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    As Sure As The Sun 12

    Story written on October 6, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62718
    Author Notes:

    Shane and Carmen talk.

    AS Sure As The Sun PT 12

     

     

     

     

     

    CH 36

     

     

     

     

    And I’d give it all back today

    If I thought I had half a chance

    If I thought I could away

    I’d give it all back today

     

    There’s no way

    It’s too late

     

    And the world that’s in your face

    It’s such a beautiful place

    The world that’s in your eyes

    It’s such a beautiful lie

     

     

     

     

     

    Two months ago…………..

     

     

     

    My jaw is kinda sore…and I feel kinda bad about telling Carmen that I enjoyed her inability to recall her life. It was a seriously fucked up thing to say to her. Maybe she didn’t have to clock me but I get why. Our thing….the thing that was us, the thing that was love is love, well it got all outta whack because of these walls surrounding us, boxing us in keeping us on pins and needles….and the needles are sharp and jagged.

     

     

    The water was hot but not as hot as she liked it. I know it’s for me. When she looks at me I can see plain as day how angry she is with me. I get up off her and walk out of the shower to get dried off. She turns the water off completely and I hand her a fluffy white towel.

     

     

     

    “Carmen….”

     

     

    “What….”

     

     

    “I don’t know…I …”

     

     

    “……….are we too much…?”

     

     

    “I don’t know what you mean?”

     

     

    “I mean are we like gasoline and fire?”

     

     

    ‘Maybe…..”

     

     

    “What now?”

     

     

    “Maybe I should go…you know get away from you….get you away from me?”

     

     

    “Is that what you want Shane?’

     

     

    “I guess the real question is, I ….guess…is that what you want?”

     

     

    “I want to know what’s going on with you….I want to know…why you said that to me……”

     

     

    “I said it cause it’s how I feel…..I don’t want to sound like a asshole or anything but….you not remembering …it doesn’t only effect you….it effected me…and ….I ….I …wonder if you care at all….if I am just a fuck toy for you….and it fucks me up knowing we will never be the way we where and at the same time I am falling hard for you….you right now.  Maybe it’s not right, maybe I am taking advantage of your body and your soul….”

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    3. Yeah, I know what you mean about it being a gritty story; I think it’s the only reason why I’m not disgusted with Carmen right now. The emotional and physical aspects of the story are cranked up to eleven, so a physical reaction from Carmen is not something out of left field. You’ve stayed true to the overall feel of the story. I just wouldn’t want it to become commonplace for Carmen to lash out physically whenever she gets angry (although you’ve made it clear that it won’t), at least not in the form of a punch in the face. Anywho, I really appreciate the response, and the chapter itself (the talk between Shane and Carmen) set things straight. All in all, nothing new from me: I loved the update! :)

    4. ah! i wanted to be the first to comment. damn! lol great update! actually i was really waiting for them to talk and its turning out to be just great. shane really wanted to know whether carmen had any doubts and i have been wanting to know that too. great chapter! i hope no one dies tho *dumb grin* your loyal fan:D

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