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Love and Pride chp 11
LOVE AND PRIDE Chp 11
Helena had come back from Manchester on a real high after spending the day with Bette in Manchester shopping and having a really good sisterly time. Away from the campus they had talked about Boston and their parents – both spoke to their parent once a week.
The night before Peggy had rung and when she had asked about Bette her daughter had been able to tell her that she really was being to make her first tentative steps out of the nest.
Helena had spoken about the race and that Bette was very slowly beginning to make friends. “Whatever it takes to support her you must do it Helena – she is a lovely girl who just needs a gentle push now and again — she cares very deeply for you so please take your responsibilities to her seriously “
Helena was beginning to wonder who the mystery woman was – she knew that there were some real predators on campus and she wanted to know that the potential girlfriend of her sister was going to treat her right.
When they got back from their trip Helena announced that she was going onto campus to see Shane and Alice.
“Think I’ll come with you “ Bette said looking up from her book
“What ? You are going to come into a bar ?”
“No – I want to go to the library and research a couple of things – it should be really quiet in there “
“Yes because everyone is in the bar “
“Helena – I don’t like alcohol – I don’t like the taste and being in a room of pissed
people is only fun when you are pissed as well “
“Have you tried spirits ? “
“Helena – just drop it will you – you go to the bar and hang out with Shane and I’ll go to the library “
“So we’re taking two cars “
“Why ? “
“Well the library closes at 10 – the bar doesn’t close until 10:30 “
“I’ll wait for you in the car – actually I haven’t picked my post up for a few days.
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I can’t enough of this tentative Bette and Tina—they are so cute. They each really care about the other, but are afraid to let the other know how they feel. Great chapter, my friend.
Yeh! I love this story. Will Helena find out before or after they do the deed?
this is going to be sooooooo slow LOL
yey, thanks so much for writing more! looove this story so much!
Thank you so much for posting. I love this story and the atmostphere you have created between Bette and Tina. I look forward to your next post.
I love this story. So glad you posted. Bette seems so vulnerable here, Tina please look after her!
They are getting closer to the dating scene. Can’t wait to read about the reaction of the others to the fact that they are going out together.
It’s nice to see Bette opening up to Tina.
Were dying here, someone make the move, just a kiss please.
Perfect!… Simply perfect!!! I’m back after a 4-days trip away, go to the site, see that you posted your 3 stories, and go to L&P first, what do you think that means?…;) I love the slow building, this is so sweet, I hope they soon realise it’s not just a crush and that they are falling in love… Then, I trust you to make it very angsty and romantic and intense! Hmmmm, thanks a lot, Ally dear!
They are so cute and sweet. Come on Ally let one of them make a move and let see they frist kiss. OK post soon please, thanks!
bring it on Ally…i’m on the edge of my seat waiting for that 1st hot kiss and more!!!
Great story! Thanks for writing!
Somebody is a posting fool this morning! I am very appreciative. And thanks Em, for providing toast for Ally this morning. She must keep up her stamina…for writing. Loved this Ally!
“good mood this is the first of three chapters.” May you always be in a good mood ;-)
How long will coffee and hugs sustain Bette and Tina? How long will toast sustain Ally and Emily? I think something more substantial will soon be required in both cases.
I’ve been waiting for this story for the whole week :D Thank you for posting this… :D and I really can’t wait for them to get together.
If it only takes burnt toast to put you in a good mood and for you to post a lot then I would be happy to make you either an All-American or full-on English breakfast, your choice. LOL. Whatever floats your boat.
Love the slow burn… but who will bite the bullet and make the first move – seems to me, they are both quaking in their boots! LOL
I’m loving this slow burn ally. Keep the chapters coming and keep the romance building b/w Bette and Tina.
Great chapter Ally! We dont mind tiny steps of progress as long as its progress! LOL!
My god, I just love this couple. They are still so naïve, it catapults me back in time. Thanks.
Slow burn away! Looking forward to finding out the name of the band.
Awww they’re so sweet together – I wonder who will take the first step and how it will happen….I’m looking forward to read it :o))