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Bette Porter speaking. Oh hey there. How are you? I miss you guys too. I know I haven’t been hanging out at the Planet much, but I hope to change that soon. I have hired an assistant to take over some of my responsibilities. Once I have trained her properly, my time will be freed up a lot. I am looking forward to having one of our family get togethers.
Huh? Tina and I? Oh yeah, things are going really well. Wait a minute now, don’t you think that is a little personal. Alright, you ARE my sister. Tina and I have been in some intensive therapy working on our relationship. Things are getting better between us. No, we still have not been intimate, but it will come. No, why would you say that? No, I don’t think she is having an affair, I mean I don’t know but I don’t think so. Why would I? She’s done nothing to make me think that she has gone outside of our relationship. I trust her. Yeah, I guess you never know, but I am not going to focus on that until I have a reason to. You know that I don’t like to discuss my relationship with Tina. You are my best friend, Kit, that’s why I have talked to you as much as I have, but this is personal and we need to sort this out for ourselves. Nobody can fix this relationship except for me and Tina. Now can we stop talking about this. Thank you.
So tell me, What is going on with you? How is the business going? You know, Kit, I am so proud of you and I am really happy for you. Hey, I’m sorry I gotta run; Tina is calling me. I will give you a yell later on this evening. Talk to you later. Bye.
Yes, Tina?
I’m sorry, I didn’t know that you were on the phone.
That’s ok. What’s up, Sweets?
Babe, I have to talk to you. I’d like to say something.
Sure, of course. Go ahead Tina.
I need you to listen to me all the way through before you respond. Just hear me out, ok.
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Sorry to see you ens this. We really need a follow up to see it thing do work out as Tina and Bette hope for thanks
What???? You’re ending it? Say it ain’t so…at least Bette didn’t say I’ll wait for you forever (I say that because she’ll be waiting on someone that wasn’t COMPLETELY honest with her) I hope Tina finds herself and I hope you find your way back to us with this story…and any other brilliant pieces you decide to write. Thanks
…NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you can’t leave it like that! I do agree that Tina needs individual help, but a sequel would be great. Please? You know you can’t stay away forever. It’s just not possible.
well, at least we have hopes for a sequel, i hope tina will come home soon and they can work things out…was tina talking to candace?
Well, I didn’t expect it to end like this, really. You should do a sequel/floow-up/epilogue or something. And I never thought it would be Tina that’d tell Bette about the affair. I thought it’d be whoever she was talking to about it on the phone. Anyhow, thanks and post again down the line when you can. cheers
I think Tina should take that secret with her to the grave, and threaten to kill her confidant if she ever tells. Thanks for the story. Sorry you had to end it here!
There just gotta be a sequel even thorough I am struggle w/wether I want Bette with someone who is not honest. This was the perfect time!!! She was leaving anywhere. Please to sequel. PS-I do want them together. Happy and Honest.
to follow up skyc’s thought… Say its not so, dearest moho! You fill us with woe, if you should go!
I DO think Tina needs to find herself, and yes, it probably is more likely to happen away from someone as strong as Bette, but I hope to see you come back with more from them, because no matter how they part, it still hurts…
I have to be honest. I really, really love this story but this ending is not very satisfying. I know that it is your choice but I hope you’ll consider a sequel to bring this story to resolution. I just don’t believe that they can split permanently considering their wonderful life and the people involved. Tina should not tell Bette about her dalliances unless she never wants to be with Bette again. That would be a blow from which this Bette could not recover.
Great, great story. I think the ending is perfect, makes us readers have to really think about what happens next. My own thoughts are that Tina’s confidant was Kit. I believe Kit would never tell Bette, because she knows it would hurt her and/or did not want to break Tina’s confidence, but she also was dropping hints so that maybe Bette would figure it out on her own. I also believe Tina will tell Bette in the future , after she works on herself through therapy. I really hope you do a sequel!