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    Love and Pride chp 6

    Story written on October 1, 2006 by allyemmerson.
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    Saturday Night Part two

    LOVE AND PRIDE – Chapter 6

     

    Bette had been wandering around for about half an hour when she decided to go home and pick up her car and go for a long drive. Just find a quiet spot and think things through.

     

     

    She had studied a map of the area when she had first arrived in Lancaster and so many people had told her about the stunning beauty of the nearby Lake District – maybe a drive up there would help clear her head and if the place was as good as she was told she could come back during the day.

     

     

    So she walked back through town – her car was parked opposite the house. She dug her car keys out of her jacket but something made her stop. There was no reason for her to stand in the rain in a dark street but she did.

     

     

     

    For several minutes she stood perfectly still – she turned and looked at the house — the light was on in the sitting room and also in the front bedroom which belonged to Helena.

     

    It was only when Bette crossed the street that she saw that someone was

    sitting on the top step of the three that lead to the front door and that someone was crying.

     

     

     

    Her first reaction was to walk away – this was none of her business whoever it was. But a voice inside her from somewhere told her that she needed to make sure that this person was alright.

     

    “Are you alright ?”

     

     

    Bette looked down at the weeping figure who slowly uncurled her body and their eyes met. The eyes that were full of tears were the most perfect colour that Bette had ever seen — so hazel and gentle. The face was soft and the weak smile produced a surge of electricity that shocked Bette.

     

    “I’ll be okay “

     

     

     

     

    “Can I help ? “ Bette was still reeling from those eyes.

     

     

    Tina shock her head – she was in turmoil. She felt so ashamed at what had

    happened with Helena but this stranger was so beautiful and had produced a rush of warmth inside her.

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    1. Please keep writing I daont care which story you post or when as long as your name is on it, Love the shy Bette, Helena is the same and poor Tina with Helena she is out of her league,with Bette safe. thanks

    2. YEHAAAAA this is great, I’m loving it :o))…..And yes Bette would love some coffee, right????? And I would love some L-wing, because thats my favourite story :o)) Keep’em coming and have a great Sunday.

    6. I love all of your stories so I don’t mind which one you post. I think Bette will be upset with Helena if she finds out what she did to Tina. I also think Helena will be feeling bad about her behaviour because she would probably kick the persons arse if someone treated Bette like that.

    7. Maybe a Snickers or Baby Ruth for the candy bar since natasha maccrimmon does not like crunchies (what are crunchies?). Also what is the 1st-2-1 mean? Is that the grading scale for the Universities in England? I love any story that you write.

    8. *Smiling from ear to ear*… Dearest Ally, I’m so in love with your writing!!! And I’m loving this ride!!! I have no request, no demand, no plea, no fear, no angst… I trust you and I just want more of this story and of your writing!!!… Your humble and faithfull reader is still on her knees, but grinning and happy! Please more soon… “Tina smiled – Bette swallowed – she wished Tina wouldn’t keep doing that – it was very moving.” Exactly this kind of lines that makes me love your writing!… “Tina wondered what Bette looked like in a pair of Levi’s.” Is that a wink to Jo? Well done! ;) Love this, you’re awesome! Thanks!

    15. Dammit, funnyone, now that song will be stuck in my head for the next 3 days. =p I thought the hot dog thing was supposed to be a dance not the edible kind of hot dog. O.o OMG the Levi’s! *thud* I’m still convinced there’s something about coffee that’s meant to be a prelude to sex. I don’t think I’ve ever heard of anyone asking someone if they’d like to come in for a glass of Ovaltine.

    16. “As different as night and day.” What? You don’t recognize the theme song from “The Patty Duke Show”, an American sit-com from the early 60s in which the eponymous Patty played, yes, identical cousins, one English, one American? The song also informed us the a hot dog would make the American one lose control. Whatever could they have meant? I guess Helena loses it over the bun so to speak. Does your crunchie feature puffed rice in chocolate? Bette is going to accept the invitation, isn’t she? Coffee’s got to be better than sight-seeing in the dark.

    17. But their cousins…identical cousins…lol…I love that theme song…before my time but I love the song. I hope Bette comes up for coffee or she can invite Tina on the drive with her. Either way Helena is forgotten by Tina. Keep posting.

    18. A big thank you for posting all 3 stories this weekend. It must be tough to write all 3 around the same tim.e especially when you have to plan the party. i really do enjoy reading all 3 stories. You have set up the relationships well enough for a great rollercoaster ride. The fact that B&T are still so young and still discovering themselves make the story much more interesting. I’m really looking forward to you next post.

    19. This is great. Bette and Tina are getting to really talk and no each other and they seem to be a better fit then Tina and Helena in terms of their experience level w/ women. My only fear is how Bette will explain to Helena that she has a little crush on someone that Helena obvioulsy wants to be with. Maye it’s a sex thing w/ helena and she will want what is best for Bette and just leave any thoughts of being w/ Tina behind her, but i doubt it. As for what stories you write. definitely the L Wing and this one. You should drop that long and winding story (am i letting my bias show…..LOL)

    23. Lamentamini, there were a lot of dances in those days, The Mashed Potato and The Peppermint Twist being 2 with a food theme, but I can’t recall anyone besides Patty attempting The Hot Dog. Especially as it closely resembled a spaz attack.

    27. of course Bette is different! and Tina will see the ownderful person Bette is. You are right you make us Allydicted, whe want more about your stories, it’s the prize to be good! LOL great chapter, thanks for the post

    28. They finally meet and both are wet… oh the possibilities, but that will take awhile in this story. I’m enjoying this slow burn. Plus I can’t wait till Bette gets her “swagger” and comes into her own.

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