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Cut to the Chase: Chapter 9
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Tap tap tap. Tap tap tap. Tina stared out the window, flicking her pen against the desk. She watched the rain pound the ground. It was unlike LA to experience this weather. It was after six o’clock on a Friday evening and Tina had no plans for the night. She couldn’t shake an edginess off of her. She felt restless but didn’t know what she wanted to do. Tina knew that if she were honest with herself, this anxiety and excitability was Bette Porter.
Bette and Tina only met once during the week and it was brief. As much as they both wanted to keep meeting secretly, they both knew it was becoming more and more difficult, not only because of schedule conflicts but because friends were beginning to become suspicious. Neither one knew how to remedy the situation.
Tina turned off her computer and grabbed her bag. As she ran to her car, her cell phone rang.
“Hello?” Tina was breathless.
“T?”
“Hi Bette.”
“Are you ok?”
“Fine. I just ran through the rain to get to my car. You caught me just as I closed the door. How are you?” Tina’s voice softened.
“Good. I wanted to let you know that I’m running late tonight and I won’t be over to get Angelica for another hour. Is that ok? I wasn’t sure if you had plans.”
“That’s fine. I’m in for the night.” Tina confessed. “I’m picking up some food. Want to have dinner with me?”
Tina’s jaw dropped. Did she just invite Bette over for dinner? She bit down on her lip and silently cursed herself. Where did that sudden outburst come from? She and Bette didn’t do dates. They did sex. The only other time they ate together was in NY, but they were naked in the process. This seemed very date-ish.
There was a silence on the line. Tina panicked. “I’m sorry, Bette. I don’t know why I just asked that. It was a natural impulse. Please don’t feel pressured. I’m sure you’re busy and I know this isn’t part of our deal.”
“I’d love to.”
“What?”
“I’ll bring the wine. See you in an hour.”
The line went dead and Tina’s heart exploded. She took a deep breath to steady herself. Trying her best not to freak out, she tried to get home as quickly as possible.
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Glad I stayed in for lunch..Delicious..Thanks!
bette and Tina were busted.but by sh\Shane that was good. thanks
They can’t actually believe they’re fooling anyone at this point, can they?
thans for the blackout…just as well shane knows how to keep her mouth shut, PPS
LMAO!!! 1st Kit notices that Bette smells like Tina’s perfume; now Shane & the SAME outfit. These both just need to end the charade.
This story is such a fun read!too bad Angelica can’t talk..that would have been funny if she so innocently busted them..lol! I just looovvveee those one-liner endings…classic!
well shane never misses a trick… i wish they would just tell the girls… but i do love the way they are handling things…
Very Fun chapter and very funny with the “popular outfit” !! Yeah, right! Excellent story, fareast – please post again soon….. Are you enjoying the nice warm summer weather here in mid-sept.? Smiles To You …. :o)
Well this is getting way too funny….the wholes are eve so present…
lol…loved it…who in the world do they think they are foolin…they aren’t even foolin themselves…lol
Yoda knows!! so how long are they going to go before they tell everyone what’s up? i think kit suspects as well.
I’m really enjoying this story! Thanks for sharing and updating so often.
I am so loving this story.
Damn, busted!…Again!!! …you’ve got me laughing and smiling and enjoying my Tibetter self – again! How much would it cost to have you post daily? I’m sure a hefty sum could be collected! Thanks!
Man, I have not stopped laughing (out loud, by the way) from the first chapter. This is great!!
They are going to have to fess up before long. Its not like everyone else doesn’t know; but they need to admit to themselves, first, how they feel.
Just once – the weather is lovely, though it’s hard to enjoy when I’m in class.
This story is just sheer delight! What a fun and creative circumstances. Keep’em coming! I know they’re busted but drag it out as long as possible.
Damn they are hot and funny. I think the gang know about Bette and Tina sneak around and they just want to play game with them and let them tell them that they are back together. Hope you understand what Im saying. OK post soon please, thanks!
Shane has put it together and so has Kit. Shane is a lot closer to catching them because of the outfit. They should date it would fun to watch them date and get to know one another again.
Cats out of the bag now.
These two just need to start officially seeing each other again, before they get totally busted. Thankfully, Shane,aka Yoda won’t say anything. Kit cracks me u p.
Okay, it’s been six months, where are u????
AHHAHAH BUSTED AHAHHA, Bette and Tina are so cute and sweet and well they need to do something now or the gang gonna get them lol. Just finish reading all of your stories and loving it and please post more of Tibette’s story, thanks!
love the humor, the fun, the passion, the cuteness…. just great. post soon :)
LOL BUSTED!
the best thing to read on monday morning before dreary work, thank you….gotta love black outs and yoda…love this story…can’t wait for B&T next move
When I saw the chapter title I thought one of them would get completely trashed or something. Black outs (the kind caused by crappy weather) can be fun. ;)
just the way to start a monday morning. thanks it was excellent. not sure about the dating thingy. it can be scary.
Bette and Tina should just come clean. They don’t have to say they are back together, because they are not. But, they can go ahead and admit they are seeing each other. I love this story.
What a wonderful way to wake up on a rainy Monday morning in Seattle. Thanks!!
tks, a great start to the week…
“Popular outfit”, “Right”. This is too much fun. They are so busted. Wha a great post to start off the week. Thanks.
I am truly enjoying the lighthearted tone and dialogue you’ve created! Please continue!
Bette was so cute here woth Shane, but Shane is like’ totally the only person on the planet who can actually keep a secret’ so hopefully it will work out well for B and T
Hhahhahahahahahhaaa Shane bought her the outfit LMFAO Bette is quick though ‘Populair outfit’ O.o LMFAO! This is going the right way ;) Its so cute that everybody knows but B and T dont see that!
Sweet.
the gang is really enjoying this ‘secret’ romance!!!! so am I… PPS
I do believe you’re right, that the LA girl wouldn’t really know what to do in a rain storm. ;) The image of Bette standing at Tina’s door I expect will stay with me most of the day, as it’s pouring rain outside. I loved the opening paragraphs… I could feel the itch of restlessness that Tina was experiencing. Just a wonderful chapter that has a smile stretched across my face. Thanks
That was soo funny. Post soon. Thanks for takin the time.
awesome- thanks for the update.
Hiya Fareast, That was delightful; So full of fun and playfulness as Bette and Tina tried to play it cool and convince themselves that a date was the last thing that was happening to both of them but we all knew exactly what it was. And as for the finale; perfection! Shane was just a darling with her timely quip. Both Bette and Tina think that they are playing in smart and cool as now both Kit and Shane now the cause of the smiles and secret glances. Thankfully they both know how to hold their tongues. This is such a ride. Reading it just creates such a genuine high and puts a smile on the face for the rest of the day. So thank you for such a cheerful and inspiring Monday wake-up call. Your Loyal Fan.
Had finished all your stories with this one too.Really love all of them,please come back soon!
I have just finished reading your stories and loved them all. I’m sorry to see this one wasn’t finished, but it was still amazing and really entertaining!