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Love and Pride – chp 9
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LOVE AND PRIDE Chapter 9
Bette walked into the bar laughing with Helena. They were both in a good mood for different reasons. Helena was pleased that her hangover had worn off. Bette was giving Helena abuse because of the squash game they had just played.
“You freaking cheated Porter “
“Yes I did because I am the superior athlete and much fitter than you “
“Exactly – you don’t drink alcohol. That should be worth a five point start for me. God I was fitter two weeks ago and I didn’t think that was possible “
“During which time you have been drunk nearly every night and remind me again — -what time did you go to bed this morning – you and George Eliot were hard at it when I went to bed at 1am “
“4:30 “
“So you have had less than four hours sleep “
“You manage on it “
“Yes – but I sleep maybe six hours a night and brown bears take lessons from me. I run nearly every day and I swim and I go to the gym. Peabody – you are becoming a SLOB “
Bette said with a huge grin on her face.
“I think you could be right – I suppose lunch is on me as well. You will have to go to the bar because I just cannot move “
“Jackass – what do you want ? I’ll buy “
“I should say orange juice with lots of ice but I need a pint of cider. I’ll have any sandwich that doesn’t have cheese on it”
Bette handed her sports bag to Helena and went to sit in a corner where she could put her feet up and see everything that was going on. At some point she was going to have to apologise to Tina – she wanted to do it soon. She had been a prize bitch – maybe if she grovelled Tina would give her another chance — nah — that was NEVER going to happen.
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love your stories
Oh yes, fond of Ms. Lauper. Please have SOMEONE run Alice up the flagpole. I’ll stand at attention and salute! Will Tina help Bette get over her insecurities? Will Bette remember the earring?
Just love the uneasiness between Bette and Tina, reminds me of a time long ago when I was very young. Thanks for letting me feel this way again.
I love this, can I have more please.
God i love all your stories but this one has to be my all time favourite, love this Bette and tina and feel for them so much, i remember all those feelings when i first arrived at uni. you capture it so well.
Great story you are teasing us here you do know that. Look forward to the first kiss
“… you are coming out of your shell whether you like it or not. Why don’t you just try and be this woman’s friend.” … Love this idea! I mean, it’s very new for both of them, and they obviously care a lot about each other. I mean isn’t listening to sad love songs a clear symptom of falling in love? But it would be unrealistic to have them fall in each other’s arms that quickly… How about a nice slow burn where they become friends and lots of unresolved sexual tension between them. Until they finally can’t deny each other any longer! Hmmmm, sounds really good to me! Oh, and Ally, I so agree with you and Jo about not being able to do your job when your mind is constantly on fanfic! Not sure I even want a cure… Thanks dear!!!
Oh, and I’ve been VERY good… Is it Thursday yet?
And I could not get this story out of my head… I so love this story :D and yea, it’s does feel freaky if I were either Bette or Tina… but sweet at the same time :)
Good chapter. B&T need to tell each other about they feel for each other. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
sweetttttttttttttttttttt longerz
great story…thanks
Oh how sweet. This is a great story
“Pathetic lament?” I resemble that remark! ;) Loving this story, Ally!
Ally you are totally amazing. How do you have all of these stories crammed up in your brain all at the same time? They are all such great stories too! If they weren’t I wouldn’t be able to keep them separated. So glad you care to let them loose and share them here with us!
Love it, can we have “THE L WING”~~ please~~
bette has the earring still, that can break the ice…maybe they should talk? what a new concept LOL
keep writing….lol
i really like this story. I like the take where bette and helena are step sisters. It is very refreshing to read about their interactions and also helena’s protectiveness. just love it!!! thank you for taking your time to please so many people.
Who can get Bette Porter or Tina Kennard out of their heads? Definitely not me.
Ally, I changed job last week so have been a lurker lately but just had to come out and comment on how wonderful your writing is. This story has become a must read and brightens my life every time I see another post from you. The L Wing and Long and Winding Road are awesome but this new story really has enthralled me. That is down to your masterful skill with words and the brilliant pacing and plotting you employ. I adore the slow awaking in both Bette and Tina as they are experiencing feelings and emotions that neither one knows what exactly they are. It is the fear of doing the incorrect thing that is limiting their relationship. Bette and Tina need to share some more time together before one of them takes the plunge and admits what being in the other presence really is doing to them. The conversation with Helena, Shane and Bette in the union was a scream. Mmmm, Scampi Fries, hee hee hee. I do think that Bette wants to tell Helena everything about her thoughts of Tina but is worried how Helena will react to this news. It is just so tragic to think of both Bette and Tina wallowing alone as they think of one another and how best to amend the situation. Loving this tale. Thank you so much for continuing it. Your Loyal (if lurking) Fan.
Awww this is so sweet :o)) And we are very good, so please post L-wing LOL.
I’m at work… and I can’t concentrate!
i love this story so much, i hated doing the bleep test at school lol, never got past five, great chapter i can’t wait for more
Lovely!!!
I simply love this story…shoot ALL of your stories…Keep posting…I am behaving myself…I have been a good girl.
Just Great!!!! Thanks
Slow and steady wins the race so Bette should definitely be able to win Tina over eventually. Bette keeps being around the bush w/ Helena about who she is crushing on but i would think that Bette would want to know sooner rather than later if Hels would have a problem w/ her dating Tina. Waiting anxioulsy to see how this one plays out. Post soon.