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    Pretty Women, episode 8

    Story written on October 22, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    The morning after… ‘So Bette, what do you do?’ A classical take on a TiBette beginning, based on the movie ‘Pretty Woman’

    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot Bette and Tina, staring at eachother while the passionate pace of their fingers increases in velocity untill contraction of a powerfull climax hit them and they grab a hold of one another…

     

     

     

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette, who’s in the shower, water and soap making her golden skin shine even brighter #

     

     

    The song’There’s something about the way you look tonight’by Elton John starts playing.

     

     

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    Pretty Women, Episode 8

     

    Waves of ease washed over Tina as she slumbered on the bed, feeling more relaxed then she had in years.

     

    Bette made her way out of the shower, succesfully pushing away most thoughts that wanted so desparetly to enter her mind, but unable to avoid the emotions that ran through her veins. The gorgeous brunette felt a shiver run up and down her spine as she felt how her knees nearly gave up on her as she dried herself. The climax she and Tina had experienced had been more then amazing. And although every fiber of the galery-owners body had told her to stay and hold the blonde who confused her so, her heart and mind combined, quivering with fear and something she did not wish to determine further, had told her not to.

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    1. Gosh, I was just thinking about this fic. I was so glad to see it and read it. I was wonderful, short however, but wonderful. Please let them kiss soon, and figure out how they going to get together and help Tina reunite with her child. Great JOB!!! Please Post SOON!!!!!!

    2. You are amazing!! I don’t know how you do it, but in the way that you write, I can actually feel all the emotions going on between the characters! I LOVE IT!! You have a gift JLBT! Please continue this story soon!

    4. There wasn’t too much dialogue. =) I can’t remember what my last comment was, but these days I need a mix of dialogue and narration. Excellent chapter. Glad to have you back! *huggles*

    6. So glad to see your back and with as much umph in your story as ever. Glad to see your post and hoping you won’t keep us waiting for another great chapter.

    8. welcome back…i’m really enjoying this, especially the way you use B&T story with the pretty woman story, it all fits and makes it much better

    12. I’ve been waiting and waiting and waiting oh so patiently for you post more chapters in this great rewrite of pretty woman with the two prettiest women ever. I’m glad that you are breathing life into the romance that is B&T and you are doing it so very very well. More please.

    14. Jeej! you’re back! well, I know you were back since Friday but I just catched up with your stories. Will small talk do for them? hum! liked the we both screw people for money, they can start from that.

    15. They are both gonners and they don’t even know it yet. Your story has so much emotion. But I will always wonder, like in the original movie, in the long run, will Bette be truly able to think of Tina any other way or as an equal? Will Tina ever feel good enough for Bette?

    16. Wow, I felt like I had a front row seat to this encounter. They both have gotten under the others skin. Can’t wait to see what chapter 9 brings to us.

    17. Wow amazing and emotions, they both can’t follow the rule they already make and guards that protect their heart is already down but they didn’t know to handle it and hope they will find a way to talk and tell each other how they feel for each other. OK post soon please, thanks!

    18. this one was an amazing one, Bette is triying to be kind but she is so afraid to do it and Tina well she has her rules but i hope she overstep that rules. With the last comment for Tina i think that the next will be as intense as this. Take care and welcome welcome back! i am so hapyy to read again your goods stories!

    19. I’m so glad you’re back, I’ve really missed you, but you already know that. I think, no I know that this was your best post to date, you totally nailed it and I loved it!!!! Post as soon as possible and remember not to work to much :o))

    20. Wow…I loved this chapter…so many emotions. Awesome…they both are so on the defensive I say let the guards down and feel…go with the feeling. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    23. JLBT… wow… my heart sped up, wrenched, skipped a beat, warmed up while reading this chapter… i just so love your stories… how they provoke the feelings that I usually don’t allow myself to feel in front of people ;) Aww… I’ve missed you so much too my friend… and life without your stories, I guess it’s like you without the Internet ;) And how can I end ‘Blind’ when you just got the Internet back ;)

    26. You did it again girl, you touched me, gave me goosebumps, even let me shed a tear with this one. You gave us 3 pages and still I long for more, much more. You’ve beautifully painted out the feelings persons have who for the first time, fall in love. You show us how deep those feelings are and also the turmoil that occurs when you realize you can’t controle those feelings. Weer een meesterwerkje van jouw hand, ik kan je er alleen maar voor bedanken en hopen dat ik niet te lang moet wachten op het vervolg.

    27. YAY! You’re back! And you’re brilliant, as always! Try as they might, somehow, I don’t think they’ll be able to resist each other for long… well, maybe a while, but not forever-long. :)

    29. Ohhh yeah baby – we both screw people for money….love the last linie. Ohh this is goooooooood, jesus I want more of this story – you have to post soon

    30. Okay Mom, this chapter is living proof of what I was telling you yesterday! How can you believe that we may get sick of the slow burn?… I (we) wouldn’t have it any other way!!! I can’t believe what a fabulous job you’re doing with this version of the original movie… It’s all there, but a 1000 times better! And i just want to point out that it’s really interesting to have you explore the relationship the other way around, I mean, sex first and then feelings (even though feelings were probably there first). And what a fabulous line: “It was as if lightning met thunder when those two souls connected through their respective windows. Two things that are as different as day and night, but also belong together as a law of nature.” A perfect summary of the journey you’re taking us on! Thanks J!

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