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    Those Adoring Eyes – Epilogue

    Story written on September 19, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    The Two Piece Puzzle of the Soul. (Part 4 of 4)

    Those Adoring Eyes – (Epilogue)

     

    I looked at Tina’s face as she watched me in silence, so many things said between us over the years had no words to them, we silently communicated, and we did so now, we smiled at one another and turned, and hand in hand, we made our way back.

     

    When I got back home that night I sat at the table and I wrote the words that were swirling around in my head, they came easily, I was inspired.

     

    My son inspired me.

     

    She inspired me.

     

    The beach inspired me.

     

     

    Has the sea brought us together,

    Is it only for today….?

    Will you take me in your arms for now,

    Just to go away?

     

    Is the loved that we shared,

    Stronger than the pain,

    Can it erase the loneliness,

    When teardrops fell like rain?

     

    As I stand before you,

    And gaze upon your face

    I wonder of a new beginning,

    One with dignity and grace.

     

    I hear you whisper softly,

    Of a love that never dies,

    And I see in you forever…

    In your adoring eyes.

     

     

    I read the words back to myself and I smile, I look up then, into her eyes, the eyes that had been watching me, watching since we got back from the beach, those adoring eyes.

     

    I pass the piece of paper to her; this was about her, about us…

     

    I watch her as she reads my words, the words I had poured from my heart onto the paper show now held, as her adoring eyes took in each line I saw the tears well.

     

    She looked at me then and I knew, as she did, that is what we had all along, we both got lost, we both felt incomplete, but we had a love that never dies, and we still did, the embers of our love were still burning, they just needed to be tended and cared for, with gentleness and compassion, and we would do it. 

     

    Together, forever.

     

    ……………………………………………………………………………….

     

    I look up at the blue sky, feeling the warmth of the afternoon sun on my face. I smile as I sit here alone with my back against the rock, remembering. 

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    12. Jo you writing continues to amaze me and you do take my breath away and this post today was no exception. Absolutely beautiful and the poems, oh the poems, there are not enough words to describe how you’ve made me feel today. The poems said it all. True love does and can exist. Thank you.

    15. Ugh….. such hope and beauty. Tenderness and love. I think this chapter is what everyone wants from life, isn’t it? God. Anyway, great, if you couldn’t tell that I loved it. Just…. so good.

    17. Damn that was unfuckingbeleivable and amazing, beautiful and lovely. So happy for them that they have a another son. The love they have is so powerful and stonge. Angel is so cute and sweet, funny when she say boobies. Wonderful chapter and please post soon, thanks!

    19. This was so lovingly written. Just beautiful. Jo, you’re definitely the romantic master on this site. So heartfelt and poignant. “Remembrance of Things Past”. Lovely.

    21. Thank you for bringing this extra special chapter to very loving story. When I am down I go back and read this story and it gives me hope. I kind of figured that there was a new baby on the way, I just was not sure who was going to be the birth mother. Maybe some day you can build on this story and bring to us the expanded story of the Bette and Tina love stroy. Besides this is so much better than Romero and Juliet (and I love that love story).

    22. i have been a silent reader for along time, im trully gratefull for the time and energy you put in writing stories,this is touching,caring…please post soon!

    23. lol@boobies! Okay time to get serious. I’ve really enjoyed this short story that wasn’t even supposed to be a story. They fought a lot of demons to get out of the dark for good.

    27. Perfect. Simply Perfect. I Love this fic. Perhaps,My fav. Fic of all. So warm,sweet,tender,hopeful,and rich with emotions. Even the way you write them reconnecting with eachother feels so real.This beautiful fic started by breaking my heart in little pieces, but i feel the love these 2 share. I’m simply in awe of you Jo. I don’t know how you do it. But I adore you!

    28. And off course… again… you made me cry… What you can do with words is more than a gift… Smiles, tears, you can bring them to ppl in a way that is beyond comparison… Thank you Jobadge… This story is magic…

    29. This is how it should be – all is right with their world. Jo, thank you, your writing never ceases to amaze me. There is so much talent within these pages.

    30. I had to walk away from the computer before I could leave a comment as I felt I was going to start sobbing. Jo that was just beautiful, this is the way our girls should be, also gives me hope of A love like that Loved it thank you for sharing it with us

    31. Jobadge, you are an exceptional writer. This was so emotional, romantic & exciting! I’m gald you’ve disabled the rating b/c no number of stars would do it justice!

    34. Jobadge, I just can’t find enough superlatives to describe this masterpiece of yours… That was simply… wonderful ! Your writing is, indeed, outstanding ( although I’m not sure it is the appropriate word… Sorry ! ). Anyway, I really loved this story. Thank you so much !

    35. Absolutly beauitful….I had to read it twice before i could leave a comment…and both times it sent a shiver through me….No real words to describe it…But could read this story over and over and it would have the same effect!….Thanks…for this story, for all your stories………and for..well ya know!….

    40. So really, deeply beautiful… I thank you so much for all these chapters you were as talented as generous to give us. This short story of yours – short, but SO much more meaningful than a lot of longer ones ! – is such a sensitive, touching, moving tribute to Love – with capital L – through this marvellous symbol of eternity : the Sea and a sky full of stars… I adored it, I’ll read it again often, and each word of it will please my heart and wet my eyes – I mean it. — “it was no longer a day of mourning, it would forever be a day of remembrance” : simply wonderful. From the deep of my heart, thousands thanks again !! ^_^

    41. Thanks Jo….just what I needed right now, to be reminded that miracles does happen and true love does exist, even though this is ‘only’ fanfic :o)) So very beautiful and loving and yes I did notice the jeans LOL. Thanks mate, take care.

    42. Jo, even though I haven’t commented on the last two chapters, know that I haven’t missed a word of whatever you write and this especially… The truth is that the last two chapters were so amazing that it left me speechless, and I kinda shyed away from leaving inadequate words… But this epilogue was just as great and I felt that I had to say thank you and how much I loved this one more of your masterpieces! … and a hell of a masterpiece! I suppose I ‘could’ watch Season 3 now that I have the right ending… Deepest thanks!

    44. OMG JO! Your writing is just amazing and I feel priviledged to be able to read it. You capture all the emotions so well. That was a very beautiful chapter, and I’m happy for B&T :)

    46. Hey Jo, That was somply perfect. Full of love, honesty, tenderness, poetry, romance, inspiration and emotion. Tian and Bette just slotted into each other making their souls complete and with Angelica and new babay boy a family was complete. The circle has closed and is now eternal; never ending just continuing. This has been a complete pleasure to read and made her heart ache and then fill with joy. You have a wonderful way of conveying the deepth of the feelings and the openess of Bette and Tina. Thank you so much for this delightful story. So much appreciation and enjoyment from me to you. Your Loyal Fan. PS – Can;t what to read move of your flip side in “Situations”. Real LOL moments there.

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