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Was it Love at First Sight? – Chapter 6
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Previously…
They both laugh. Tina looked at the clock and gave Gabe last minute details for finishing touches on the meal.
TINA: Wish me luck.
GABE: You’ll be fabulous.
Gabe kissed both cheeks and waved Tina out of the door.
GABE: Go. Go. Go. You don’t want to be late.
Tina walked down to the limo where the Charles was waiting with the door open and all smiles.
CHARLES: Your chariot waits.
Tina smiled, climbed inside, and thought about the next few minutes.
TBC…
Bette got out of the shower and dried herself off. She still hadn’t picked out an outfit to start the night off. She was so nervous. No one has ever made her feel the way Tina made her feel. She went to her closet and looked thru her clothes; the ones that would make your head turn. She finally found one that would make your head turn and jaw drop open. She wanted to look really nice for Tina tonight. First impressions last forever and she wanted this to last forever and a day. She jumped as the doorbell broke her train of thought. She put her housecoat on and answered the door.
BETTE: Yes, can I help you?
LADY: I have eleven red roses for a Miss Bette Porter.
BETTE: That would be me. Only eleven?
LADY: Yes, only eleven. That’s all that was ordered. I need you to sign right here.
BETTE: O.K.
Bette signed her name on the delivery confirmation sheet, shut the door smelling the roses, and read the card.
Bette,
Let the enchanting evening begin. Take these roses as a token of my enduring love for you. Let the fragrance linger in your memory forever. I will see you at 7:00.
With all my love,
Tina
P.S. Yes, there are only eleven roses in the vase, but take these roses and stand in front of a mirror. Look in the mirror with the roses in front of you and the twelfth rose will be staring back at you.
BETTE: Aw, how sweet.
Bette sat the roses on the coffee table where everyone could see what Tina gave her on their first date. She went to her bedroom to get dressed. She was adding the finishing touches when the doorbell rang.
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I love this Gabe guy! …Where do you find those? ;) Okay, I was sorry about my “too short” comment when I saw that you posted again… Thanks! Can’t wait for phase two… Milk? Walk on the beach? Or…?
Great Update!!!! Thank you can’t wait for phase 2. PPS
Me either. I can’t wait for Phase two. Excellent chapter. PPS.
Too cute…Post soon please
Nice first date….more more more
‘GABE: Yes Tina. I’ve got this end covered. You go cover that one. She’s into you girlfriend, so you go get into her.’ LMAO OMG I swear this guy is like my friend Kenneth from college. xD
Where do you find a Gabe? Swing by my college sometime. Every 2 out of 3 guys is a Gabe. ;) Lovin’ it!
Wow, Tina is not letting up is she. She is going after her woman and showing her the way that it could be if Bette let her in.
Tina is romantic and let see where she take Bette next. Damn Gabe is so funny and like Alice, they should be meet and have fun. Ok post soon please, thanks!
so sweet! i already read your last two chaperts and are so good! i can’t wait to read about the second part!