chapter. I love the banter that goes on between Alice and Dana. It’s such a hoot ! Alice telling Dana, “If there were markers as to how far people got on this fucker, there would be ‘easy, medium, hard, slight chance of death, good chance of death, death, and sure death,’ we would be at sure death. Are you happy now? You’ve killed me. I’m surely dead.” She’s dead and still bitchin’. Classic Alice. Thanks and post soon.
*almost dies laughing* Okay, this one totally made up for that long wait-at least it felt like a long wait! Oh and that line ‘kissing a smoker is like licking an ashtray’ pure genious, dork! Just don’t leave us hangin too long for the next one and just maybe nobody will interupt Alice or Dana’s love confession next time;) Anyway I’ll try to post something soon but until then, keep up the fuckin awsome work!
Might have had to hate you if you had left it there, so thanks for making the post a little longer! Somehone I think going down the mountain could be even more dangerous for these two. Oh, and the pizza box thing was hysterical. Update soon(er).
ooooo i would of renamed you theEVILdorkoftheyear if you had ended it! so glad you didnt :) loved this chap so cute! i gotta say damn that guy for ruining such a moment! growl! lol plz update soon!
“That, my friend, is not a hill. That is a fucking mountain. A mountain of death” hahahaha!! just one of several great lines fromthis chapter! can’t wait for u to have them act on their mutual attraction. until then i look forward to more of their close encounters. great post!!
Great update! Love the banter, you’ve got Alice and Dana down nicely. I loved Alice’s degree of difficulty breakdown she gave of the hike. It’s all so Classic Alice. Don’t leave us hanging too long, thanks to you I am wearing down the edge of my seat.
Great job. I loved this update. The tension is rising! I have to agree with Poopy-Sh*t. Let them make out already! Haha. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to read more.
Love this – you capture them well, I can almost hear them talking. Please post again soon.
Dork! Nice to have you back babe! I really missed this story! I know it really hasnt been that long since you updated, but I love this story and missed it nonetheless. This chapter was brilliant. I love the Danish banter, you have it down perfect. I kinda hate you for interrupting our girls, again, but I know that the tension will lead to a bog climax (in more than one way!) Please update again soon, and have Danish fucking make out already!
Loved this chapter, the banter between the 3 characters is awesome =D Loved the dana and alice hiking, reminded me of the rules of attraction scene from season 2! Great work, update soon!
Oh my god that’s SO fucking cute!! they’re so funny, they’re like perfect. we would’ve killed you if you left it at “would you hate me if i did” well at least i would’ve. ahh this story is driving me mad, ican’t wait to see what happens next!!! they’re so closeeee. i love it! please continue asap!
Love this story, like everybody I like the banter between those two very much. And when you throw Shane in the mix it’s all good. Looking forward to some hot Danish make out session…so I’ll be looking forward to the next update!
lol Yeah, that image with the two of them and the sunset just popped into my head. It would be awesome if that would have happened. :P Loved the updates, it was hilarious! I can totally see the Pizza-box thing and Alice complaining while walking. I’m with the others, I’m so glad you didn’t finish this story any sooner! But next time they will kiss right…or at least let their lips touch. Please..pretty please. :D
this is great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next with alice and dana please post soon grea update I love it