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Just One Dance pt. II
Put the lime in the coconut and drink ‘em both together,
Put the lime in the coconut, and you’ll feel better,
Put the lime in the coconut and drink ‘em bot’ up,
Put the lime in the coconut and call me in the morning.
Bette’s eyes struggled to open as she thought, ‘I’m going to kick Alice’s ass into next week for playing with my phone…oh my God I feel like hell.’ Bette felt around on the nightstand for her cell phone and answered it without seeing who was interrupting her deep sleep.
"Hello…" Bette mumbled while fighting to stay awake.
"Bette? Is that you?"
"Oh, hi, T. Yeah it’s me. What time is it anyway?" Bette started coughing and wheezing.
"It’s 11 o’clock. Are you okay? You sound sick."
"Yeah my head feels like it’s about to explode. And here I was worried that you’d be the one to catch a cold from standing in the rain," Bette lightly laughed then started coughing again.
"That’s it. I’m coming over there…"
"T, you don’t have to…"
"I want to. I have to go get Angelica from Kit anyway. I could call ahead and order some food for us from The Planet and Angel and I could come over and take care of you."
"Really? You’d do that?"
"Bette, I know how you are. You’ll just let yourself go and try to go back to work then end up worse off than when you started getting sick."
"You have a point. Okay, I’ll go and take a relaxing bath until you and Angel get here. Thanks, T."
"You’re welcome. I better get ready so I can order the food and get to The Planet before the lunch crowd rushes in. I’ll see you in a bit."
"Bye, T."
"Bye."
Bette turned on some soft music and drew a hot bubble bath. She settled into the tub, closed her eyes, and let the frothy water and music enfold her.
So you sailed away
Into a grey sky morning
Now I’m here to stay
Love can be so boring
Nothing’s quite the same now
I just say your name now
But it’s not so bad
You’re only the best I ever had
You don’t want me back
You’re just the best I ever had
"Oh my fucking God," Bette groaned. Of all the songs that could’ve played at that moment, this was the last one Bette wanted to hear. Not only did she sit and cry over this one after Tina left her for Henry, but it also took her back to the drunken stupor she often found herself in after Tina discovered her affair with Candace.
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Lament, this is so cool. I am glad you got this one out. I am also glad that Tina admitted how she really feels to Bette even though her actions made it obvious.
Uh Lament..btw the baby should not be any where near a sick Bette :D maybe Kit can babysit they can..uh..figure things out lol. Now i have to find and listen to those songs you’ve mentioned for complete effect.
Oh snap! I had to go back and add a credit. I’m not smart enough to come up with “MaBe.” lol And curioust, the baby will survive. There I spoiled it. Angelica won’t get a cold from Bette. LOL
No problem Lament you know i love Angie and just looking out for her :D Hey I did check out those 2 songs, the Coconut song has a nice reggae tune to it and fits Alice’s quirkiness. I love the tone of Best I Ever Had, kinda melodramatic and goes well with the scene.
Now THAT’S WHAT I’M TALKING ABOUT!!!! OH YEAH TINA!!! She, when she finally get’s around to saying what’s in her heart…it is so worth it!! Thanks!!
Why the hell can’t they do this on TLW.I would like to see the both of them wet in the rain dancing & kissing.Irene needs to wake up & give the viewers what they want.
Why the hell can’t they do this on TLW.I would like to see the both of them wet in the rain dancing & kissing.Irene needs to wake up & give the viewers what they want.
Why the hell can’t they do this on TLW.I would like to see the both of them wet in the rain dancing & kissing.Irene needs to wake up & give the viewers what they want.
sorry, didn’t mean to post that 3 times,having a problem with my computer
Ugh..see now that sucks…you got me to a point where I sO wanted to see what happens between them right after that last line at the end of the chapter. The anticipation is going to have me looking for your next chapter every day…more than once…so post soon!
Oh yea! This is what I’m talking about!DO NOT STOP! You are my girl(i wish)You crazy, sexy thang you! xoxo
Perfect Lamantamini…just perfect. Keep posting….will Tina catch Bette’s cold? I know how she can…A NC-17.
Please continue and let’s hope that Bette feels the same way about Tina and something positive can happen from this.
I think they should go eat chocolate cake now thats sorted out!
Tina needed to come clean and I am so happy she did. THese two belong together! Make it happen lamentamini! Oh and make it good…..LOL!
I was a bit surprised that Tina allowed Angie near Bette. lol.. Glad that you continued this story, I like it very much. Please post soon :)
Well, there is nothing more to say, so I’ll sum it up. We love it. We want more of it. Hurry the heck back!! Oh yeah, that song is pretty darn sad…ouch! I am still laughing at your comment on the MB, which one you say? Pick one :0)!!
Did you really say, “oh snap”? I thought I was the only one to still use that term
It’s a very good thing that you continue with this story, very good done, i like that Tina is listening to her heart and more important she is showing how she feels! i listened the song and is very very good!
Great, now you’ve done it, I’m speechless…anyhow thanks Lament.
great pms
WOW!!!! JUST GREAT!!!PPS
*melting*melting* As I am a big Tibetter I loved reading this…I loovee your style, but since your reading my stories to, you could of guesst it! Maybe we should start writing together heeeyy? ;)Keep on going
Nive story! tks a lot! I can’t stand Henry and Tina, and Belena anymore… LOLPlease post again!
Great post…really delighted that your continuing with this…..So now we have to see if Tina will survive catching that cold from Bette….well close proximity can do that to ya…lol…Love this!
Best I Ever Had is my favorite song too :D And I actually wrote something to someone a few years back base on this song ;) Is there any chance that you’re or you’ll be one of the writers in TLW S4? ;)
WOW this is well written… and about damn time, Tina! Good girl! Sigh… that almost makes being up this early worth it…
I was hoping that Tina called babe to Bette since the first chapter but that corny pick-up line made the update for me!! I’ve always loved “Best I’ve ever had”, good chice!
Hey buddy, great chap!! Yay! I’ll have to agree with curioust though, not only did you have Angel near Bette, but you let the poor child place a wet kiss on… Bette’s NOSE! Was that before or after she sneezed in her face? LOL… Sorry, I’m just messing with you dear! That was really cute and I now know that you’ll let Angie be okay… Perfect chapter. Let’s see what Bette’s reaction is gonna be. Please post soon! Thanks!
Great start. Looking forward to the next chapter.
that was so sweet, T coming to nurse Bette, then fessing up that she’s still in love with the girl…way to go…more soon please
i’m glad you listened to us and continued with this story, now we need another chapter, you can’t leave it like this…post soon
That Ryan Adams’ song from the previous chapter is one of my faves. Just beautiful. It’s enough to make anyone lose their composure.
So romantic! That’s one of the quickest B & T reconciliations in history! That, of course, assumes that Bette responds in kind! This is great, Lament! You can’t leave us hanging here, so PPS!
this is great Lammie — hope you continue – great – just great
Finally Tina has said it out load, she loves BETTE. Now what to do about it? Hey Lament I hope that you will continue Milestone. I am a sucker for baby Tina and Bette. Plus I like to see a happy family accept their two daughters a lovers.
Whip o’will’s singing…Soft summer breeze…Makes me think of my baby…I left down in New Orleans…I left down in New Orleans…Magnolia, you sweet thing…You’re driving me mad…Got to get back to you, babe…You’re the best I ever had…You’re the best I ever had…
Alright let’s get on with this.
Its about time that Tina say it out load that she LOVE Bette and this is good. Cute about Angel kiss her MaBe!!!!!!
And IM in love with this story…holding my back my tears…merry Christmas to me