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Lucky in Love (Chapter 17)
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It was one of those seemingly inconsequential moments. Sometimes you remember them in crystalline detail for the rest of your life. Often, they’re the moments you couldn’t recall if your life depended on it. Always, they were the kind that made Dana fall in love with Alice again and again.
Al was multi-tasking. She’d already conducted a phone interview for her next article, polished a month’s worth of outlines for The Chart and actually got them in on time, talked Gail Guthrie down from not one, but two, freak outs and was serving as interpreter between the event planner for the Gala Dinner and the marketing coordinator at Mercedes in an ongoing dispute over the design theme and table positioning. It was only one thirty.
Dana returned from her work out and meeting right on time. When she walked in Alice had her files and notes for each project neatly laid out in a different section of the living room, but you had to know Alice to know that was what you were seeing. To the naked eye, the place was a total wreck. Dana felt her heart skip a beat. To make matters more interesting, Al was still wearing her glasses, always a sign that she was deep into her work or trying to get Dana’s attention. Today was definitely the former, but Dana was responding as though it was the latter. She wondered what it was with her and Al’s specs as she found another excuse to walk through the living room. It was the third time in the fifteen minutes she’d been home.
“Hey baby,” Al said now that she was no longer on the phone. “Come give me a real kiss.” Dana happily complied, steaming the glasses a second or two. “I have a surprise for you.”
“Hmmm?” Dana arched an eyebrow suggestively.
“Later,” Alice said with mock sternness. She stepped over to one of her little areas and picked out a pink folder. “It’s official…”
“No.” Dana grinned broadly. “So soon? Let me see.” Alice handed her the paperwork and her new driver’s license.
“I want you to be the first person I hear say it,” she said softly.
“Alice,” Dana stepped in and kissed her, keeping their lips in contact as she continued, “Fairbanks.”
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Another perfect chapter – leaving us on the edge of our seats as to what Winnie might be up to … wow! Post again soon.
kan you no write nae faster am on the edge of ma seat plz i cant wait untill the next update you got me hooked if this was a published book you would be my fave writer and would recommend you to all my friends and collect all your books
I LOVE THIS FANFIC I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT
Freakin’ awesome job! Loved the Danish…absolutely loved it. Alice Fairbanks! Yes! So happy about that…Dana and Alice clearly were too:) You cracked me up with the “You’re such a goofball.” Alice lifted her arms and Dana removed her top. “You don’t tell someone you’re going to take them on the desk, you just do it.” So funny. You captured both of their characters so well here…once again. Great scene. I’m eagerly awaiting your next update.
Argh! If Winnie causes Lara even a further *milligram* of pain… [shakes fist] Oh, she soooo needs a slap.
I’m starting to think that Dana should just beat Winnie to death with her tennis racket or something. That woman’s just evil. Loved the update as always, and I have to remember not to read these at work!
WTF is winnie’s problem?!! I hate that bitch…i fear the worst! Update soon!
Thanks for posting…love B&T…what is Winnie smokin? Keep posting.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! How!?! How do I do it!?! I swear that I did not purposely forget to leave you a comment…damn it. Ok…so this was an excellent chap. I would expect no less from you my friend and your “Packing” scene…damn. Thanks. Seriously ;)ok. anyways, this kicked ass. Looking forward to the next.
oh no what is winnie planing on do I hope that she is not trying to take the kids away from helena because if she is there will be hell to pay can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon I love it great update
Damn! Winnie ominous much. Me thinks this chap was fantastically fantastic. Thanks.
Great update, what is that nasty Winnie up to…? Hasn’t Lara been through enough (hasn’t Helena?) I just hope it’s not too evil. Of course that would make for more drama, which is always a good fanfic thing. Danish is so sweet in this story. Keep it up, and please post again soon, woohooo!
oops forgot to add: Dana and Alice in this update? I’m straight and even I got all hot and bothered. Whew! That was sizzlin’ I second Goldrun, you do NC-17 really well. PPS!
Excellent update! LOL at “Dana are you packing for me?” and then gawd at what followed! You definitely do NC-17 really, really well. Once again, you’ve managed to balance the whole gang in a realistic way…and I loved Alice’s comment to Lara about life having the nerve to go on. But, erm….don’t make Lara go through this all alone! puhleeze?
Very nice!
Good Stuff…I liked when Alice said “You’re such a goofball.You don’t tell someone you’re going to take them on the desk, you just do it.” You really have captured the characters and have taken them to the next level!!!I look fwd to your updates, every day!
LOL at Shane’s sensing the force everytime B&T do! I like their deal, by the by, just as much as I love seeing another post! YAY!
WOW i need a cold shower now hehe that was totally awsome chapter babe!!! Iloved the Danish Moments (of course i did) Glad lara has the gang to help her through this! Keep up the gr8 work luv! PPS
oh no! did the plot just thicken? what’s winnie up to? hurry hurry i must know now! j/k, take your time, but not too much time. great update… do i even need to tell you the sex scene was hot. and that it’s very adorable that alice is going by fairbanks now.
oh yeah…and what is Winnie up to?
ohh please dun do that to Lara and Helena ! u turned me into a Halara/ Lalena fan and it’ll be really cruel of u to make them fall apart! GREAT update!