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    As Sure As The Sun 10

    Story written on September 30, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62634
    Author Notes:

    “You got it all figured out don’t you? Well what if I paint the walls with you instead? Huh? Then what?”

    As Sure As The Sun PT 10

     

     

     

    CH 30

     

     

     

     

     

    And I believe we both crashed course…..

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    “You do remember my daughter? Well probably not………”

     

     

     “Hey she doesn’t remember anything…..”

     

     

    “Well not everything she can remember you well enough….” Helena’s mom says.

     

     

    “You are responsible for this….?”

     

     

    “Ms. McCutcheon please…..We are all responsible don’t you think? Let me tell you a story….”

     

     

    “No fuck you, fuck this!” Carmen says, gun drawn.

     

     

    When Carmen pulled her gun and pointed straight at Helena’s mom I let her, cause honestly this merry go round of deceit and espionage and all this weird shit it had to stop, I couldn’t keep track of all the lines…Peggy Peabody was talking her head was pointed in Carmen’s direction.

     

     

    “Will shooting me make it all go away? Will it fill in the gaps of your life? Will it change anything that has happened to you over the course of these last few years? No…. it won’t, now be a dear and put the weapon down……”

     

     

    “Why should I?”

     

     

    “Darling I saved your miserable life many, many times….all for my daughter. She loved you very much…..I….well I did not care for you…..and sadly that caused the final rift with my Helena…..”

     

     

    “So what, this is you trying to atone for her death?” I asked.

     

     

    “No…….well maybe. I have money and so much of it was to be hers. This is me trying to make things right between my daughter and I. When I heard of Ms. Morales I was not aware of my daughter’s interests, and I never handled it properly. It was the worst mistake I ever made. And imagine my surprise to find Ms. Morales to be in the field of law enforcement, and my further surprise to find she was pursuing the man responsible for my Hele’s death. Admirable this woman……..You cared for my daughter loved her enough to avenge her…at the expense of your life, your career….”

     

     

    Carmen was hard to read. This rich chic laying it all down. Making it all right. I couldn’t say anything it was honestly between them….even if Carmen had no tangible image of everything this old chic was saying.

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    1. I figured two weeks had to be up so I came by to check. I am so freakin glad you are back at it! So Peggy is behind this all? Well didnt see that coming but thats what I like about this fic, it is so unpredictable!! Welcome Back :)

    3. Welcome back, your story as well as you have been missed. Glad to see you haven’t lost any of your mojo, excellent continuation. Very surprised Carmen didn’t flip when Shane told her about her new assignment. Although there will probably be some crazy shit thrown at them, before this assignment is over. Luv the update.

    4. “Come on you know we can’t answer that….” There’s that “we” again. Heebie-jeebies, I tell you, and now that you’ve associated him with Krycek it’s even worse. Well, I’m stoked that you’re back, and not a moment too soon; I was getting the shakes, bad. Great update, like always, and I hope everything went well with the album.

    5. what can i say ….lol , i love you jajalol i love this story , u r great the way you write is just sooo cool , like i can picture everything keep the goog work i live it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    6. Oh yes, I’ve been eaiting for this update for veeery long…and it finally came!! It’s just amazing, what can I say…keep up the great job? Oh I know you will…Now I’m gonna be waiting for the next one. Thank you.

    9. *bows* thanku very much NDF! for dedicating this lovely piece to me, im honored:D lol i din read the authors note earlier, i was just overly excited by the fact that you were back haha Great Great update! love the way you play with words. :)

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