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Pick-up Styx – 11
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Pick-up Styx
Bette tries to surprise Barbara
chapter 11
New England – near Barbara’s house – about 11:00 a.m.
As Bette approached the cut off to Barbara’s house, her body tingled with more and more excitement and apprehension.
She was scheduled for an art education convention in New England next week but came several days early in hopes of surprising Barbara. The Senator’s office had said she was in New England for the weekend, but Bette didn’t even know if she would be at the house. Her cell phone was going immediately to voice mail so Bette couldn’t contact her directly. And Bette was beginning to get nervous about the “surprise” factor.
Since Bette returned to LA two months ago they had managed to spend three long weekends together, two in Chicago and one in Dallas. They had also talked on the phone frequently and emailed. They had not talked about their relationship or the future. But Bette had thought about her every day and not just sexually. When she read an interesting book or article, she wanted to talk to Barbara about it. When she saw a beautiful flower, she wanted to show it to Barbara. When she came home from work, she wanted to share the day’s successes and failures with the Senator.
Bette took the turn-off and drove slowly up to the house. By the time she stopped in the drive, her heart was in her throat. She took a deep breath and walked to the front door.
She rang the bell and then waited. When no one came to the door, she rang again.
“Hello,” said the young woman who opened the door.
Bette looked at a tall, beautiful young woman, bare-footed and wearing a robe. Her hair was very attractive, but still had the look of being mussed up from sleep.
“Uh,” said Bette uncertainly, “is Senator Grisham here?”
“No, she left early this morning and I don’t know when she’ll be back,” the woman said pleasantly.
She knew that the Senator would be back within the hour, but didn’t want to tell this to the stranger at the front door.
“Would you like to leave your name and phone number,” she asked graciously.
“Oh, no, no, that’s fine. I just took a chance by stopping by. Nothing special.”
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It is difficulty for me to read and enjoy anything that does not entel Bette and Tina, but I am enjoying thist. I thought the Senator will cool and if Bette had to be with someone why not her. WAY
Hit enter to soon. As I was saying WAY better than Helena!!
This is dandy!
yay ur back i love dana in this story
I adore this story…thank you.
LMFAO! I totally cracked up at them cracking skulls. Clara Barton for the win! And, could I pleeeeeeeeeeease have Cinda? Pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*
And here I was wondering when you’d post another chapter. Always a most enjoyable surprise. Pity about the skull cracking. Last time I did anything like that, it was 8th grade gym. I got a concussion, the other girl got her glasses broken right down the middle. No sex with either Jennifer Beals or Dana Delaney to take the sting out of it though. Which is probably OK as they would have been little girls at the time. I’ve got my standards.
Now is it just me or did some paragraphs not make it to the party?
Black eye and cuts- one would think they were fighting instead of rushing to embrace each other. Cinda is a sweetheart. PPS!
My face went from frown to smile in like 0 to 60 when this first started out…lol. I was like who is this chick at the door. Will Bette go to LA with this black eye? What will the gang say? Keep posting…love it! I mean I am a Tibetter so it’s okay I guess.
I’m so glad that was Barbara’s daughter and not a lover–I would have been so disappointed! Two Alphas cracking heads–no one wanted to submit! lol The not being in love and the not feeling love are very hadr, but I think you’re fixing that! B&T forever in my heart, but for this fic, BarBette!
GREAT just wonderful and super and sexy and lovely – hope this is clear – I’m loving this story.
I love this story. It is definitely one of my alltime faves. I jst love this pairing and I am a huge TiBetter but the way you write them is superb. The only improvement is if you could post more often. LOL. I hope your health is improving.
LOL at the alphas banging heads!!!
My heart totally fell too at the thought that Barbara had someone else…HURRAY it wasn’t true!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story…the tenderness, the shared intellect, the humor, the love…..all superbly written..this is excellent pancha!!!!
I think I have said this before but I love this story! I hope you are doing well.
I REALLY like this match up. They seem so natural together. And I love how thoughtful you write it. Very very nice.
Great story, thanks for posting. I can’t help but to be curious about Bette’s relationship, or interactions with Tina, now that Angelica in back in the picture…please update soon.
as always this was excellent. your writing and the way you describe is just fantastic. thanks.
Ahh love it!!!!!!!
have to admit, I was glad when Bette first thought Cinda was the young lover because then there’d be room in her head for Tina again so was disappointed but I adore DD so I’ll put up…now what happened to the end of the post, I’m a bit confused about the Barbara-talk…u best post soon to clear that up ok???
I think the Barbara talk is Bette explaining loosing Tina’s Love. Post soon to clear this up.
It wasn’t bc Bette and Tina didn’t end up together that I didn’t like After Loving you, it was bc you didn’t get Bette and Senator Grisham (I’ll say it again in the comment for the last chapter).
I so love this story. I hope Bette and the Sentor can be happy together. Thank you PPS
Love your writing, p, always so good to see a post from you. : )
Love it. Thank you