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Lucky in Love (Chapter 12)
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In the moment, it felt right to not pursue the conversation. They had, in fact, shared the most perfect day they’d had together since before Angelica was conceived. But that was yesterday and today, both Tina and Bette regretted not saying what each had planned to say to the other. After everything that had gone wrong between them, they were still in synch, though neither knew it. Tina called and invited Bette to talk seconds before Bette could do the same. They agreed to have lunch at Mandarette while Angus and Kit sat with Angelica.
“I’m not saying I didn’t jump to conclusions,” Carmen said to Shane’s amusement. “I am saying that you could have said you were doing something for Dana and couldn’t talk about it. Sometimes I think you like to make me crazy. Maybe we should talk about that with Dr. Lynch.”
“It’s not couples therapy, Carm,” Shane said automatically before it dawned on her. “Wait, you’ll go?”
“Only if you’ll stop yanking my chain for your own pleasure.” Carmen flashed a brief smile.
“Can I help it if you wear your Latin fire on your sleeve? Shane said with a straight face. “It’s hot.”
“You may make me crazy,” Carmen said, ”but you are one of my favorite people.” She leaned in and brushed her lips against Shane’s. The spark between them curled their toes. Carmen pulled back just far enough so that their lips were no longer in contact. “This could be dangerous,” she whispered.
“I have more work to do before I can ask you to take me back,” Shane said softly. “But you’ve spoiled me for casual relationships.” She shifted back in her chair, breaking the spell.
“You expect me to believe that you’re not out there hooking up every night?” Carmen laughed.
“I’m not,” Shane said defensively. “I’ve been with one person since you left…an old friend and it only proved two things.”
“Which are?”
“Number one, that we acted out of nostalgia and really are better friends than lovers.” Shane leveled her gaze on Carmen.
“And number two?” Carmen held Shane’s eyes.
“That the only person I want to be with is you.”
“I don’t know if we’ll ever be there again,” Carmen sat back in her chair and sipped her coffee.
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Good for Carmen, not giving into her fiery latina spirit. I love this story great job…And thanks for the Sharmen!!! :)
i’m not sure about bob, is that a feeldoe? Like Tina taking the initiative with Bette, and Carman and Shane, also Lara and Helena now match!!! PPS
I meant Lara and Helena are a nice match..
I would hope that Bette meets Tina half way. I fund out a long time ago that love is 100 percent from each party not 50. Helena and lara are good together. thanks
um yeah… that was a pretty hot ending there. i like bob, you should write more about bob. haha.
So I figured out what my problem is. First of all, sorry again for forgetting to comment on the last chap. I think what’s happening, is that I read your stuff too late at night. SO when i am done reading it, I am too tired to leave you a worthy comment, so I tell myself that I will do it the next day. The problem is, I am retarded and never remember to go back and actually leave it! lol. I almost forgot this time too! Sorry about that my friend. Anywahys, on to your chapter. I loved it! It was awesome and well written as always, and damn…thanks for the end! Danish NC-17 = Happy suzie! You’re doing a great job! Can’t wait for the next and sorry again for being a bit forgetfull!
Excellent update. You made me wait all the way til the end, but what an ending it was! Great job. You did a wonderful job writing. Keep it up. I can’t wait for more.
I am glad Tina owned her mistakes in this relationship…that is a step in the right direction. Give Bette some time to take all that in and hopefully they will be on the right path.
I dunno about you, but for me, season 4 is going to be a looong, tough ride without danish, that’s for sure. That’s why I’m happy about such cool stories like yours. And yeah, I like Bob too, lol.
I don’t know how you do it, but with every chapter you make me love Danish even more and more (and no, not just because of Bob ;)). I liked the way you described Dana’s first day on the court in the last chapter. It was heartbreaking, but she’s a strong woman. LaRena is still going strong and they’re really opening up to each other. Helena deserves such a sweet person as Lara. It’ll take the best out of her. Love the fact that Shane and Carmen as on speaking terms. I can’t wait to see what you’ve got planned for them.
I love Bob thanks for making their lives better..LOL! I think you’re doing an amazing job in writing some really good Danish. I have to admit that that is what attracts me to the story most. So the more the better. Keep it up!
I love this and can’t wait to see what will happen next and I have a few ideas of what will happen next but I do not want to say what they are but one of them was that dana would train with harrison which by the look of it she will be doing so great update please post soon
Hey the Sharmen part was really good.I think it´s the first time I´m reading something from you and it´s pretty good!!!!
Wow I sooooooo love this story. Don’t have an internet connection at home just now so i keep sneeking into Uni just to check if you’ve posted :)
Great update. As you may have guested am all about the danish but i am really enjoying the insite in to the other realationships too, the way that you are buliding on bette and tina is really good. I must admit that I did not really think helena and lara would work but the more i read the more that am getting in to them. update soon!
Great Stuff!!! Love where Bette & Tina seem to be going…Alice & Dana…what can I say I love the way you are writing them…love love…And Yes, please bring back Charlie…I can see Alice getting jealous of the dog…could prove for some good comedy!!!
It’s officially official – I’m hooked!
I’m lovin’ my Sharmen girls!!! Please keep it up and I want more Sharmen!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS =D
well, if I could, I’d leave you 5 stars…as it is , I’m still loving your version of the L universe. If only. keep up the good work, I’ll certainly be reading! Thanks!
I went without the Internet for about a month and a half, and was just giddy when I ghot connected again to find that you were still going with the story! I’ve been hooked since the first installment of Life Choice, but I absolutely love the way you’ve given us a glimpse into the other relationships aside from Danish. Anyway, I loved this one as I love them all…great character development here (methinks IC could learn a lot from ya!)