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Masked Feelings CH 58 Nightmares
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Alice was the first to wake. She didn’t sleep much because of Dana. The moaning, not to mention her rolling around kept her up most of the night. Right now her body was sprawled out all over the entire bed with her arm draped across Alice’s chest. It was nights like this that made sleeping with Dana hell. Now that Alice knew Dana was going to be okay, she planned to leave early and get to the house before Bette and Tina got up. One thing she didn’t need was a lecture or more words of advise. If Alice was going to try to form some kind of relationship with Dana again, she wanted it to be with as little interference as possible.
Alice wasn’t sure how Dana was going to react when she woke up. She wasn’t even sure if she’d remember that she was here. One thing was for sure, Alice wanted her to know that she cared. She slid Dana’s arm off her chest and quietly got out of bed. Dana was bound to have a major hangover when she woke, so Alice went to the medicine cabinet and got out a bottle of tylenol. She filled a water glass and took two pills out of the bottle. Next, she scribbled a note and placed it on the nightstand with the water and the pills. It was hard to walk out without saying goodbye, but she needed to hurry back to the house. With any luck, Dana would call her when she was feeling up to it.
Alice covered Dana up with the blanket that she used and walked out of the bedroom. She grabbed her purse and keys as she walked to the front door, shutting it quietly behind her. Dana rolled over, still asleep… softly mumbling Alice’s name.
When Alice got back to Bette and Tina’s, she picked up the newspaper off the sidewalk and unlocked the door. She was in the house only a few seconds before Bette walked into the livingroom.
Bette – Did I just see you outside?
Alice – Yep, went out to get the paper.
Bette – In your pajamas?
Alice – It’s not like I went across town like this. I only had to go a few feet to get it.
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Another flawless chapter, great to see Danish making some big time progress. I’m glad that you had Alice at least acknowledge that she needs to tell Dana about the Roxy situation. I think that Sharon actually talked a little sense into Dana every though she says some close minded things lol I was wondering whether or not Dana and Roxy passed each other while going to see Alice. I love to hate Roxy and I can understand the obsession, but it’s definitely going to get our villian in some big trouble with Alice and the Family. So Alice gave it up on the first date tsk tsk Alice lol You must wait till the 3rd date before action. The lovin was steamy steamy hot so I’ll forgive Alice for giving it up. Amazing chapter babe I can’t wait to read the halloween chapter and possible read Alice’s turn. Love you
Wow – another brilliant chapter in a fantastic story – can’t wait for Halloween!!
i was surprised when i saw ur post. i actually thought u were holding out on us until halloween, lol. anyways this was a great chapter. that dream sequence was creepy. dana w/ dead, hollow eyes…*shivers* you just had to bring back lara on this chapter didn’t u? just to set us up for the anniversary chappy. man, u brought back a lot of the major players: bobby, tony, lara, roxy (not really), and the mystery guy(?). this is going to be one hell of a ride b4 the shit hits the fan. and yes, i would love it if u dedicated the hellish chapter to me ^ – ^. it’s great that dana and alice are going to date again. how is alice going to explain to dana that she has to work w/ roxy again to find lara’s body? i can’t wait for the halloween chapter. btw, of course i’m ready for more fun brteyes style. i love this story!
Like CD said FLAWLESS, so many things are right in this chapter. Alice leaving Dana in the morning, Sharon coming by for a talk with her daughter! Nice to see that she can still see Alice as Dana’s partner. An Roxy..oh Roxy, I really do get why Alice is so taken by her but it pisses me off! Oh and the talk between Dana and Alice….I want to date you!! YAY…but you have so much more in store I can just feel it. Looking forward to thanksgiving, even if we don’t celebrate this holiday over here! Like I told you I’m re-reading and now it’s so obvious this story has grown so much over the year, your writing keeps getting better and better which each chapter. Please keep going I’m always so happy when I can read another update. Oh one last thing, the NC-17 stuff…hot hot hot, I wonder who inspires that! See ya (next week fingers crossed)
Wow all those paths you took me down in this chapter have left me exhausted! lol. Glad there was no big deal with the “next morning”…simplicity is sometimes good. Alices nightmare, whoh..it seems to me in her subconscious mind that she still feels traumatized over Lara, guilty over her actions with Roxy and helpless with insecurities over Dana. Another good insight!! The people who love to forward the damn e-mails made me really chuckle.. i get those all the time and, oh how they do drive me insane lol. Dana needs to dig for more info on Roxy? it could be very interesting! I dont feel uneasy about Alice and Roxy working together… it may determine how in control of her actions Alice really is!! She does need to tell Dana though. I would have liked to see Danish explore dating lots more and connecting as a couple on that level properly again before any sex.. patience,patience tut tut, lol. Oooh the halloween chapter is nearly upon us! A feeling of unease, maybe being watched, rustling in the bushes, things being moved, theres some ideas?… i cant wait!! Hmm curious is good, it encourages you to use your imagination… something you seem very capable of? So i will leave it like that for now!! Keep going, you know i love it!
how did i miss your last update??? where was i? lucky me though because i had a lot of good reading thanks to you last night. both updates were super rad! i really like that alice is handling herself a little better these days. it’s nice to see her utilizing her spine. i do wish she’d told dana about lara’s body, though i can see why she didn’t. really isn’t the bomb you wanna drop right before you are about to get down and dirty. i’m glad alice was able to keep it out of her mind, because i can’t seem to get it out of mine and keep waiting for lara to jump out of a closet, pop up from the backseat of the mini, walk into the planet with a bomb strapped to her chest… you know, the usual manic type thing. and anytime you need a kick in a a**, a proofreader, sounding board, another twisted mind to help out just say the word!
yay! great update! thanks for making my horrible day end with a great danish fix!
Let’s see how long they can keep this a secret, and how long it takes for Roxy to get in the way and piss Dana off again. I hope it isn’t right before Dana goes to see Alison. Please don’t let Dana sleep with her again…
This is great and just geting better and better and I am sure that lara will pop up soon as I think that it was her brother that had roxy back off with that film he give her please post soon great update I love it
WOW!!!! What a turn on, lol. I knew the sex scene would be brillant. You got me me again:-) I especially liked the fact when Alice told Dana that she’s a naughty girl, lol. This chapter was, as you said, longer than the other, and even more captivating. The fact that Roxy wants to collaborate with Alice makes me scream, lol. But yeah, we know that Al learned from her mistakes, that’s what I hope anyway. Please don’t let Roxy call Alice when they have earth-shattering sex, lol. That would be devastating. And Lara is still alive, at least I hope so. Perhaps not only Dana was the only one who used violence against Roxy but maybe Alice follows Dana with that example when Lara should reappear:-) After that she won’t need any therapy at all, lol. I feel sorry for Dana having a mother that exhausts her even more than a tennis match, lol. Poor Dana:-) So Roxy has a big secret??? Hmmm, I can’t figure out what it could be. Perhaps she’s not from this world? lol Man, you got me thinking all day and night:-) Can’t wait to find out! Now, what about Dana and Allie? Will sparkles fly in that “relationship”? I think, Allie will be disappointed when Dana tells her she’s dating Alice again. But as for Allie, there are enough fishes in the sea. Roxy would fit, lol. Then everybody is content:-) But I fear what will come next. I can’t never tell which direction this story will take. I’m so happy you plan the next installment on Halloween. I hope, I’m awake at this time, lol. I was so glad to see that you made it before Wednesday. THANK YOU!!! You saved my day:-) As for Halloween: what kind of costumes will they all wear? I thought it through a little and my idea would be this. Alice goes as an innocent fairy, Dana embodies Superwoman best, lol and Roxy should go as a hobbit, lol. Maybe Lara will show up in that installment? Than she has to wear the costume of the death. That would fit her perfect. If that’s too creepy, you might to think about Norman Bates minus the shower, lol. You’re gorgeous, lady:-) Please keep going on writing. I really appreciate your adorable work. Kiss for that, lol
Good Stuff! Looking FWD to Halloween, especially what thier costumes will be…Also I like the not telling friends part…can make it alot of fun, sneaking around etc etc…
Well I’m certainly pleased to hear that someone lives for my amusement. It warms that pebble in my chest I call a heart! So you want to know not only my weaknesses, but my strengths as well. I’ll cheat a little on this one … I have a serious weakness for dirty fanfic. As for strengths … I have staying power like you wouldn’t believe ;-> I have a rubber ducky collection (currently at 17) and I’m obsessed with anything blue camouflauge. Now for the business at hand …. that was a wonderful update … it had a bit of everything in it. I don’t like this whole Alice working with Roxy thing or the fact that she didn’t tell Dana straight out. I know you live for angst … but at least have Alice actually learn from her lessons & not create another mess for herself. The date was freakin’ cute though. As for Halloween … you best believe I will not forget about you or the NC-17 update that I will be expecting!
First of all, you earn a 3rd OMFG. You just keep them cumming (I know, sooooo lame, but after all the seriousness I had to go through this week Ijust needed to get that out of my system ;)). But I can feel the worst is yet to come. Like wittybanter said, you brought all the ‘old’ character back and a big explosion can’t be avoided.And She is alive…Lara is still alive! Although I do think that Alice and Roxy can come up with a lot of answers, it’s totally going against Dana’s ‘rules’ for dating Alice. Everybody assumes that Dana will let Allison go. But will she? She’s still driving up there, isn’t she? Will she be faithful to Alice herself? And please warn me when I need to run and hide. I can start the whole reading-while-peeking-through-my fingers-thing again. I haven’t done that in a while. Oh btw, I totally forgot to tell you wehre you could find that Danish music vid (to Niclekback’s Far away): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBLjwoI3aeU. Can’t wait for the Halloween chapter!! :D
Alice’s dream was very interesting, on some level she apparently thinks or fear that Dana still loves Lara and that Roxy might be the one for her.Interesting Alice sort of side-steped that fact that just agreed to work with Roxy to Dana by telling Dana she is not dating Roxy but not mentioned that they would be seeing each other since they are working together and will be meeting to share information. I wonder if Alice intended to mislead Dana about being around Roxy because she wanted to agree to Dana’s terms or does she really thinks seeing Roxy is not the same as working and meeting her. Either way Dana is not going to be happy.