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Once an alpha always an alpha….right?????
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Silence surrounds me and I feel such a great emptiness inside. I don’t even know what day it is anymore and I haven’t eaten in so long yet I’m still not hungry. All I do is just sit here wasting away because there is nothing left for me here. I no longer hear laughter, see the smiles; I just don’t enjoy life. I don’t even feel alive, I just feel like I exist. Am I awake or asleep, I’m really not sure. I’ m empty. I just want to feel…..feel anything. I want to feel alive, joy, happiness, belonging, desire, even feel……pain. I still feel nothing, its like I’m numb to everything. I would cut myself if I would think it would make me feel something. My day consist of waking up, staring at the ceiling, looking at this damn picture on my night stand, and then fall asleep again. I stay in bed aaaaaaaaalllllllllll day. This is not who I used to be.
The front door opens
OMgosh there are people in my house. I want to get up and hide but my body is not allowing to do so. I hear voices now. The Jokes on them though because there is nothing in this house worth a dime anymore. The soul and like has just been sucked out of it. I want to scream at them, but not so they can rescue me or get scared and leave, but hopefully so they will come in her and kill me. Im ready to go now because this Is ridiculous. I used to be successful, motivated and powerful but look at me now.
Her mouth opens but still nothing comes out.
Damn I’ ve lost control of my body and my voice too???? I really am good for nothing, I can’t even get myself killed!! She curls up next to the pillow All I can do is grab this fucking pillow, like it’s gonna do something for me. I feel like I’m some traumatized child trapped in a cage that I call my body. ************************************************************************
“Damn what is that smell?!?!?!?!?! It seems like something died in here” says shane
“Oh that’s much too nice; it smells like several somethings died in here.” says alice
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If it weren’t for the blue writing (LOL)…this could be quite dark. Please excuse the following soliloquy: Pain can be so unbearable at times that you just wanna escape. However, there is always…always something to live for. Truly daylight comes, sores turn into scabs, which heal into scars…reminding us of what we have survived. This lady is broken, but she has a loving family. She is resilient and she has to find herself again. Thanks for taking us on this journey Mysteri.
sorry to disappoint you Sky but I have nothing to do with this one, except for the proofreading LOL. This story is completely of Mysti’s hand and we only have to respect where she takes it.
Powerful first chapter!! Thanks!
Magnificent first chapter! Write it as you see fit and allow NO one to dissuade or discourage your direction. This is YOUR story and no cant make everyone happy!
What an emotional start. Please continue!
ok wow im confused!! i need more to tell whats goin on
This is some deep writing…absolutely loving it so far and cant’ wait to see where you take us next babes…brilliant start!!! :)
Awesome start, Mysti–and you certainly can’t leave us hanging there! Bette’s despair is so deep, but I never thought she’d take it that far! PPS!
Excellent start Mysti. You most definately must contiue. The pain is quite palpable. I agree with snQQpy this is your story take it where ever you want. I’m like SkyCaptain who is this trapped-in person. I think its likely Bette given Kit’s reaction to entering the house.
WHOA mysti…like whoa…! I need more to read…at least to the poitn where I know the blood from the cut has formed a clot to stop the flow of …death!!?
Really Powerful. Bette couldn’t let herself go like that, Thanks goodness that Kit and the gang is outside and can help her thanks
Very nice start.
yes an Alpha is always an alpha!!!!
Get Tina there Fast
Fantastic start Mysti, very powerful, look forward to more!
OMG! what an opening chapter! good stuff Mysti! loving this already so keep going!!!! thanks, its really great you decided to post! :)
OMFG, this was a really good start, I could feel Bette’s pain and her despair. You catched these feelings very well, amazing. After reading this my heart rate increased and that’s something that rarely happens when reading I’m reading a fanfic which is not an NC-17 *blushing*. TBC of course, no doubt about that.
OH HELLL YEA……CONTINUE PLEASE…..I LOVVVVEEE DRAMA….AND THIS IS AMAZING…..POST ANOTHER REALLLYY SOON….LIKE IN ABOUT 10 MINUTES IF YOU WANT TOO……I WONT BE MAD …..I PROMISE……. LMAO…… =0)
First. LOLBaby you know my opinion about this and I’m really glad you decided to post this story. You know you are a good writer so please don’t hesitate and continue. You already have one big fan.
Is this Bette? Did the Canada incident send her over the edge? Or is this Carmen? Did the Canada incident send her over the edge? Or is this Tina? Does Bette still have Angelica and Tina is camped out at their house waiting for the child? If Belena is on board with this please don’t have Helena & Bette together. I must admit the writing has you on the edge of your seat so carry on…
OMG This was incredible, I loved it!!! I’m dying to see the next chapter, please continue!!!!!
Damn, Bette. What are you doing, Baby? I feel so sad for her. *pout* I could feel all of the pain Bette was going through. Depression is a b*tch! Been there… done that…. HATED IT!Great start! You simply must continue this. It is definitely well written and very touching. I know we have to go through the bad to get to the good and actually appreciate the good…. but damn!… You make it so real! Isn’t talent a wonderful thing? Thank you for sharing your story! It’s very moving and captivating. I know it will send me through a range of emotions. I can tell that already. Keep the chapters coming, please.