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Once an alpha always an alpha….right?????-2
“Well its now or never I guess, huh?”
“Yep, you know what? Why don’t I walk in with you, you know to help ease the pain or at least have someone to share it with?” Shane offered.
“That would help Shane…….that would actually help me a lot. I don’t want to walk in and breakdown in front of her. Bette has always been my strength when it comes to dealing with hard times, but now that she is hurting this bad for the first time I feel helpless. She needs me, but like I said for the first time I can’t do anything.” Kit begins to feel a few more tears stream down her face.
“Oh come on now Kit, you know I hate to see beautiful women cry…..”
Shane pulls Kit into her arms. Kit resists because she isn’t used to sharing this much of her emotions with anyone but Bette. She also knows if she hugs Shane completely that she will lose all control of her feelings and break down. Shane can also sense this in Kit and says
“Kit you don’t always have to be the strong one. I know you’re hurting and I know this is really hard for the both of you. It’s not supposed to be easy, you’re sisters and so close and when one of you hurts, you both hurt and….”
Before Shane gets a chance to finish Kit cuts her off. “Stop it Shane ok …….. just stop trying to make me feel better in this situation. Bette is in there damn near wasting away and I should’ve been there for her….. I should’ve known she was hurting this bad, I could’ve got her help, and I could’ve stayed here with her….she could’ve stayed with me, I could’ve…..”
“Kit Stop!!…” It was Shane’s turn to cut off Kit because she knew she couldn’t let Kit do this to herself any longer. Shane pulls Kit back into the embrace, this time not letting there be any kinda chance of Kit pulling away. “…..you can’t keep doing this to yourself kit. You are not doing any good for her as well as yourself if you keep beating yourself up!!!! Nobody was able to tell that Bette would have this bad of a reaction."
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(38 votes, average: 3.37 out of 5)
wow baby another great one. I told you you were a great writer so please keep going with this but please don’t let our girl die ok
Wow! Very well done! Thanks!
I wondered where dis story went!very interesting!PPS!B will live right?
Wow!!!!
Mysti…here’s the ultimatium…I will not even pick up the pen to write a single word for alphas unless you at least get four more chapters out of this, do you hear me? That means if you want a sequel you better start writing…oh and by the way….Bette BETTER NOT DIE!!!! (or else I’ll hook her up with Henry understand?) heheheheh OK this was a powerful chapter..and although I understand Alice’s need to want ot connect with Dana and keep connecting I think it would have been tacky if the two of them would have doen something in Bette’s house while Bette is in soo much pain…ok…so get to writing and posting!
This is sad, yet some people needs something to live for and Bette needs Angie. thanks
I am still amazed that you had Shane (the smallest of them all) bust the door in. I like your writing…I feel Bette’s pain. When you love hard and lose then you fall hard. It’s sad that she took this as an option. Please let her friends be there for her so she can be better. I think Tina needs to see what her actions have done to someone she once called her “first last and forever” Keep posting.-always a fan
Alice and Dana have so much fun together! I like your take on the day Dana ALMOST died much more than IC’s!
wow…..i’ve been reading right, and so far i like this story, but lets all hope that bette does not die mentally or physically, it would’nt be the same without her……love shane comming to the rescue though, post soon
Mysty, Mysty… Excellent chapter…I was truly upset and disturbed by Bette’s wanting to erase herself. Please don’t keep us in limbo for too long…Did anyone call 911 yet?
holy cow more myst more
Awesome, Mysti! Please don’t give Pands a reason to exercise her ultimatum. Wow…that was powerful!
What can I say girl, don’t know how you do it to write those feelings so vivid and alive. Could really feel Kit’s despair and Shane’s consoling arms while she was probably breaking down inside too. Had goosebumps allover after reading Dana getting in cardiac arrest and only returning after she felt the deep love of Alice. And I really loved it when the spaghetti incident occurred and lightened up the mood at bit. The pictures…I’m not gonna say anything about the pictures, unless when you can’t stand yourself, you don’t want to have any of them around, never. You did a mighty job here, thanks.
whoa!!! excellent stuff Mysti!! can’t wait for the next one!! thanks for deciding to post this and continue, I’m loving it!
Wow, this is some great writing mysty…you took me through some emothions with this one…I liked that it was unexpected and that all the characters were in it…and Dana lives! Yay! I think it’s brilliant…write soon! :) Thanks!
ya, wow! pls keep going… thanks for the post!
This chapter was really intense, I loved it… Poor Bette =( please don’t let her die… Oh and I love Dana and Alice, they are so funny.. Thanks!