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    Just One Dance pt. III

    Story written on October 15, 2006 by Lamentamini.
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    Bette/Tina – “Monday, Monday”

    Bette was blown away by Tina’s admission. She had a feeling that Tina might still love her, but she had no idea that Tina was still IN love with her. Bette’s eyes filled with tears and in no way did she try to stop them from running down her face. Bette took Tina’s hand, which was still placed upon her lips, into her own and gently kissed her fingers and palm. She started to bring Tina to her for a warm embrace, but she quickly had to let go and reach for a tissue to catch her sneeze.

    Tina had to fight a giggle that was slowly trying to slip past her lips. She was winning the battle until Bette finished wiping her nose then looked at her with those big brown puppy dog eyes as if to say, ‘I’m sorry for ruining our beautiful moment.’ Tina then released the giggle while Bette narrowed her eyes and pretended to be annoyed. Bette’s mock annoyance didn’t last long and she too began to giggle, then let loose a full-on laugh. Both of their laughing escalated as they fell over on the couch holding their stomachs. Tina had been worried what Bette may say or do, but this burst of mirth brought forth from a simple sneeze let her know that everything would be alright.

    "Sorry about that, T," Bette laughed while wiping tears from her eyes. "I guess make-up sex is out of the question, huh?"

    "Um, yeah," Tina said while trying to get a grip on her laughter. "I love you, but I really don’t want to increase the risk of catching that cold from you."

    Both women grew silent, just taking a moment to gaze at each other. Finally Tina spoke, "So does that mean…you feel the same way?"

    Bette gently smiled and said, "I thought I made that pretty clear last night. Oh, and you almost calling me ‘babe’ didn’t get by me." Bette winked and Tina blushed.

    "Yeah," Tina admitted. "Old habits die hard. But it doesn’t have to be an old habit now." Tina took Bette’s hand and brought Bette to her. She took Bette into her arms and stroked her hair. "We’ve already talked everything out so there’s no need to rehash anything. We already know how we fucked up and what not to do in a relationship. I believe we can make this work. Do you want that…babe?"

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    2. I love these two, even though they leave hurt people in their wake, and I’m glad to see Tina cross the finish like, that much is FOR SURE. NC-17 next or not, I love it.

    3. NC-17 are extremely worth the read but so is the story that leads up to that point. This story gave me that warm and fuzzy feeling that I crave. It also shows that true love can win at some point in one’s life (just let me know when that happens for me, okay).

    5. The NC-17 is coming (or is it cumming?). lol I just have an idea for before that. Or hell it might be the next chapter. It all depends on where my mind takes me. :)

    6. First! Ok ..Now can they do it please!No more waiting Lament. Hey I luv your writing and this story is one of my favs, so keep it coming. NC17..NC17..NC17

    10. Lament, this story is so awesome. Brilliantly written with a great capacity of compassion. There is always someone who gets hurt, I feel pity for Henry, he really is a great guy. Awaiting you next chapter with eagerness

    11. I’m glad you didn’t vilify Henry. He has to be somewhat of a decent guy for Tina to have been with him. I’m glad you decided to continue with this fic. I haven’t had a chance to read milestones, but that is next on my fanfic agenda :). Thanks Lament.

    13. Hey there! I agree that it’s cool that you made it a decent breakup. Most writers have this tendency to turn the guy (Henry or Eric) into an asshole, which can sometimes be true, but is often exagerated… I actually fell for Henry, which is totally normal in that case, and I’m glad you showed him as a decent guy. We too often get the impression that when Tina is not with Bette, she’s with a total dumbass! I like the idea that Tina could be with an awesome guy but voluntarily chooses to go back to the love of her life, you know what I mean? (A bit like Seahurst’s seashell story with this guy, Dave). And again, i think that speaks for you as a writer AND as a person. Thanks! K.

    14. By the way, I don’t mean to offend other writers… I LOVE that Bette rescues or pulls Tina out of a fucked up relationship with a jerk. As a matter of fact, if I was to write a B/T beginning, I think i would probably tend to do the same…;) I just like that it’s not always the case…

    15. ” She was tired of being wishy-washy and knew she needed to be firm in her decisions. Tina Kennard was ready to reclaim herself. ” Yeah! (And wouldn’t LH and the rest of us be thrilled if IC would write -this- Tina into the S4 scripts!)

    17. I’m glad she ended it…but is this the last of Henry? I mean Tina’s not gonna find out she is pregnant is she? Glad this Henry wasn’t a jerk. Hope Bette and Tina can reconnect soon.

    19. Great chapter, Lament! I agree that Henry was a sweet guy on the show–just caught in a rebound situation that never really works out. He did do some dumb things, but don’t we all? Anyway, I’m glad these two are going to work it out, and I’d love to see an NC17, but I’ll trust your judgment as to the proper timing! Even though she ended it, doesn’t Tina deserve some time to mourn? I sure hope she’s not pregnant with his child! Continue both stories soon, please?!?!?!!?!!!!!!!

    21. Beautiful execution of life, in written form. The ones we leave don’t always have to be ogres they can be, and often are, great people. We are all pieces in this awesome puzzle of life; each having a purpose, but not necessarily fitting into one another. You have shown that here perfectly!

    24. ‘ She’s amazing. She has shoulder-length blond hair, killer legs, and a sweet smile. She’s everything I’ve always wanted in a woman.”Thats pretty shallow… I wouldnt have expected that LOL as you see Im catching up!

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