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    Pick-up Styx – 2

    Story written on September 17, 2006 by pancha305.
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    Bette’s life begins to change….

    Pick-up Styx
    A Surprise Visitor
    chapter 2

    Bette’s pool – the next night

    “Bette Porter, I presume.”

    Bette looked up in surprise from her laptop. What she saw was a beautiful, mature woman who exuded power and passion.

    As Shane was about to step out onto the pool deck, she saw the two women and stopped. She saw Bette approach the woman with her hand extended.

    They shook hands, retained the grip just a little longer than necessary and looked at each other. Shane wasn’t sure who the other woman was, but she knew one thing. Bette and this woman were attracted to each other.

    Shane quietly stepped back into her house and noticed that neither woman had realized she was there.

    Bette and the other woman released hands and the guest walked around the pool, looking at the garden and talking. Bette didn’t take her eyes from her visitor. Then they moved toward the house and Shane watched Bette open the door, usher her guest in first and gently put her hand on the woman’s back in an affectionate gesture to guide her through the door.

    Shane hadn’t seen Bette look at someone this way and use this type of body language since she and Tina were a couple….a happy couple. She returned to her kitchen, sat down and drank a beer by herself.

    If Bette had had this women in the wings, no wonder she wasn’t interested in Tessa or the other women Shane had herded her way. This lady was beautiful and electric and, unless Shane’s antenna had gone completely dead, she was very interested in Bette.

    The Planet – that evening

    “So, you’re leaving tomorrow morning,” Kit said into her cell phone.
    ……………………
    “And you don’t know when you’re coming back?”
    …………………….
    “Doesn’t your job start……?”
    ……………………
    Oh, ok, you’ll be back in plenty of time for that.”

    The next morning

    Bette looked out the window of the private jet and watched Los Angeles disappear. She unbuckled her seat belt and looked at her hostess who was sitting in an easy chair across from her.

    “How about some breakfast?”

    “Sounds great. May I help?”

    The Senator grinned, gestured Bette back to her comfortable chair and walked to the galley. Bette watched her backside with real appreciation and settled back into her chair.
    Barbara returned with coffee, juice, baked goods and fruit.

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    1. Hey, Pancha….Girl, you made a lot of people deleriously happy. LOL. Looks like you brought the “SexyBack”, eh? I think this pairing should be nicknamed ‘BaBe’. How’s that?? I am sorry that you’ve not completely recovered but hopefully writing will help speed that process along. You’ve taken a hope that I’ve had, that is, Bette and the Senator, and made it a reality. It is the perfect pairing for Bette, IMHO. Two beautiful, intelligent, accomplished, assertive but sensitive alpha type women having an opportunity for longterm happiness if they so wish. I like how directly Barbara expressed her feelings to Bette rather than being coy and having Bette decide if she should make a move. The ball is in your court, Bette! This story in your capable hands has the promise to be one of the classics in fanficdom. Now to comment on what I meant by having “your fingerprints” on this story. All that follows iis only my opinion and is not intended to slight any other fanfic writers out there. You are all winners in my book b/c you had the courage to place your thoughts and ideas out there for people like me who don’t participate but just criticize. First off, it was a complimentary remark and I hope you accepted it as that. In my mind, every accomplished author on this site has a distinct, unique and developed writing style that most readers enjoy. Those writers can be discerned by the awards they’ve received and the number of hits on their chapters. Everyone who is deserving can’t win so the the process is quite selective. To get back to the point I was making. You, Pancha, explain issues and the characters thoughts so completely and most interestingly that I know it is you that is writing, e.g. Bette’s backstory describing the courtesan and what that involved and now The Twink. Your explanations are detailed and meticulously written but also very intriguing w/o being pedantic. They say “The devil’s in the details” and that is so true w/your stories. I enjoy the complexity and description that you so lovingly craft in each and every chapter. When I see that you’ve posted another chapter, I revel in the knowledge that pure reading enjoyment is about to be served. It seems to me that you must have a job that entails attention to detail or writing of a scientific or legal nature. That’s just my hunch. You are definitely in the upper echelon of fanfic writers.

    2. LOL@funnyone – Barbette, i like it…well, as TiBetter i of course want to see the future changed but if Bette has to be with someone other than Tina, senator is a great choice…i was glad bette didn’t have sex with her but their scene was sexy as hell with only talking and touching…i want to see where it’s going, good choice, pancha…though as missyang i don’t see them together for a long term, as a healing process perhaps?

    3. Interesting. As mentioned b4, I don’t suspect that this will be a long term pairing. What will be the springboard for angst or conflict? Maybe the “push and pull” of Tina and Angelica. Somehow I feel you will go another route. But, for the meantime, may I suggest Babette. I know you have no problem with bittersweet endings as with After Loving You. I literally cried at the end, BTW. Of course, I was not so tainted then. At any rate, I am not sure where you will go with this one, but it will be interesting.

    4. And here I am thinking all these years that a Bar-ette was something to hold your hair back… I believe I like this definition FAR better. They make a classy coupling; it was SO evident the chemistry they had in the DC hotel scene. KIC,please.

    5. OK, Bette and the Senator… that’s just hotter than a firecracker on the fourth of July! Bring it on, baby! I love this idea. Please continue with it. I always wondered what would have happened if they had slept together last season… well, besides great sex, that is. Heyyyy take me along for the fantasy. I am all packed and ready to go!”Hi, my name is Emae and I am a Betteaholic”

    6. Well, well, well. Anything that has The Senator aka Dana Delany in it gets my vote of awesomeness! WOOOOOOOOOOT! I’m liking this. The Senator and her mistress. This should be really good. I can’t say how much I like this enough.

    7. I am jumping on the band wagon and agreeing w/ everyone else that I am glad it was the senator and not HELENA! This is going to be an interesting ride. Even though they didn’t do “anything” you could “feel” the sexual tension. I just want Bette to have happiness (even though I am a diehard Tibette believer).

    8. oh this is going to be good. i thought the senator was a good match for our bette. she need to be with her equal, and the senator fits the bill. great start.

    9. I’ve really enjoyed both installments of your story so far. I was hoping for a big screen rendition at some point, but with Dana in the “Kidnapped ” series, probably not.We can only hope, right? Thanks for writing! Keep up the great work! astroy so far.ns so far. I was hoping for a big screen reconnection at some point, but since now the senator is in “Kidnapped”, not loojking so great. I’m sure she has a lot of wisdom and mentor like things to share with our Bette. Just really loved their chemistry. Thanks for writing! I’ll be readin!

    10. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! …Bette deserves some consideration after the meat grinder she’s been through with Tina!!! The senator knows about fishing, something that Bette doesn’t. I’m sure that’s not a position that Bette finds herself in often, with a woman who is commensurate with herself (or better)in intellect and refinement. Now that Barbara’s husband is deceased, a possible affair can be pursued with guilt. Hurray for you, Pancha! You’ve made my day with this breath of fresh air. I do believe this is the first Barbara/Bette fic. What shall we call this ‘ship – BarBette???? …Thank you!

    12. YES! YES! YES! **happy dance, loud singing, more happy dance** It’s the SENATOR! I wanted Bette to have sex with her on the “50,000 rug” back in Washington, during S3…hopefully if all goes well (wink, wink, pancha) I will get my wish in this story ? Please?

    13. So senator Barbara is the object of Bette’s affections – big Yay! They were ultra yum. I look forward to each chapter. You’re a Texas fan. I was so willing Texas to ream Ohio St. – I still harbor Deep – deep bitterness over their bogus National Championship in 02 – What Penalty? Sorry – to much info. Great story:)

    16. OMGGGGGGGGGG!!! I’m screaming – Its the SENATOR!!!!!!!!!! This is going to be a very good story indeed! I love the class that exudes from this woman’s pores. Already looking for the next chapter!!

    17. Oooh! Goody, goody, the russet senator returns! Hands down, she’s the sexiest thing that ever hit the show that didn’t actually involve sex. But you’ll fix that, won’t you pancha? And besides, not being around for the bathroom renovation is a godsend as much as an intelligent and understanding lover.

    18. Pure Class pancha the Senator comes back to get Bette, now I’m really going to enjoy reading your story, Barbara is one smart sexy lady…will christen these two “BBe”, lol….Thank goodness Bette is fine, thanks pancha.

    20. pancha YOU ROCK!!! It’s the Senator…!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this. that scene was sooooo sizzling hot, and not even a kiss in it..I love this, and can’t wait for more, more more..now that they are both free..did I mention I love this???? Barbara is such a lovely classy woman and is taking such good care of Bette. I think she might be able to help her with getting to see Angelica, but in the meanwhile…it’s gonna be HOT..I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS..feel better pancha!!!

    23. Hmmm, I had a feeling… I loves me some senator seduction. Glad to see you feeling good enough to write and post. I wish your football team well as well. : )

    24. Hmmm… the Senator. She’s hot, but I can’t see their future together. Will Bette be her mistress or something? I don’t think Bette needs that. She’d be lost herself on the senator.

    25. Wow…the Senator…that was unexpected. I am glad Bette has someone to actually take care of her and let her relax and just be. She needed this…I don’t know where this will go or how they would work that out across the country from one another but for right now she was the answer to what Bette needed at this moment in her life. I just want Bette happy (without anyone named Helena).

    27. OOOOOOO I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING……ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL PANCHA……DONT THINK IVE SEEN A FIC WITH THE SENATOR AND BETTE…..BUT WHAT A WONDERFUL THING…..PLEASE……CONTINUE SOON…..

    28. The moment the Senator came up, I was like..but she is married..and then poof, her husband passed away..phew lol thanks for not having B starting out on a wrong foot. I think Henry Kissinger said ‘Power is an aphrodisiac’ boy..look like Bette is in a very lovely time with a powerful Senator :) And your point about joyous eaters are spotted on!

    29. I was like curioust at first. I was thinking, “Your idea of making Bette have a relationship is to hook her up with a married woman?” Yeah yeah I know “ye of so little faith.” But hey I can dig the dead husband bit. Wait…there’s no guarantee the senator is the other half of the couple in this story, is there? No I’m not suggesting Tina since we’ve already established the story ain’t goin’ there. It’s just that the senator is hot and I might cry if she’s not the one.

    30. HELL YEAH!!!! Bring it on!! Senator seduction all the way. Could not be more please with the prospect of vividly picturing Bette and Barbara through your writing. So Pancha make it great…….I mean that scene on the show was hot so lets keep that trend going.

    31. Okay, so the senator is back!To be honest when I first heard about the sentaro I did not think there would be chmeitry but after seeing that non-kiss I changed my mind. I think that had to be one of the sexiest non-kiss scene(kudos to JB and DD for pulling that off) I agree I don’t really see a future with the senator and Bette but I think they could bring each happiness for a moment. Post soon!

    33. I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I thought it might be the Sen. Grisham! Love where this is going! You are absoutely the best, AND I liked that of course you had Shane being able to pick up on that. I find it strange that Bette took of for a what was it month? and I hope she was able to talk to Shane that she’d be back, after that begging tone of hers asking Bette “You wouldn’t move would you?” So…no Shane, no..twink…no Tina….and I agree with someone..who stated this doesn’t scream future…but Barbara is to Bette what Helena was to Tina S2 so she made need this boast.Oh yeah No Helena…(DAMN)….you did mention Alice in there…is this a BeLice? Unless you plan to make the Sen. move..which…wow…how are you going to do that? I mean…when is her term up?…you already gave us teh reassurance of Bette staying in Cali. Well I guess I’ll wait to see. Also it is because of you that I now look at USC’s football games…I was watching FLorida and Tennessee and I came across the USC game, they did a pan of the stadium and all I could think about was Bette sitting it the seat looking at the cheerleaders and Tina jumping up and down cheering, thanks alot! :)

    38. I dont know who is the Most Classic,YOU, the Senator or Bette Portor Barbara has wanted Bette for a long long time, as bette have wanted her. thanks for a wonderful chapter Bette is on her way to great things thanks so much thanks

    40. It’s the senator…it’s the senator!!!!! I am jumping up and down with joy!! Washington DC via China Beach meets LA….love it!!!!!!!! Can I download Chapter Three on I Tunes now? I would happily pay for it!! Thanks Pancha.

    42. AWESOME! I think this will be great, since the scene between those two was so hot without a kiss or a piece of clothing shed! It’s also interesting how you have so many hard-core Tibetters rooting for this story. It does make sense…they are both in transition. I agree that it’s probably not a long-term connection, but it’s probably right on time for the both of them! Reading more of these comments, I truly understand why you are a legend here, and I am glad I can start this story from the beginning! Continue your healing process, and please post again soon!

    46. I’m gonna just keep hitting next page because i know somewhere in here there’s a secret page hidden from us. ….NO, well i guess i’ll just be good girl and wait. please please post soon. PEACE.

    47. Glad you watched USC at the Coloseum because of my story where Tina made Bette go with her to see the Trojans. I’ve always admired the USC program, and my mom, who graduated from there thought it was a good school. THe Coloseum is one of the greatest sports venues in the world. I saw part of the 84 Olympics there. Having said all of that: Hook-em Horns!

    48. After JB comes DD foe me always so I loved their scenes together and as devoted as I am to TiBette I always have thought Barbra and Bette would make a great combo…very sophisticated…BUT…long term???? hmmm maybe/maybe not…lets see what you make of ’em….PPS

    50. Hey Pancha – I’ve no idea why I’m reading this story, because I’m a BIIIIIG TiBette fan……maybe it has something to do with your great and amazing writing :o)) But in the end all I want is to see Bette and Tina happy, preferable with each other….but I sence that probably isn’t going to happen in this story or can that change?????? LOL. Anyway I think I’m hooked, strangely enough…. :o))

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