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    As Sure As The Sun PT 16

    Story written on October 18, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=62903
    Author Notes:

    “A person becomes so entrenched in their assignment that everything for them is a twisted rush. A way to self destruct. A desperate way to make it all stop.”

    As Sure As The Sun PT 16

     

     

     

     

     

     

    CH 47

     

     

     

     

     

    If only tonight we could sleep
    In a bed made of flowers
    If only tonight we could fall
    In a deathless spell

    If only tonight we could slide
    Into deep black water
    And breathe
    And breathe…

    Then an angel would come
    With burning eyes like stars
    And bury us deep
    In his velvet arms

    And the rain would cry
    As our faces slipped away
    And the rain would cry

    Don’t let it end…

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    If only tonight I could sleep. But I can’t. I pace the floor searching for ways in my head to get out of this place. They were doing it again. Keeping me from her in their own special way. It was in the air. The particles of truth. It was in the water, liquid honesty. It was in my bones, in my skull. Messages, visions things to come. I was losing it. It happens. A person becomes so entrenched in their assignment that everything for them is a twisted rush. A way to self destruct. A desperate way to make it all stop.

     

     

    All of this is static in my head. Noise. This is some kind of punishment I realized with a zeal of a inmate. Carmen took Helena away from her mother and we have been paying for it ever since. I need a way out. This is necessary. My life is feeding on life and none of it makes sense. What can I do? How can I break this? There must be a way?

     

     

    What are we doing tonight? It seems like all these two do is fuck and party and waste time.  Knowing them we where going to some party. Some lame, fake glimpse into false pleasure, ok I need to get a grip. Have to think. Have to come up with a plan. Had to think, why are we doing this?

     

     

    Because some things don’t make sense. Control, our moves, like puppeteer strings. Threats of past crimes and denial of access to what was rightfully ours. I need a fucking smoke. So I take a walk. And I feel the heat of the tail Roxy has on me. Maybe I can force it out of him? I duck a corner and the guy keeps walking. But his head broke a little to his right when he hears my boots on the pavement behind him. I crack him in the back of his head and call it in. Three minutes later me and Mr. fucking dumb ass are heading toward Carmen. I needed to see her bad …..

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    1. Is it really over now…unbelievable… I’ve honestly never read a better story than this one. It has it all, it’s perfect. If I got to decide, this story wouldn’t have an ending and I could never get tired of it. You’re amazing, I can’t understand how someone can come up with so many twists and turns and such an amazing storyline. Keep writing, please keep writing, something, anything, cause you know how to do it!! Now I’m gonna start reading it again from the very beginning…

    2. I almost don’t want to comment because that actually means this story is over. What can I say? I love this story, and I’ve been reading it since the beginning, I hate to see it end, but I love to see it end happily. I can only hope that we see a lot more from you soon! Amazing. Just amazing.

    3. Damn . . . ~wipes tear~ . . . Now that’s a story . . . great fuckin’ job, Baby-girl. You gotta’ make like a sequel or start another story like NOW!!! Anyways, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!

    4. The story ended! I would never had guessed the ending… I have been following this story from the very first day you posted it, and I loved every minute of it. I enjoyed it so much that sometimes I feel pain just because Shane feels pain, and I feel anger when Carmen feels anger. Thank you for this wonderful wonderful story. And I hope that this will be made into a real movie. With Kate and Sarah as the lead!

    7. i didnt know how i was going to let go of this story but man this was amazing! it was crazy a roller coaster ride right from The Line Begins to Blur until this. the ending was great, its sad that one ur greatest story has come to an end but the great part is that your writing is still coming and im glad we have Grey Hotel for that matter. your writing is wonderful, it takes you places, ;) iv always been a fan, plz dont stop writing and im sure alot of people want you to continue, Absolutely love your work! and congratulations this story was Perfect!

    9. Wow! I can’t beleive this story is over. It truly is one of the best stories I have ever read and if there is more to come that would be great! I am so glad they got their happy ending!

    10. noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i havent read it but why is it over !?!!?this was one of my favorites stories. no slash that my favorite story…. enyway a love this story im very sad this is over. i know im going to cry when i reed it because the last time you ended the story with Carmen dead i cried for weeks so yea youre great keep righting other stories… well im going to read now byeeeee

    11. OMG i finish’t it… so good, i love ittt so cute….yes i cried lol fuck i’m sad its over …… shit i’m going to miss coming here lookng for an update to that storie

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