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Lucky in Love (Chapter 15)
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The four-minute response time from the LAPD was impressive, but it was the longest four minutes of Jenny’s life. Her phone had shattered when she dropped it upon seeing Lara crumpled in the corner, bruised and bleeding, clutching her torn tee shirt around her, her pants at her knees. Barely conscious, Lara still tried to fight when Jenny came too close.
“Lara,” Jenny said gently as she got to her knees so Lara could see who she was through her swollen eyes. “It’s me. It’s Jenny. I’m not going to hurt you.” She reached out to her again but this time Lara moved further into the corner, panic in her eyes.
“I’m just going to get something to cover you,” Jenny said evenly. She heard the approaching sirens as she stood and pulled a tablecloth from the rack beside the desk. “It’s going to be okay, Lara,” she continued to speak in the most soothing voice she could summon. “I’m going to cover you now. No one’s going to hurt you.”
Lara let her tuck the tablecloth around her shoulders but withdrew from any further contact. She howled when a police officer burst through the door and loudly commanded them to show him their hands at gunpoint.
“I’m the one who called,” Jenny said as she stood and complied. “My friend’s been hurt.”
“In here,” the officer called as he holstered his weapon. Lara’s cries subsided until he approached her too closely.
“Help me! Help! Help!” She began screaming.
“Stay back, please” Jenny asked and got on her knees again. “It’s okay Lara. He’s not going to touch you. See? He’s staying over there.” Lara calmed a bit until the EMTs arrived, but they set her off all over again.
“We’ve got to check her out,” one of them said. “It looks like she’s already in shock.”
Jenny remained between them and Lara.
“Does someone have a phone I can borrow? I’ll call someone for her.”
“Fuck!” Alice checked the clock as the phone rang again. “Who the fuck calls at five fucking forty two in the fucking morning?” She buried her head under her pillow.
“Relax, baby, I got it,” Dana said as she rubbed Alice’s back with a smile. Al may have been getting up early every morning for the better part of a year, but God help the person who woke her before she was ready. "Hello?”
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Nice chapter.
Well done – a great piece of writing.
darn, that was some heavy stuff. Poor Lara. Keep it up.
dang. This must have been really hard to write, but you did it beautifully. Great update, hopefully Lara’s able to come back from something so horrible.
damn good, really enjoying this series. really rich characters and a really great story but most of all your appreciation for the characters specifically Danish really shines through. pleasure to read
Great update. You have officially done it. You made me feel sorry for Lara. I actually felt bad for not liking her. Very impressive. Normally I wouldn’t have liked the fact that Dana went with Lara to the hospital and all that la di da, but since you have assured me that Lara is no threat to Danish, I was okay with it. Excellent job. Thanks for the Danish. I really enjoyed it. Oh…I’d like to say thanks for one thing that I’ve noticed a lot of writters do, and I’m glad you didn’t. It’s such an easy concept. You wrote “trailed her left hand along Dana’s right side”. So many writters goof this up. I don’t know if they don’t know that when you’re facing someone, your left is their right and vise versa or what. See simple thing, I’m reading, and totally into story, and boom…limbs get all confused, and it drives me nuts. I fix it in my head and reread it, but it still throws me off. Sorry I babble so much. Anyway great job. I can’t wait for more. Oh…so glad that you’re at least considering the baby thing. I’m sure that whatever you decide on will turn out amazing.
Thanks for the quick update your writing is exquisitely delightful – even when you make me gnaw on my thumb due to nervousness. Oh! and Alice&Dana are the Best-est girlfriends ever.
I hate violent, why would anyone do something like that Just hope tha Lara is okay. thanks
that was pretty damn intense! well done, made the cliffhanger well worth it. and the ending added a very nice steamy touch. thanks for keeping me reading!
These ladies in fan fiction need to take self defense classes…I hope Lara will be okay, at least she has her friends around.
oh on poor lara I hope that everything is ok I hope that get the poeple that did this to her and as always the gang are all there to help out in anyway they can great update but very sad please post soon
wow, thats really awful about lara..i really hope she pulls through. i never would’ve expected this could happen…i hope everything turns out ok. i think helena is amazing for keeping it together but i sense that she’ll have her breakdown soon. can’t wait to see what happens next…hopefully something good
Ok I just read chapter 14 and 15. Oh Shane, Carmen is so close and yet she seems to be able to ruin it. And OMG, Lara…no!!!! I’m so glad the close circle of friends could be there as fast as they could…each could help out in their own way. Their love for each other will help Helena and hopefully Lara to pull through. *sends a little prayer for Lara* Btw, again amazing writing!
wow sammy that was horribly graphic, but don’t you let her die now. On the show Lara is my second fav to Bette, even after the senator who is hot hot hot but I loved China Beach and Dana Delaney…PPS
Pretty good. I like taht update even if I´m not the biggest lara fan.
Holy Sh*t SammysGirl,that was very intense chapter hon!! Your doing one hell of a job writing this story and keep up the good work,post when you can!! Photo Queen Lmao
{peers into monitor} Hey SammysGirl? Thanks! Really…not only for letting Lara at least survive the attack…but for putting this together in record time. I can imagine it would be dark writing….you did it well. And, it’s good to see the whole gang coming together again. Ain’t it true that it’s the bad times when we all seem to pull it together? Anyhow….you done good…and I do appreciate it!
I’m glad that you enjoy my feedback. I like what you did what this chapter … it was definitely an interesting turn in the story. Looking forward to the next update, to see where you take us next.
Nice Work! Your Writing Is Terrific!Keep it up!
I thought about not leaving you feedback just to be retarded…but this chapter was so freaking good. I like where you’ve taken it and I am very happy with the ending ;) Keep up the great work Sammy.