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The L Wing chp 117
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The L WING – Chapter 117
Narration of Tina Kennard
Alice is sitting on the sofa when I walk into Shane’s office. I talk to Shane for a
few minutes before she goes out to talk to Carmen about Homeland Security.
“How’s the shoulder ? “ I ask Alice.
“Its okay “ she says in a tone that someone who had lost a limb would find excessively pitiful
“It’s only got a band aid on it “ I tell her “ and the Oscars are not for another three months “
“It hurts – I think its gone septic “
“Well if that had happened in the field in Afghanistan we might have considered amputation “ I retort.
Alice pulls a face “ Okay Ms Hero Kennard – you’ve made your point. But it hurts “
“Delayed shock – you should be at home. Do you want me to get someone to drive you home. I’d do it but there would be four agents with me if I did “
“To an empty apartment ? – I’d rather be here “
“Want some painkilling juice ? “ I get up and pour two vodka’s
“It might kill the pain “ she agrees and accepts a glass from me.
I sit in Shane’s seat and look at Alice for a few minutes – I am just deciding how to bring up the subject – “ shall we compare scores on the Senator ? “ . But her comment has left me thinking of something else
“I hated coming home to an empty apartment “
“Well now you go home to a huge apartment and your devoted girlfriend “ the devoted is sarcastic.
I am about to respond when Paula – head of Bette’s detail comes in
“Can you both remain here please – security shutdown. The West Wing has been crashed “
“Is Bette alright ? “
“She is in with Senator Peabody “ Paula tells me in a deadpan tone. I raise my eyebrows in response “Will you two be okay ?”
“Less likely to kill each other than Bette and Helena “ I reply. Especially given that Bette is less than pleased with Helena and looking forward to giving it to her with both barrels. I wonder for a few minutes if this has been engineered by Bette. Paula nods at me and leaves.
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I know that Alice tend to say whats on her mind, and that has brought her in a lot of trouble. But maybe if someone broke under her skull and actually asked her.. maybe there is a reason for this that isnt just jelousy, remember what Kit said that one time, Alice does go home to an empty apartment every night, while everybody else has someone. LOVE your writing, you keep me on edge and light up my day that is filled with homesickness :D lol
you go Tina and kick Alice’s ass!!! That was a great chapter… post soon please!! – I can’t wait to read Bette and Peebrain’s conversation…
Wow ally you can really write the kick butt conversations – this was awesome and a little bit unnerving that Alice could be so mean and not have a clue.
I was wondering today if we’d get an update on this soon. I figured it would’ve been Bette/Helena but this was just as explosive!
i can’t wait to the shut down part 2! the talk between B&H isn’t it? this was a very good talk, and i am glad that Tina did it great! i hope Alice consider her attitude and be nicer with Tina
Great dialogues, you’re a real master. I still like Alice a lot, she’s so loyal to Bette. Looking forward to your tomorrow post ;)
Alice could stand some therapy. And a little bit in the way of guts. Go ask Dana out, already! God! Is Alice looking for ways for nothing to happen? But what I really want to know about is the end of Bette’s conversation with Helena.
Oh, and for all you Brits: when Ally says ‘band aid’, she means a plaster.
great
WOW Ally, what a explosive chapter, I loved it. But I still can’t understand Alice, whats her game??…..maybe I’m just too tired right now LOL. Looking forward to Part 2 with the lovely Prez and Snake Peabody!!!! Post soon…
the tina in this story is the biggest fucking bitch on earth, both her bette are, they are so outlandishly selfish and up themselves and involved in their own lives and walking over everyone else because they think they’re superior….i guess they are passive aggressive and a bit obnoxious in the show, but these ones take it to a new level….
Assrai, you seem to be forgetting a cogent fact here: Bette & Tina ARE superiors here. These aren’t simply a gang of friends in this story, here the setting is a work place. Guess who the bosses are?
Ooops, my bad asrai. Not my first typo.
“I have been too busy pulling the knives out of my back that you have been stabbing me with — sorry Alice “This is great!
Alice in this is a bit stupid and more than a little bit self-involved. Tina should have whipped her tail and let the devil take care of the rest. In short, in this one Alice is a fool. She has risked everything by acting an ASS. Bette should send her packing and let her find someplace else that she would enjoy working.
Great chapter! That last line was definitely reminiscent of The West Wing episode when Jed says something pretty similar to that. Post again soon.
Thanks for posting…to me that conversation seemed too friendly. I know Tina dosen’t still have feelings for Helena but clearly she needed to REALLY tell Alice how she felt. Alice knew who Tina was but Tina didn’t know who Alice was…that screams that she had some kind of agenda. Who cares if Alice goes home to an empty apartment at night…now we can see why. I don’t like her in this story…I wouldn’t be surprised if she ended up betraying Bette. Now on to Bette & Helena’s conversation…I will pop some popcorn and keep one eye on the story posts and the other eye on this baseball game.
Well I noticed that no one answered your question for the special Ally points—so if I may make a guess could this be what you are talking about–“Can you both remain here please – security shutdown. The West Wing has been crashed.” I really liked the way Tina baited Alice hooked her and then reeled her in. I can’t wait to see the confrontation between Bette and Helena, because I am sure that Bette will make the way Tina handled Alice look like the calm before the storm.
alice has a lot of grudge against tina…maybe she’s also in love with bette and that’s why she’s acting like that LOL…anyway, tina rocks
I can understand being protective of a good friend. I can understand protecting them with your life…but I cannot understand this Alice. This Alice isn’t protecting Bette, she is mean-spirited, revengeful, spiteful, and I would say jealous as hell. Personally, I think it is time for her to move on with her life…somewhere outside of the West Wing. Thanks Ally!
Why can’t Tina be like this on the show?
For some reason, I still like Alice. I loved the conversation between her and Tina. I hope it’s not too late for them to reach common ground. She’s really only acting out of jealousy. Bring on the conversation between Bette and Helena!
Very intense. Sometimes we say things and do things without thinking and then there is a real mess. Very hard to clean up.
Wow that was awsome and drama!!!!!
Hey Ally, Am back to comment after a litlle while lurking. Funny how life takes you away from the things you love. Anywho! Way to go Tina. Loved her rant at Alice. It is about time that these gals had it out. All cards on the table coz then they can move on. Tina was brilliant as she calmly defended her position and let Alice know that she is in it for the long haul. AS ever your words stream perfectly and create a magical picture with all the politicing goning on. Astounding. More please, Your Loyal (if lurking) Fan.
Ally this was awesome. I know that Tina was showing A LOT of restraint here, because if they were in a different place, I’m sure Tina would have opened up a can of “whoop ass” on Alice. Now I can’t help but feel that Alice has really screwed herself here. Tina has a full agenda against Alice now. And Bette won’t have to be told anything, she is a very intelligent woman and she can read Tina even when Tina doesn’t want to be read. All I can do is shake my head at Alice and understand fully why she goes home to an empty apartment every night. Great post Ally – can’t wait for Bette and Helena’s conversation!
Alice needs to get a grip! Thanks for the post Ally
Holy wow, Ally! That was one helluva conversation! great writing. Alice really seems to be in a messed up state. You go Tina!
That was the GREATEST Ally; I love Tina is your story..she is so gutsy and sexy…hanging out to hear Helena & Bette’s convo!!!PPS
As for the homage to the west wing I picked up on two biggies. of course there is the lockdown of the west wing when Wil and Toby were stuck together in Toby’s office and then there was the last reference which is what Bartlet said to his republican opposition (blanking on the name here) when they met in the hallway duirng that opera/play that they were both attending in NYC. I believe he said something stupid like “guns well i don’t know….”. Anyway, thanks for another great chapter. I’m worried for Alice though; is she going to have any friends left in the West Wing after Tina is done w/ her. What the hell is Omega Dana???