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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 13)
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Christmas Morning
Dana was woken up by voices in the kitchen and the sun in her eyes. Groaning, Dana sat up.
“Morning sleepy head.” Jenny said cheerfully
“What time is it?” Dana asked, wiping the sleep from her eyes
“10:30. Merry Christmas.” Jenny kissed Dana on the cheek
“Merry Christmas.” Dana smiled weakly
“Dane? You up?” Shane asked from the kitchen
“Yeah.” Dana called back
“Coffee is ready if you want some.”
“On my way.” Dana said as she stood up and stretched
Alice was woken up by someone placing butterfly kisses on her neck. Alice slowly opened her eyes and turned around to find Luke smiling at her.
“Merry Christmas.” Luke kissed Alice lightly
“Merry Christmas.” Alice smiled and yawned. “What’s that smell?” She sniffed the air
“Christmas breakfast.” Luke grinned like a little boy
“It smells great.”
“Come on. Get dressed and meet me out there.”
“Ok.” Alice yawned again
“Coffee is brewing.” Luke chuckled
“Good.” Alice smiled
Luke left the bedroom and Alice put her head in her hands. Merry fucking Christmas.
Dana, Shane, Carmen, and Jenny were all seated around the kitchen table, drinking their coffee and eating silently.
“Ok, I can’t take it anymore.” Jenny stood up and walked away from the table
Shane looked at Carmen with an alarmed expression. “What the fuck was that? Is she ok?”
“I have no idea.” Carmen shrugged
Jenny returned, her arms full of gifts. “Santa has arrived.” She grinned and set the gifts on the table, putting a Santa hat on her head
Dana chuckled. “You’re the hottest Santa I’ve seen.” She winked at Jenny
“Hold on, I have to get everyone’s.” Carmen smiled and stood up
“Me too.” Shane said, following Carmen
“Shit.” Dana muttered
“What?” Jenny asked. “You ok?”
“No.” Dana blushed. “I didn’t get anyone anything. Thing’s have been a little crazy since I got back in town, and I totally forgot.”
Jenny laughed. “Believe me, you being home for Christmas is the best gift you could have gotten anyone Dana.”
Dana opened her mouth to protest, but Shane and Carmen returned.
“Ok.” Carmen said and sat down. “I am not officially ready to exchange gifts.”
“Wait.” Shane said. “Shouldn’t we wait for Helena’s tonight?”
Everyone looked at each other.
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: does a lil dance : oooo yeah! bout time your lazzzzzzzzzzy ass got to some fantastic writting!! this fic really has no down moments! and holy crapola was this update just awesome. I lovedddd the filp of the whole 4am wake up thing! I like this new “o balls” Dana she should take charge more and get her woman back! even tho yeah it is kinda sad about Luke.. but hey i’m sure he’ll find someone else! lol great job pooppppy plz update soon or you will pay.. and by pay i mean i’ll add u into SCREAM 2 as an extra and dun dun dun lol take care! xxxxxx
I was doing my little happy dance when I saw that you had updated. Which I only do for certain writers…lucky you!Seriously this was good…really good. Always love them together, talking at 4AM is what they do best. (and kissing in bathrooms but moving on!) Nice twist turning it around. When Dana kept saying I love you…oh man that was too much. Alice just had to kiss her. Two thumbs up for Lara for making Alice freak out, and Luke needs te get of his knees and find a nice girl to hang out with and leave Alice alone!!! haha. Looking forward to the next chapter and nice to see you’re back…bye!
Oh my God! That was insane! You had me swearing up storm every time there was a twist. Luke and Alice were pretty gag worthy through the first half. When he got down on one knee I was really swearing. Let me say, huge sigh of relief that it wasn’t an engagement ring. So glad Alice sad no about the moving. Haha Luke, take that. I bet Alice would move to New York if Dana asked her to. Not that I’m suggesting that in any way. They should stay right where they are. Now…onto the good stuff. Finally! Dana finally told her. Completely awesome. The twisted 4 a.m. kiss. Gotta love it. DO you ever get into a story so much that you start saying the lines of one of the characters, and kinda act it out as you’re reading?…Okay maybe that’s just me. I guess I’m a litte strange. Anyway, I was acting out Alice’s lines. Tears and all. “And the Emmy goes to…!” Alice loves Dana too. I know it. Awesome update. It was worth the wait. I can’t wait for your next update. I’m so excited.
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!! i want a christmas like that…lol great post!! keep it up poopster.
your update brought tears to my eyes and i am in the office!!!update SOON! real SOON please!
to think, i was going to go to bed but decided to check just in case the poopster updated again. And woooow did that make my day. so loved the 4am switch thing, even down to the promise ring being a heck of a lot like tonya and dana’s engagement. can’t wait to read the next update…the story keeps getting better :)
that chapter was really worth the “long” wait :)
I was all over the place reading this chapter! It was like plucking the petals of a flower. They will end up together, they won’t end up together, they will end up together, etc. And a promise ring, that really does equal an engagement ring! why did she say yes? (I’m worried that I could actually end up that way…I’m pretty bad in dumping them (once I started to date them)…;)) Btw, I always think of Luke of the Gimore Girls whenever I read the name…and I can’t picture him with Alice (which kinda makes sense, because Alice doesn’t belong to Luke anyways :P). Dana, get your woman back!
Ah! My stomach’s doing that fluttery thing it does when somethign too amazing to comprehend happens, ya know? Haha. As soon as alice is liek “we’re being robbed” i knew it was Dana, but I love the predictability of it because I wasn’t entirely sure if you’d actually make them kiss. But they did! And it makes me happy. And I’m startign t realize that I actually like Luke and it’s really goign to suck when he finds out. You’re killin’ me with this story, Poopster, keep it up!
HELLLLLLZ YEAH That’s what I’m talking about! It’s about fucking time Dana grew a pair of O balls and did her thing. Now if I could only get my friends to suck it up and talk to their beyotches then I wouldn’t have to hear their freakouts and I could hear some crazy cool kinky sex stories lol. Great chapter Poop, you had me cursing you in a blind rage then wishing you were here so I could hug you and pinch your cheeks…your a good kid (as Suze would say) I loved the appearance of Lara it almost made me want to die and Luke’s little back handed comment there was great. Lots of great one liners and I loved the 4 am not original business. Even though you’ve disappointed me to no end with our dying friendship I can almost depend on you for timely updates now if we could just get Suze on the ball. Little micth keeps dropping the ball and she’s offically kicked out of suzieshitinthecloset then of course if I kick her out then you’re definitely gone then it will just be thecloset which I guess is still cooler than you lame-o’s Anyway this bullshit is long enough. The bestest most beautifully sober and the only 1/3 of suzieshitinthecloset that hasn’t killed all of her brain cells with Coors light and Newports OUT BITCHES!
Yeah, you’re back again! HURRAY! I missed you here around. Great update and pleaze post soon:-)
Dammit Poopy!!! You freakin’ tempted me to read this & now I’m so completely not ready to to to work. I hate reading awesome updates before I go to work, because then I really don’t want to leave. This was great & now I’ll on the edge of my seat again just waiting for what you’ll throw at us next …. More please & soon!!!!
Wow…Wow…Wow…I love how many times Dana said I Love You!!! Looking fwd to the next update!
Yay. :)
Excellent update poopy!!!!!!!! I love my danish in the morning,thanks alot! Post when you can!! Keep up the good job :)
OH SHIZZZ POOPSTER!!! THIS IS THE BEST FAN FIC EVERRRRR!..okay seriously, i was totally going through poopy withdraw (wait..ew) the past like 2weeks, but hey you came back with a bang!! okay let me start by saying that was the best chappy yet. All the angst ahh i love it. Lol, when lukas got down on his knee, i had a heart attack..the only thing i was thinking was “OH NO..GET OFF YOUR KNEE ASS!” lol. But well, it’s only a promise ring, which can be broken, hehe. OH and i totally knew liz and lara were gonna get it on eventually. Oh oh! and i must give you the biggest props poopster for actually giving the 4am kiss, with a twist. Man oh man was that scene great. I love how dana finally confessed her undying love and alice obviously feels the same. “I can’t.” Alice cried. “I can’t hear this.””I love you.””I’m with Lukas. I can’t do this.””I love you.””I’m happy Dana. Please stop.””I love you.” HOLY GOOSEBUMPS YOU GAVE ME! alright well i’m leaving. awesome good poopy one, keep it up i love this fic. post soon love! b-eyes outttt.
You need to update like NOW! This is one of my fave stories!! I need more!
there are so many turns in this story that I can’t wait to see if they get back together in te end please post soon great update
great update! looking forward to the next. :)
wow that was great! first of all the tension between the two is almost too much to bear as a reader. it makes me cringe when they snap at one another. been there, done that! but the end of this chapter makes it all worth it almost, of course until alice runs off. looking forward to the weekend and keeping my fingers crossed that you are able to post then!
Awww. You posted. You really are a good kid, babe…I loved the chapter. It was fantastic as usual and I of course fucking loved the ending. So Luke…I have been doing my best to think kindly of the guy…but yeah. He needs to go. I am soooooo ready for our ladies to finally get their shit together. I’m sorry that I haven’t updated in awhile. I have had a crazy couple of weeks, which you already know…I will do my best to repay you for this little beauty. lol. As for CD trying to take our side project and give us the boot…let’s team up and beat the crap out of her…then we can smoke a cig together in victory. Oh! I also liked the Lara cameo. I was expecting her to try and get back with Dana to piss ALice off…but the way it went down was much more satisfying ;) OK. I am tired and need to catch up on my zzz’s, but this was great babe. This is why we are suzieshitinthecloset and not just suzieinthecloset. lmao. I love you and am looking forward to the next. Have a fantastic weekend…and have that talk you little chicken shit! (hahahaha) This is the sexy, talented, smoldering, extremely well liked 1/3 saying good night, and don’t miss me too much! (_*_)
great work!!!! I LOVE DANISH:)
Alice is trying very hard, but we all know she’s going to fail. The question is when. How long will it take for her to admit that she still wants to be with Dana and for her to take the leap of faith…
So, halfway through I was ready to stop reading for a couple of chapters cuz now I hate Luke…I don’t even care that he’s a nice guy who doesn’t deserve it. And then Lara! But that was acceptably brief as it turned out. Good thing I kept reading…and it’s about freaking time! Go Dana…and seriously, P, post soon!
Great update – but you had me worried, great to have you back, please continue to add to this excellent story. Great to see Dana has actually found some guts – let’s hope Alice admits to Dana what WE all know!!!
Yay a new chapter is up! Well aren’t things getting heated up now? loved it =D great chapter, i cant wait for the next one!