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Masked Feelings CH 54 Deny No Connection
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When Dana and Alice would have a fight, or what they commonly referred to as a discussion… sometimes they’d forget that they weren’t alone. Poor Alison had gotten a front row seat and was completely ignored. The show was very brief but she felt like she learned something by watching and listening. It was obvious to her that Dana was a little more then angry with Alice. Alison didn’t know what the cause of the tension was, but she saw the glimmer of hurt and disappointment whan Alice looked in her direction. There was a playful quality about them. The way they fought over the keys was so childish, yet it said to her that they were very good friends…. maybe even lovers.
Dana – Damn it Alice, Get back here!
Alison – She’s gone already…
Dana – I can’t believe she just did that… you know what… yes I can, it’s what she does. She’s always making me crazy.
Alison – I’m just saying… she pushes your buttons and I see a whole lot of sparks there.
Dana -I think I know where you’re going with this. Alice and I aren’t involved, hell… we’re not even friends anymore.
Alison – Well that may be the way you feel, but I think she feels differently.
Dana – How Alice feels doesn’t matter to me. You’re the one I care about and Alice showing up doesn’t change that.
Alison – Hey look, I know we’re just starting to get to know each other again, but if there is something there thats been left unfinished… I’d like to know about it.
Dana – I’m here because I want to be. I’ve always wondered what it would be like if I saw you again. I want to continue to get to know you.
Alison liked what she said, but also noticed that she was avoiding the obvious subject… Alice.
Dana – I really need to go. Can I call you when I get home?
Alison – If you have time….
Dana – Of course I’ll have time. When I know that Kristen is ok, I’ll be back… I promise.
Alison – So I meant to ask who’s Kristen?
Dana – She’s a friend…. who just happens to be an FBI agent.
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I was cautiously reading, waiting for Dana to get Alice all riled up then to push her away. I hope you will continue with the happiness, though I’m pretty sure it will be short-lived – especially if Roxy is at the hospital when they arrive. I’m off to reread without worrying for the hammer to drop. Great update! I loved getting into Allison’s head, and the scene with Alice and Dana rolling around in the mud. It was so them!
I was expecting a “and then alice awoke” line to appear and I’m so happy it wasn’t a dream! Danish belong together although it’s gonna be hard for Dana to forgive Alice enough to rekindle their relationship, I hope she manages to. Awesome chapter, post again soon please xx
awww :sheds a tear: what a sweet ass gift youve given all of your danish readers! and for the record you write happy fantastcially well! so i and im sure the rest of your readers give u a high 5 to keep this flow going! of course like u said a lil drama a lil happiness works well and i agree and hooray no whining here i thought it was just awesome! and ok sure – the whole roxy feeling bad for kristin even was great! lol sue me! oh and the mask feeling wave is ….well you start off with a wave then a lil wiggle then u cover your face then you do another wave.. ok well im working on it lol cant wait till your next post thank u so much!
At first I thought that might end as just a dream but i guess not lol. It nice to see them together like that. But DONT STOP THERE. We gotta see how kristen is doing and what alison says and if dana and alice get together you know as a couple lol. POST MORE!!!!
Well you wanted me to comment & comment I will … DAMN!!! Like everyone else I thought you were going to be completely heartless & tease us with either a dream sequence or having Dana flake out at the best part. I’m really curious to see where you go with this, because I know better than to think you’ll just let them be happy. Keep writing & in the words of Dana … Bring It On!
You MUST CONTINUE this brilliant story.
OMFG, that drive back home ended up MUCH better than I EVER had expected!! I’m with all the others, I was waiting for Dana to push Alice away. But this was…well, this was HOT! I sure had my Danish fix. :P And I don’t even care when in the next next chapter it’ll be revealed it was all a dream or that Dana is going to act bitchy to Alice after all (secretly I do care, I just act tough ;)). And no, no threesomes for me. Not when it comes to Danish. ;)But I did like Alison popping up to help out with the car. I don’t know why, but I just like the dynamics with the three of them. Did Roxy find a ‘friend’ in Kirsten for not wanting Dana and alice to get back together? I think a big explosion is ahead. Just the idea of Roxy and Dana being in the same town, and maybe even the same room, can’t be a good thing. Btw, I’m still contemplating if I want to watch S4 or not without Dana.
While it was good to see Dana and Alice connect again on some level, I have a feeling that it will be temporary, the outside forces (i.e. Roxy, mystery man and Kristen ect…) will intrude soon. There is still a lot of work they both need to go thru, Alice still has not worked out why she cheated on Dana and what her feelings really are for Roxy. And Dana for her part still has a lot or trust issues to face with Alice not only with Alice cheating on her but also for Alice lying to her repeatedly about Alice’s relationship with Roxy. And that is not even taking in to account the twists and turns you probably have planned. Sorry to be sort of a buzzkill:}. Thanks for keeping Dana alive in you fics, she is favorite character of mine also and it great to have a fic where she is not just the dense comic relief of the group. Please keep on writing.
btw, i am glad to still be reading. this is such a great story. loved it from the beginning. i remember the first major shocking twist. in my opinion, it was when lara raped alice. that was crazy! after that one, you were on a roll w/ twist after twist. and i never stopped reading. thanks for writing. guess what? you hoped that i would write a long response, and i write 3. well really 2 but 3 sounds better lol.
wow! this was a very pleasant surpise. please don’t be a dream. this was totally unexpected. got my danish fix! yay!
Damn Damn Damn Damn, do you see what I mean? Do you see why my trying to write this is such a bad idea? Babe this was amazing, the levity of the whole chapter, the mud wrestling. Everything was great and again vaguely familiar hmmmmmm did I see that is some movie perhaps. I think I did, I very vaguely remember a certain Yankees game coming on and instead of watching it as we usually do we decided to watch something else and I think the sex scene in that movie is similar to this one. Very hot, very passionate, very fun…all the things great sex should be. I have a million questions, most of which I can’t even formulate, all I can ask is “What’s going to happen?” that’s all I could think of. I do have many questions, most of which you won’t answer, I can’t believe you’d do me your ClosetDana like that lol. Seriously babe this is like number 2 on my top ten list…nothing can beat the chapter that caused me to fall in love with this story which is chapter 4 I believe. I can’t wait to read the snippet you have planned and I’m am also very anxious to see what you have planned for Halloween, perhaps a party. Maybe a searing kiss? Who knows right…I don’t know….I wish I did though, it might make this horrible anxiety until next Sunday a little more bareable. So excited this chapter was amazing and I hope you’re as proud as I am. (also don’t think you got the sweet legs line by me babe…I completely caught it ;) I love you and keep up the incredible work love….Have a great week…Sweet legs.
All I asked for was for the roadtrip to be friendly. OMG and friendly it was. I just don’t know where to start. The mudfight hot hot hot..the showers…the fact that there was one bed (10 points) And then the love making….I was waiting (like most of us) for Dana to say “get the hell out of the bed” but when she got up to turn of the light I was calm again. So glad you added some amazing Danish love making and didn’t make it into a dream. I just couldn’t bare that. Can’t wait to see what happens when they wake up and get to the hospital. Excellent update and I’m going to reread this one asap. THANK YOU!
that was great and I can’t wait to see more of it but I know you love your drama so please post soon so I can see what will happen next great update I love the way you write this story
You were right. This is also one of my favorite chapters you have ever written. I’m glad that Kristen had this accident. Well, not literally of course. Nobody deserves beeing hit by a truck, especially not Kristen. I think with Roxy having a crash you would have more fans lol. Only wanted to say that due to these circumstances Dana and Alice find to each other. Finally! I loved the way you wrote the scene in the hotel. So hot! Fantastic!Now two characters remain: Roxy and Alison. I wish Roxy could meet another woman that she could fell in love with and let Dana and Alice live their lives in peace. But we all know that this won’t happen until Roxy is alive or not in jail. Second, there is the friend of Dana who has feelings for her. Will she fight for Dana like Roxy has for Alice? Or will Dana take a step back and lets Alice go? I think Dana and Alice can work it out sooner or later. I hope later lol.I have to admit that I like drama, unfortunately not that much as in season 3 where our lovely Dana dies. This was too painfull, I must say. And in the end I think IC made a big mistake to let Dana pass away. There are still questions I have to you. First of all, what about this mystery man? Is it Lara’s brother David? Is Lara still alive and wants revenge? There are more but I know you won’t answer these ones and as a reader I also imagine kind of scenes that might happen further on.This one was really amazing and I hope I can read the next soon. Please keep writing.Lots of greets,brteyes-fan:-)
….mud wrestling, you naughty girl….oh the potential, LOL….
what a pleasant surprise. so glad u took a break from all the angst. i can’t wipe the silly grin i have off my face. i was surprised at how quickly dana turned around. it’s great to read them being playful and having hot, hot sex again. loved the mud wrestling scene. now the question is what does it mean? obviously dana hasn’t forgiven alice completely, but enough to be friends again and even kiss alice on the mouth. will dana go back to alison? will kristen persuade dana to forget about alice and move on? oh the drama! it’s good that u wrote a different, more caring side of roxy. did roxy really mean it when she said she wasn’t going to compete w/ dana over alice’s heart? can’t wait to read what’s next. –your loyal fan ^ – ^
uhuhuhuhuh… um… ehm… wow… dana and alice… uh… very hot! i must have trust issues, hell i know i do, because i kept waiting for dana to pull away from alice in the motel and say “go f**k yourself!” but she didn’t! very hot scene, and loved the mud too. and i could even deal with roxy for this chapter. i think if you counteract roxy with hot sex between alice and dana i will be a-ok!