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You (Part the Seventh)
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Alice couldn’t help but laugh when Janice showed up again that morning. She figured she was over Dana to the point where she could clean up after herself again, but hey, if Helena was going to keep paying for it, she wasn’t about to turn it down. She nodded in the maid’s general direction as she walked out to get the mail, genuinely happy for the first time in months. Sure, she was worried about Dana’s surgery, and the fact that she’d basically groped her best friend in the living room at 4am right after having sex with a vampire was more than a little weird…but she wasn’t too worried about it. Dana was in good hands, and would call when it was over. And Uta was supposed to call later, so in Alice’s admittedly biased opinion, things were looking up on her end.
She was all smiles as she got back to the apartment, where Janice was in the middle of sweeping. Alice made a mental note to tell Helena that the maid, while capable, failed to sweep under the rugs, going around them instead. Not that she wanted Helena to say anything, exactly, but she figured she should mental-note it anyway. This was until she moved to the hall mirror, looking at the bite marks Uta’d left for like the fifth time since she’d been home. “Oh my God, what happened to you?” Janice asked, sounding seriously concerned. It was pretty cute, so Alice just grinned.
“I dunno, but I think I may have just been released from my mortal coils,” she said happily, realizing even as she did so that she probably looked and sounded crazier now than she had on all the pills. Finally noticing Foamcore Dana across the room, where Janice had moved her in an attempt to clean, Alice decided it was finally time to say goodbye to the immensely flattened version of her friend. She asked Janice to get rid of it before practically skipping back to her room, finally expressing the jubilation about the date that she’d been holding in for the nonflattened version of Dana’s sake.
Across town, that same 3-D Dana was mopey as hell and taking it out on her girlfriend as she got her stuff together for the hospital. Lara was being her usual sweet self, trying to keep from showing her frustration, but as Dana went on victimizing herself she couldn’t help but glare at her. Feeling like shit about it but not knowing how to explain or apologize, Dana just leaned into Lara’s hug and let herself be held as she cried.
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Great update. Very touching and emotional. You did a marvelous job portraying the charaters and staying true to form. You had me on a bit of an emotional rollercoaster today. I was laughing at Alice for the vampire thing, and the fire extinguisher scene. I’ve always loved that scene. It makes me crack up every time. Then I was sad and happy all at the same time for the Dana/Lara talk. Then I was sad everytime that Alice was crying. Then…I was was left with a small, satisfied smile at the end, with the AlShaDane. I’m so happy that Dana has so much support. I hoping she can pull through. Great job. I really enjoyed reading it. You ate Danish. Hehe…you made me giggle. I don’t usually giggle. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait for more.
Sexcellent update! Ditto to all the comments here, this was wonderfully written, and again, I love your take on how particularly Dana, Lara and Alice are taking and perceiving everything as it plays out. Tough on everyone, emotion-wise, and you put it together so smoothly. Looking forward to more! Keep it up!
This is me just getting into all these fanfics and I have to say I love yours Keep it coming pls
What can I say…This totally rocks…Seamless…Keep it up! This is great! You have a true talent!
CLAPPING !!!!! I was touched,i do feel sorry for lara tho! You stillamaze me muted(nodding)!! You are doing such a awsome job at writing this!! 7 more months!! PPS
Amazing job. Really. I think I have a permanent smile etched on my face now after reading this. I loved it. Especially the last part with AlShaDana. Can’t wait for the next update.
Okay, so in my defense I just left a very thoughtful comment that seems to have diappeared into the ether…and of course am now pressed of time. Great update…nothing choppy about it. Best of all, true to the characters and the bonds they have, even though I never accepted the premise of the breakup. Really looking forward to your next.
i know where you are coming from with this chappy. i think the way you have handled the situation with the cancer is amazing, the emotions were there… i too have been in a situation like this.. where someone i knew was in danas position.. unfortunatly the dana storyline on the L word mimicked life. b ut yeh i just wanna let you know you are doing terrific
ok so…I haven’t left a comment yet, but that doesn’t mean I haven’t been reading…it just means I am bad about leaving comments. lol. Ask Sammy. haha. So anyways my fellow member of The Magic CL(o)(o)set…well the fuck done. Keep it up and do me a favor…change the end of season? You know you wanna. lol. PPS