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Love and Pride chp 12
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LOVE AND PRIDE Chapter 12
Bette left Tina’s room at 10:40 and ran up the spine of the campus fearing that she would be late for meeting Helena. She reached the car and was not surprised to find that her sister hadn’t shown up yet.
She got in and turned the heating on and found a radio station. She had realised that night that her feeling for the blonde could not be ignored anymore.
At some point she was going to ask Tina on a date and if Tina refused Bette didn’t know what she would do. But there was a big hurdle to overcome before she asked Tina out — she had to tell Helena. It would be wrong not to be up front with her sister and whatever the consequence was – she would accept it.
Helena turned up at 11
“Sorry I’m late “
“Its okay “
“Been here since 10:30 ?”
“No – I was talking to someone “
“Good – it was a riot in the bar. Alice wasn’t getting served by Frank — god what a miserable git he is. We were in Flyde bar by then – anyway Alice starts saying how she is going to lead a campaign on the radio to make him wear a pink shirt and a bowtie. He banned her — he came across — took our drinks off us and banned us. He is a freaking riot “
“So you had a good time ?”
“Hell yes – we went up to Furness and bumped into Lara and Dana which made Alice all tongue tied and stupid “
Bette started the car and was soon heading back to town. Bette was thinking about Tina – she couldn’t stop.
“We need to talk Helena “
“What’s up ? “
“The woman that I’ve met — I really am developing feelings for her Hel”
“You’ve been with her tonight ? “ Helena spoke kindly
“Yes “
“Which was why you wanted to come onto campus tonight ?“
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Brilliant chapter look forward to the date & the first kiss, bring it on soon
Happy Birthday! We should be giving you gifts on your birthday not the other way around. I hope you have a good one and thank you for stories and emails.
great
It was nice to see Helena behave with kindness and generosity towards her “sister” and I really hope she’ll have the character to back up her good intentions. Now let’s get past this G rating business and get down to the real nitty gritty. Helena’s right, Bette should take it easy with Tina. Doesn’t mean that Tina will be in any mood to take it easy with the delectable Bette. Well, maybe just at first. I still want them to sit at the back of the theatre, if you know what I mean.
I can picture Bette and Helena w/ their hot chocolate and brushing each others hair and talking about their crushes, hopes and dreams—-what a sweet visual you’ve painted of the sisterly bond that has developed b/w Bette and Helena. So great, the secret is out and Helena has given Bette her blessing. Now Bette just has to ak the big question of Tina. And just how much money do Bette and HelenA HAVE TUCKED AWAy in each of the their trust funds??? Post soon ally. You know I’m glued to this story and the L Wing of course.
bette is so freaking shy LOL i love it…i hope it will work out…and find helena some nice girl, maybe dylan, so she won’t think of tina anymore
Kword worded it so perfectly…so I will piggy back on that comment and raise you a happy b-day. Thank you for taking the time to post.
Happy Happy Happy day of your birth – our lucky day because we get to have your awesome stories as part of our world – such fun !! Thanks I hope writing is as enjoyable as reading. Cheers!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALLY AND WISH YOU THE BEST. Damn love the sisters relationship of Bette and Helena, they are awesome. Now let see more, thanks!
Great writing as always Ally. may i be the first to wish you happy birthday — its the meaning of lifer age right ? You really don’t look it – never seen you looking as good as you do at the moment. have a great day with your new woman x
AND I LOVE YOU FOR POSTING 2X. is it your birthday 4 real??? if so, happy happy birthday…
Hey you! Is it your birthday today?… Okay, about this chap: SIMPLY PERFECT!!! It was definitely not easy to tackle the telling Helena issue, and you did it perfectly! As expected, she was very supportive to her sister that she loves very much, and she put all selfish feelings aside. On the other hand, you describe perfectly how she feels inside and the hard time she’s having and will be having seeing Bette with Tina at first. Like Helena, we all know that she’ll get over it in due time. What I really appreciated is how you described Helena’s feelings about Tina… There is a crushed ego, there is attraction, there is definitely a deceived crush, but not love or deep feelings there, and Helena being a player, this is exactly what I was expecting. I so buy it, and I think you did a fabulous job. We totally buy and feel for Helena’s inner struggle and thus appreciate even more her approach of the situation. She’s being such a wonderful sister to Bette, and I also appreciate her inward analysis of the situation (how she messed up her chance and then met Bette who is so better suited for her). You showed us a very interesting dimension of Helena’s personality, and make me like her very very much. I hope lots of great things are coming her way! Thank you my dear, and again, you just proved with this tricky chapter what an amazing writer you are! BRAVO!
Many happy returns! Read you later-some of us have to work, you know.
Ooo.. Birthday? Happy Birthday!! And I can’t wait for the next chap when Bette’s asking Tina out ;)
Well if its your b-day, Oh happy day! I luv this story. Thanks for the update
Yes — it is the anniversary of my birth — 42 today. thank you for your good wishes — and thank you Anna for busting me. i will deal with you later
This may be the one Hel/Bette relationship I Like. Love the story
Happy Birthday Day to you, Happy Birthday Day to you, Happy Birthday Dear Ally, Happy Birthday to you!! Hey my friend I bet you never had anyone type that song to you before! LOL!!! This chapter had me sitting on the edge of my seat. I was actually a little afraid to see Bette tell Helena about Tina and what her reaction would be. But I was very relieved when Helena gave Bette her blessing on dating Tina. I just loved the part where Helena was helping Bette with the visualisation on asking Tina out. That was just so damn cute and I can see that actually happening. Have a great Birthday my dear friend!
Happy Birthday to Ally!… such a generous person… to celebrate her big day she gives us presents!
Oh yeah, Happy Birthday
two today huh? you spoil us…..I like that Bette and Tina are both virgins in this story, and I am also glad Helena is being the supportive sister. she could have easily gotten upset that bette was seeing tina behind her back. It could have been awkward if she came to tina’s with flowers and bette was there! anywho, keep up the great work.
Bette and Helena are great and sweet together, but not as amazing as B&T are going to be I’m sure :o)) Post soon please….I’m really looking forward to Friday.
Wow, what a great gift for us when it’s your birthday…Best wishes!!!
Ditto on the birthday stuff. Sorry, not very original at the moment. lol And a BIIIIIIIIIIIIG ditto to Kword75’s comment. Nervous Bette is so cute.
I love this “Belena” story. I knew Helena would be supportive. She does need to apologize to Tina and clear the way for these two to be together
Happy Birthday!! I really miss playing Badminton. It was my favorite way to earn PE credit in College… Enjoyed the chapter, enjoy your birthday!
Happy Birthday, Love this chapter. shows a different side of Helena. thanks
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALLY!!!!!! Great as aways. Thank you
Happy B’day Ally! May your life be filled with happiness. That was a great chapter. Loved the interaction between Bette n Helena. Really glad that Helena decided to be supportive of the relationship! Thanks for the two chapters today.