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As Sure As The Sun PT 14
CH 42
How the streets they swell!
While the animals make their way through the crowds!
“You wanna tell me where we are going?”
No answer from either of them.
Roxy is mad. She is blonde, tall, and tight in all the right places, and very busty, yet very lean, very tanned, freckles decorate her body. Her eyes are the palest shade of blue I have ever seen. She has blood on her from the armed gunmen aiming at her and missing. Her face is a mask, her beauty is truly something to behold, but underneath, the veins pump blood, the cells they divide, her muscles they react, you could see the inner workings of her mind, she was very pissed off. And knowing her someone was gonna pay, but who?
Neither one answered when I asked that question. So it affords me some time to get to know Sergio. Sergio was the kind of guy who spent hours in the bathroom trying to find himself, he will pluck stray hairs, he will line his eyes more than I do, he will make sure everything has a place. He is blonde and his brown eyes the only masculine difference with his sister. His body is also tight in all the right places and he stands close to 6 feet.
I should mention that Roxy is dressed like Neve Campbell in the first scream movie; she has a white sweater on and blue jeans and dried blood for the dramatic effect. The blood on her cheek it’s real. I have seen enough blood to know the difference. Sergio turned the radio on and that old Cult song “Fire Woman” is blaring as he takes these hairpin turns that seem to lead to……
“Thank you Shane….”
“For what?”
“You saved my life….I don’t know…my men they vanished…..things like this they don’t happen to me…….”
“It’s funny that happen to me all the time…people are always trying to kill me….”
She looks at me and for one moment maybe a second of time, Roxy looks normal….vulnerable, soft…a human being…..but those eyes they flicker and you see no specs of life…no spark…..and then I know….she simply is not here…
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Oh, now that’s encouraging! I guess it’s one of those things where they’ll know it when they see it. And another thing, I couldn’t help but notice that in this chapter Shane’s adrenaline rush cooled off on its own, without her having to go do something crazy or loud to burn it off. Is it because winning a fight gives a different high than winning a race? (I would think fighting give a bigger rush since it’s something so physical, and her instinct to survive would kick in and pump her full of adrenaline.) OR is it that she’s actually not trying to be so self-destructive? (The way she looked at herself in the mirror and worried that she wouldn’t look good enough for Carmen makes me think that she realizes she needs to take care of herself. And even though this example is superficial, she realizes that her actions carry weight with someone else and she cares about that now.) OR is it that she was just so physically hurt and exhausted, more so than if she had raced? OR is it something else entirely?
I love this story… I just oooh and aaah everytime i read it. Just please let Shane and Carmen reunite with their kid. Love. Thanks for the update.
well i dont need to say much, you know i loving it, its going very well, im glad they finally met.
Although I’m extremely happy that they got to see eachother, I’m worried that they’re going to get caught. The fire/battle scene was nuts, Shane has to go through a lot of shit for the ‘gruesome twosome’. Lovin this as always.